Life, Death and Tumble Weed

life, death and tumbleweed

I have never encountered tumbleweed
in all of its restless rolling glory
never really thought about it
until just now.

if you ask me why now
my mind would appear 
as a new page
filled with potential
but all unformed

brown dried skeletal lace
at the mercy
of every wind that blows
crackling scraping

it was once green
leafed and filled with life
rooted into the soil
beneath passing cloud
the motions of sun and moon

in death it moves
with thin fragile beauty
free.

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Date: 10/12/2017 8:16:00 PM
"in death it moves with thin fragile beauty free." Really like this line. This poem is an allegory. Strong figurative meaning here. Thanks for sharing..............peace!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/12/2017 10:08:00 PM
Richard thank you for your comment.
Date: 10/12/2017 8:09:00 AM
You describe it very well..
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/12/2017 3:32:00 PM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 10/12/2017 7:28:00 AM
Somebody finally wrote it! Wonderful! Love it :) xomo!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 10/12/2017 4:10:00 PM
I've marveled tumbleweed forever, "finally" your poem has captured that awe.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/12/2017 3:29:00 PM
Hi kiddo what's up buttercup. That is an enigmatic response and it is driving me nuts (not far to go of course). Wrote "it"? Thanks for the puzzle and comment.
Date: 10/12/2017 6:12:00 AM
Your poem made me smile...The memory of the green leaf is there, but that of the fragile beauty is yet to appear...Have a lovely day Patricia
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/12/2017 3:21:00 PM
I am happy to have made you smile. Thank you for letting me know and thank you for reading my poem.
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