Best Take A Hit Poems


Fear the Addiction

Weed is my name
Causing depression is my game
I can turn a super model into a whore
A millionaire poor
A classy lady trash
Now smoke me till I'm ash

I ruin your bank accounts
Break up perfect families / causing missery and pain
I don't really care about the hurt you go through
I'm just here to use you and mentally destroy you
You once were beautiful...liked for your looks
But your no longer welcome...your reminded of a dirty crook
I can turn an average teen...into a needy feind
A single mother...into a broken lover

Break me up and smoke me
Enhaul me and love me
Never put me down and i'll never let you down
I'm a silent killer
A silent addicter
I'm called different names because I bring certain pains and play vicious games
I attack your lungs...and you still don't learn none

I can have you thinking I'm here to help you
Make you feel a way...Cocain-Crystal Meth- and Heroin can't
Smoke me...i'll kill you
Roll me... then sale me
I'm here to destroy your dreams
I'm here to ruin your relationships
I am a crime and can help you become a prisinor in your own mind
I love the wormth of lips rapped around my tip
As you enhaul a deadly spell
I'm mentally unstable and physically unable to be seen as a bad thing
Mentally I make you crave
Physically I make you misbehave

Now take a HIT
And become an ADDICT
© Reality .  Create an image from this poem.

One Night Stand

90 down the expressway and I’m handling this stick 
I am the true definition of a ride or die chick

Changing lanes, swerving in and out of traffic
Head in your lap, and I’m working my magic

Doing things to you that you’ll never forget
I thought I told you from the start that I’m an exhibitionist

You can take me anywhere, I don’t care who sees
Say you want it now and I will fall to my knees

I don’t care who’s watching, I hope they enjoy the show
Mind blowing sex like this, they will never know

The original Mrs. Nasty, Janet stole that name
I enjoy it nice and slow, but I thrive off the pain

Take a hit of me, and I’ll control your mind
Believe me when I tell you, I am one of a kind

I don’t want your money; keep your diamonds and pearls
Not a gold digger, a money sniffer, I’m not a material girl
I just need a Mandingo warrior who can rock my world

I am not the quiet type. I’ll loudly scream and shout.
I dont want to make love, just tryin' to get my back blown out

I don’t want to be your baby’s momma; you can keep the baby carriage
I’m not trying to lock you down; I don’t want your hand in marriage

This is just a booty call, a sexual relationship
Please don’t get too clingy, I don’t want your commitment

I might call you Papi, when I need a helping hand
Or I may not call you at all. This was just a one night stand

My Enemy

I walk in frustrated. My mind is full of anger
but I don't know who I'm mad at.
I just wanna yell but I hold it in
And take it out on those that don't deserve it.
Then the light flicks on and off
As if I'm in a ring. 
I keep yelling "show yourself!"
But I get no response. 
I feel an evil tension coming towards me 
As I take a hit to the jaw.
I keep swinging and throwing blows
But I'm getting no where. 
I keep yelling "who are you"
Then I take two to the chest and one to the gut...
I fall on my knees trying to hide my pain
Asking myself "who is this that's hurting me?"
A light comes, I looked up
And I seen myself.....

Premium Member Purveyors of Disruption

The winds of chaos run amok
To cause my soul to stress
As those about the Evening News
Delight at my distress.

These purveyors of disruption
Rot the world from within.
They fornicate their tired rubbish...
Finding glee in every sin.

We're they shunned by friends and family?
Did their psyche take a hit?
We're they picked last for indoor soccer?
Did their puppy up and quit?

I'm at a loss for explanation
Why they cheer the coming storm...
Twisting now the flesh of sainted truth
To keep their masters warm.

Do I dare to dream a simple dream
Knowing a little love is all they need.
But until they change... such heinous ways...
They'll get no love from me.

