Best Promontory Poems


Premium Member The Solo Dancer - Tanka To Sonnet

Alone atop a hill,
   an ornamental willow
             dances in the breeze.
Long limbs form a lovely gown
    that gracefully sweeps the ground.

Adored by the sun,
    the willow is not weeping.
                        She blooms rosily!
April’s first shower has passed;
       for the sun alone, she shines.
           

The Solo Dancing Ornamental Tree (new title for the sonnet version)

An ornamental tree with willow leaves
upon a promontory stands alone.
In April’s breeze, each limb, cascading, weaves
with fragrance. She is dancing on her own.

I wonder how she came to be at all.
Her roots lie in a solitary place
where few traverse to spy her - lithe and small -
there moving in rain’s aftermath with glee.

In small degrees, the sun has climbed the sky.
No longer pallid, he is smiling down
upon the swaying willow. By and by,
Her graceful limbs shine like a lacquer gown.

Her lovely blooms have opened to expose
The splendid blush of buds with hue light rose.
Categories: promontory, beautiful, tree, sun, tree,
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member The Haunted House

The Haunted House

An aging Victorian graphite three story house sat on a 
promontory, lonely, deserted, weathered and forlorn.
Broken windows showed signs of cruel abuse from
passersby amused by throwing rocks we surmised. 
This skeletal shell of a one-time elegant beauty
became a welcome refuge for my sister and I, wet 
and chilled to the bone on that stormy autumn night.

Our car had broken down about two miles away.
There were no other homes or buildings nearby.
To our amazement the door was open and after 
knocking loudly with no answer, we let ourselves in. 
Cobwebs clung to our faces and hair as we entered
and brushed them away squeeling disdainfully.

I had a small torch on my keychain and with it we looked 
around to try to find something to dry ourselves off.
We moved in unison across the creaking floor, shivering.
It was then that I felt cold fingers grasp my shoulder.
Wide eyed I slowly turned my head but no one was there.
We both heard errie laughter as chills ran down our spines.
We ran to the door but now it was locked and we were 
trapped inside as panic set in with our hearts pounding.

Then all of a sudden two creatures appeared before us 
standing there with matted hair and we both screamed
so loudly we scared each other, but with my little light I
could see we were looking at ourselves in a full length
dusty antique mirror. We laughed hysterically in pure relief.

I tried my cell phone again and miraculously got a signal.
I managed to contact the auto club who estimated 2 hours.
We waited impatiently until the auto club came to rescue 
us and our car. The driver sat outside and honked his horn. 
We screamed to him that we were trapped inside. He came 
up to the front door and to our shock the door flew open.
We hurridly left that haunted house and never looked back 
as the driver quickly drove away in the pouring rain. 

8-27-18

Sponsor-   Dear Heart
Contest-   The Haunted House
Categories: promontory, autumn, fear, horror, house,
Form: Narrative

Premium Member Ignis Fatuus

Okay, okay, I confess. We stole the only hyperdrive ship that wasn't destroyed in the war. But what choice did we have? Our world is on the brink of annihilation. For hundreds of years my species has polluted the air, soil and water. Global wars have decimated once thriving metropolises. Crime and pandemics are rampant. Our only hope was the construction of spaceships capable of interstellar travel so that we might locate a new world, a new home. But the bombs took them all out, save one. After seizing control of the space station, we did what we must to survive. And so here we are, travelling through the void of space, searching for a suitable planet to make our new start. 

Ours was once a proud race whose cultural achievements were of the highest order. Surely, we can reach that pinnacle once more if given the chance. Our sensors have located what appears to be a living planet in a solar system beyond our own. We have engaged the hyperdrive engines and expect to reach our destination momentarily. The excitement among the crew is palpable. We enter the atmosphere and achieve a perfect, soft landing atop a large promontory. Eureka! Our new home, a paradise. The sea is vast and pristine, the skies are azure blue, the air sweet with the scent of the local flora. No more wars. No more pollution. Never again will guns and bombs and disease plague us. Just as we are contemplating this glorious future, we espy a message being written in the sky by some type of primitive aircraft and in an alien tongue. 

WELCOME TO PLANET EARTH

the search is over
new start for a dying race
hell is for dreamers
© Tom Woody  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: promontory, destiny, hope,
Form: Free verse

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Premium Member The Unrolling Expanse

Staying on a promontory, I watch,
The wobbling mass of water below.

Before my eyes,
The sea stretches far;
An infinite scroll of chiffon,
Rolling and unrolling
In shades of green and sapphire.
In its sedate hours of brooding silence, 
A calm expanse with feeble waves,
As if seized by an uncanny lassitude,
Lying in majesty,
Swirling in ecstasy.