                The End

Premium Member The Abyss

Hurled into the desert by a beatnik pilot and dropped off just above nirvana.  I find myself in a peculiar yet remarkable position.  I am now alone.  I look out above the high sierras and find a moonbeam shooting down on the valley below me.  I follow it down and realize it is not a guiding light but that of a 747 landing at LAX.  I am up here with the coyotes and jackrabbits.  Equal prey once I get hungry.  I have a canteen full of gin and a beretta 32 caliber pistol.  No directions no map.  Who cares?  The other thing I have is a tin full of sardines and 4 joints of some primo sativa.
I begin to wander towards the city wondering what I will find on my way down.  I crank up a joint and take a hit of gin.  Another night in city for me, its just a few miles down through the valley.  I’ve been here before.  Messed up on crank.  They keep telling me I must survive.  And I keep asking them what is it that I must survive?  This ain’t no homeward bound trip.  I slip into between rocks of billionaire’s homes hoping not to set off the security systems.  When I get to the bottom will they pick me up or have they dropped me off for the last time?
I change my mind.  I head the other direction.  Away from L.A. trekking towards the desert and maybe home.  At least there I have a chance of a new beginning.  There is nothing left for me back there.  I stumble and fall but I get up and keep going.  There is something and somebody there for me.  I just need to keep moving.
Sometime around dawn I awake from an alcohol and drug induced stupor.  I think of heading back to L.A. it would be so much easier.  Then a car passes and I stick out my thumb and she stops.
“Hey where you heading?”
“Anywhere but here,” I reply.
“Hop in I am headed for Santa Fe.”
“Sounds good to me”
“You like the Grateful Dead,” she asks?”
“Hell yeah I got some conscious bud here.”
“Cool”
And the road begins to wind to our future.

Never Say Goodbye

It was the day you left 
my world fell apart 
lets go back to the day 
before you walked away 
you was going off about something 
but I thought it was nothing 
I told you i never kissed her 
when will you ever learn 
That it was never my fault (never my fault) 
This isn't how i wanted it (its going wrong) 
All grownup but cant take a hit (living a lie) 
Loves not the only thing (hate is next) 
But i could never sing (caught in a lie) 
you never backed me up enough 
you though it was a bluff. 
I'm on this mountain, you and I. 
This was you last goodbye 
so now i'm sitting here 
thinking of suicide (suicide lies within darkness) 
Maybe I should die 
you love was just a lie 
now your gone like a suicide 
deep inside where nasty putrescence resides 
these razor blades are cold (like frostbite) 
Dead on the floor; 
So lifeless, so still, so sold 
I drink this whiskey 
Passing out again; 
why don't u miss me (you never loved me) 
you said that you loved me 
I wasted my time; 
cause you didn't as I see. 
Sudden noises wake me up 
i grab the whiskey and a cup 
what happened to that day at the mall 
i remember it all 
i no its not just in my head 
that day we first kissed 
i was nervous and missed 
yet your heart was calm (this whiskeys dry in my palm) 
everything blew up in my palm 
i just got back up 
that day in the rain 
i had everything to gain 
but instead of being cool 
i lost everything like a fool (I tripped over these stones) 
So hard and hollow 
My life is over 
but this time i'm really sober 
i grabbed the gun 
i put it to my head, oh what fun 
you ran through the door 
i through it to the floor 
i start freaking out 
what is this all about 
you said you was sorry 
and that you was a fool ( you looked just like a kid) 
I looked int you eyes 
i said never say goodbye 
you looked at me (the blood inside me poured) 
I saw that it shall be 
forever you and me 
That's when i never say goodbye!

Name: Patrick Nonnemacher (this is the story of me and my girlfriend)

Catch My Meaning

Where my words fit into place.
It's as if, you were the book, 
my missing pages needed. 
Everything I was meant to write 
filtered in phases, and once 
I reached my deeper meaning, 
my words combined with you. 
Fused like man's first step on the moon, 
an unforgettable osmosis.  
You consumed, digested, 
then reformed my words a new. 
Wonder what nutritional value I am for you? 
Possible  being addicted 
without being misconstrued. 
I want to take a hit and crash magnificently 
in your rearview and anatomy.  
Autonomy but influenced without a doubt by you. 
My version of drunk in love causes arraignments. 
I was rebirthed via you. 
Don't think it wrong I call you mama
in moments when I work hard 
to hear you say daddy 
given the incidents I've witnessed you do
we deserve a little guidance counseling.  
Found something greater than Magna Carta, 
Rosetta or a father figure for you.  
Found a place where my word
 and world come together and
 that is a rare find since your heart 
is my world and the deeper meaning 
of my word originated with you.
 I stay consumed with you. 
It's like photosynthesis, evaporation 
and the alphabet, 
it all begins and ends with you.
© Ts Lewis  Create an image from this poem.

Gut Feeling

Now as I look up I catch myself, i revert my attention and I raise that man out the gutter, Oh he loves this, kinda feels familar, feels solid, Definately noticed before I left what my respect What? Sir i always give it first, try that man test him hard in a devils hell, he past them, threw me a pass, Miranda's, be my destination, gradual i give him my back, stab that dagger I still take a hit, Matters much, becuz everyman deserves his shot, 1700 hrs at the distance of latticework, branch breaker devastating on a branch dividian, swift well strong too, oh well i be a man eating ninjas the powers here area mysteries, christened chisels chosen for chips that fly chopped suey, copycat that cc cc, density left handed pulled the lever and said sTori's in better melodies,
and story's left unsaid said spoke Mandy's please Im pissing offf the managment, Chrissy damn well slip into a ****ing a man speaking serious now, Champs too, and who the **** is she? trying chances in a chandas challenge, falling behind well u silent, thinking i could never say more till i say less, as I pledge my blood on theses streets forever, I cant seem simpleminded in your head im a new hate, im raw thug talk no baby im beating demons better careflight these pussies, and there right b4 me, is the main presentation. I switch my flow and i spoke in Satin, condolences there I see the hurt in my family eyes, Dealt a challengen man, felt the weight of the actual burden is very heavy,
Very scary if u never ignored lasers dots, On the mic creating Jaxwax my product recomends to refuse a haters offer

How It Went Down

A decade of growth and decadent boom 
People didn't mention the debt elephant in the room
It was the charge of the bull
Many pockets were full
The search for a higher return was the motivational pull. 

But whilst stocks and shares rocked and flared
Investors held their breath in shock and fear
They seemed to forget that markets go up and markets go down
Because as long as uncertainty shows up, the cycle goes round

But to be fair the times were good, and returns seemed sure
The earnings of many corporations, continued to soar
The zeitgeist was the age of prosperity, profit and greed
It wasn't the time to question sustainability or question the need

Many financial advisers advised that it was the right way to go
"You should take advantage now, while all these rates of interest are low"
So many consumers took out mortgages, that they just couldn't afford
Including the 'sub prime', with bad credit, and of course the poor

But let's not forget, that the consumer went along, and played ball
Creatures of habit responding to the mating call, that beckoned us all
Deposits levels came down, loan-to-value went up
House prices bubbled and brimmed and we all drank from the cup.

Now the banks merged all of these mortgages together in lumps
Sold them as safe bets to investors, who were taken for chumps
Then the US housing market crashed
Now comes the the consequences
Unsurprisingly mortgage repayments started to slump

So called safe investments soon became worthless as junk
Families who had homes repossessed now facing the funk
Securitisation of mortgages now seemed so dumb
Regulators appeared powerless, dozing and numb

Lehman Brothers collapsed. America sneezed
The world became infected. Financial markets siezed
Governments and Central Banks now stepped into the fray
To prop up a system, that should have been reconfigured that day

Many banks were bailed; too big to fail. 
The bankers who were at the wheel, too big to jail.
The humble tax payer was forced to post the cash
And many years later many banks still owe this cash

So the world was saved but here's the 'but'
The pubic purse was utilised, to escape the rut 
Now all society must pay the price; take a hit to the gut
And suffer the pain, of historic public services cuts. 

Mike Concise © 2015
www.mikeconcise.com

Never Say Goodbye

It was the day you left 
my world fell apart 
lets go back to the day 
before you walked away 
you was going off about something 
but I thought it was nothing 
I told you i never kissed her 
when will you ever learn 
That it was never my fault (never my fault) 
This isn't how i wanted it (its going wrong) 
All grownup but cant take a hit (living a lie) 
Loves not the only thing (hate is next) 
But i could never sing (caught in a lie) 
you never backed me up enough 
you though it was a bluff. 
I'm on this mountain, you and I. 
This was you last goodbye 
so now i'm sitting here 
thinking of suicide (suicide lies within darkness) 
Maybe I should die 
you love was just a lie 
now your gone like a suicide 
deep inside where nasty putrescence resides 
these razor blades are cold (like frostbite) 
Dead on the floor; 
So lifeless, so still, so sold 
I drink this whiskey 
Passing out again; 
why don't u miss me (you never loved me) 
you said that you loved me 
I wasted my time; 
cause you didn't as I see. 
Sudden noises wake me up 
i grab the whiskey and a cup 
what happened to that day at the mall 
i remember it all 
i no its not just in my head 
that day we first kissed 
i was nervous and missed 
yet your heart was calm (this whiskeys dry in my palm) 
everything blew up in my palm 
i just got back up 
that day in the rain 
i had everything to gain 
but instead of being cool 
i lost everything like a fool (I tripped over these stones) 
So hard and hollow 
My life is over 
but this time i'm really sober 
i grabbed the gun 
i put it to my head, oh what fun 
you ran through the door 
i through it to the floor 
i start freaking out 
what is this all about 
you said you was sorry 
and that you was a fool ( you looked just like a kid) 
I looked int you eyes 
i said never say goodbye 
you looked at me (the blood inside me poured) 
I saw that it shall be 
forever you and me 
That's when i never say goodbye!

Premium Member Catch Them Dice

stop telling me, trying to persuade me
that you won’t do what you do no more ‘cause
the first time left me blind, but now I see
it is what it is, you was what you was
the games the same men and boys like they toys
where you from a project slum taught you s---
tomorrow brought sorrow and little joy
what’s your point light the joint and take a hit
a change of mind can sure mess your mind up
fools and lies can be a futhamucka’
I brought all my bad habits and my cup
call your mother and tell her you love her
your sip and flip make me want to holler
cut the bulls--- and loan me five dollars
© Ricky Muse  Create an image from this poem.

Junkie For Love

I believe in love like a junkie believe in drugs
I take a hit of passion then compassion fills my lungs
Injections of affection and I.V.s of blessins
So high i'll paint pink the dept. of corrections
My heart then pumps understanding I become less demanding
I sweat out pain and regret and develop respect
And throughout this scenario I let jealousy go,
then trust began to flow,anger lost its hold,
self confidence rose,my mind then clicked on reload,
negative was disposed,eyes shed tears of control,
cause my system was whole,
now leroy cant mess with me and my glow

Pipe Dream

Up goes the smoke
As I light up this
Piece of a dream
N0----
As I smoke up this dream
To later awaken to the reality
It's all a BIG mistake!
And while I have this glass pipe in my mouth,
I finally
I slowly
Kill myself as I die
Spending every damn dime
On a little white rock
Call cocaine 
My lady
My *****
My god!
So there
I said what was on my mind
And said loud enough
For the world damn world
Can hear me good
And I just can't stop
I can't stop!

If dreams was a race horse
I would bet you every time
And every time I
Would loose every bet placed.
I'll even loose my mind
If it takes me there
Then I would had a hell of a trip
So that I can come back
To tell you my story.

Hit me again
Light it once more!
I wanna take a hit
On my glass pipe
Sucking it like never before
Cause I don't give a damn
I just wanna feel good
And ease that pain inside of me.
The white lady got me hooked
High as a kite
And on top of the world
Until-------
I crash right into reality
Again and I fall
Face down
With the devil laughing
In my head 
As I hit the glass pipe once more.
Your dreams are up in smoke
The end of
Your life
As you smoke up hope
Smoked up your life
Into the air higher and higher
Until you just won't come
Down right away and then
Suddenly
CRASH!
Crashing downward
Spinning in the air at first
Then crashing down
Hard
Into pieces broken up.
Then you realize

You are somebody great
And greatness is in you.
Walk inside that door
where dreams unfold
And dream
And dream
And dream 
And then dream some more........


January 2006

Thanksgiving

The Pilgrim told the Maitre d
I’ve had too much, no more for me
The food was great, the fruit was ripe
I’ll take a hit off of that pipe

“I’d like to dance”, said the Indian girl
The lad was shy and white as pearl
The fire lit the forest floor
The drums played late, they yelled for more

The elder pilgrim told the Chief
We love your land beyond belief
We mean well now and wish you health
But those that follow may want your wealth

The Chief sat back, eyes to the night
We know they’re coming but we are tight
Feast with us now, enjoy the living
This party will be known as the “First Thanksgiving”

They partied on like family close
The elders rose to give a toast
We thank you Lord for this fine day
We know tomorrow will be what may
© Bill Smith  Create an image from this poem.

If I Say No

If I Say No

Too much disinformation
Rumours about my life, personal investigation
My love life your interpretation
Available just cynical
And I never look your way twice
I refuse to even pretend to be nice
Love being in love but why pay the price
For another user, another loser

Weigh your options carefully
Carry your burdens without me
If I say no, I don't mean yes
Why even try to second guess
If I say no, I don't mean yes

Maybe's just an ideal assumption
A  victim of presumption
I'm not a beat, a difficult 
Who cares about your little world
Only a victim of your disappointment
Words like a gun that won't go off
Just live with the  and swallow it
You're a real man now, so take a hit and take a hint

Weigh your options carefully
Carry your burdens without me
If I say no, I don't mean yes
Why even try to second guess
If I say no, I don't mean yes

One syllable and it's so simple
One meaning one purpose without you
Now I can stay or I can leave
Get lost and take a reprieve
From all your attempts to deceive

Weigh your options carefully
Carry your burdens without me
If I say no, I don't mean yes
Why even try to second guess
If I say no, I don't mean yes

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