Within this mammoth silver submarine,
How many mysterious live forms thrive!
What curious shaped corals, what all sea urchins!
What wealth of fish, what gigantic mammals!

Between the blue sky above
And the blue sea below
I see seagulls fly,
The long beaked pelicans prey,
Grampuses heaving their huge form,
Above the calm surface,
And the milky spray tossing shiny pearls,
Upon the stretching naked strands.

I can see a distant sail,
And the hull of a ship,
Gliding over undulating waves,
Leaving a frothy trail of foam behind,
With water churning and spiraling around,
Where sharks and seals and dolphins swim.

Piles of silver clouds move above
And the golden sands stretch below,
With periwinkles, crabs and shells,
Scattered by the receding waves.

Splashing tides, dancing weeds
Rising crescendo, falling rhythm

Oh! What a splendid scene,
In the rosy gleam of this evening!
What delectable mélange
Of tinkling sensory delights!
Categories: promontory, beautiful, ocean, sea,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Citadel and Constellations

CITADEL AND CONSTELLATIONS


The green leaves in rugged moans;
The tall bushes in rumbling groans;
The roofs train creaks-- their fugue
blow cobwebs hugging branches below,
such  are precursors inviting darkness lair

for  stormy   clouds   before   crowd  the  days.
Yellow horizon seem unreachable honey
as in my life's ocean, balloon  billows  I   bear.
I-- surged in every swell to skirt  yet   still
lashing waves dashed pushing me sometimes to despair.

Again, cataclysm walk unheralded casting loose
my arms lift upon the glimmer of silver lining from afar
somber shadows enshrouded me in a mist of struggles.
Ounce of strength I have, I try to juggle and juggle
yet, curses fell from hearts and lips parched of love.

All   these    came,   one    and    all --
the flowing light has flickered flash and gone
but beyond all these you stood -- my sentinel...
You hushed the bad constellations hanging 'round my world
like a lighthouse guiding a lost ship to his home.

Yes! You are my beacon, a promontory amidst
cyclic onslaught brambles and chameleons,
a rock  to cling in the wind's creeping fury,
Staunch and firm,  my ñhero fighting the torrential
cascade of tirades and reproaches:  MY CITADEL. . . 
_____________________________________________________________________
***Sponsor	Shadow Hamilton
Contest Name	Your Favourite Old Poem #2 
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***Sponsor	Justin Bordner
Contest Name	How You Make The Stars Hush 
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©O.E. Guillermo
06:37 pm, February 24, 2015
Categories: promontory, imagery, inspiration, life, love,
Form: Narrative

Premium Member To a Weeping Willow

"the willows dip
Their pendent boughs, stooping as if to drink." William Cowper

To a Weeping Willow

The graceful, sweeping green
I remember seeing it,
my first weeping willow
 graceful trails of leaves
bending to touch its own reflection
Growing on a creek bank thick with grasses
 I lay there in the soft tufts,
 dreaming, staring up at clouds
watching the zig-zag flitters
of a butterfly.

Now days never seem so long

 
Wherever its pure tapestry reigns
in fragrant gardens, wherever 
they take root; on creek-beds 
sometimes by a charming bridge.
Weeping Willows have become for me
symbols of long peaceful days

I stop to gaze at them in gardens,
in paintings, in books that picture them
my hand lingers on the page

Beside a lacquered pond they still
 touch their own reflections
 with long, whispering  trails 

 Once, in a dream, I saw one
with pallid catkins,
 on a   lonely promontory
 beside a forgotten grave-

 an echo of grieving.

Suzanne Delaney
Categories: promontory, earth, grief, tree,
Form: Free verse


The Wind In the Pines 1

("Noh" is an ancient Japanese style of 
drama, broadly similar to Elizabethan
tragedy.  "The Wind in the Pines" is
my version of a well-known Noh play.)

1. The Buddhist Priest

This was the day of the White Crane. 
I was walking from Kyoto to fair Kobe, 
and not omitting a single shrine, 
now nearing the end of my three-day journey. 
The morning had taken on a hue 
of pastel. I reached a promontory, above the sea 
with curious roadside ancestor tombs, 
slabs of coarse stone. The wind 
and waves, so restless, had done their work, 
scarring and scarifying the soft chalk, 
leaving strange columns, each capped 
by its crude ashlar memorial tablet. 
As I prayed to the dead, my bare head 
was lifted. My gaze (no longer mine) 
was drawn towards a tall pine, 
standing alone, its trunk bifurcated. 
That tree, I felt somehow, had waited 
for me to come. Looking about me, 
I saw a peasant, short and stoutly 
built. "Tell me about the tree," 
I said. "And what's that poetry? 
That hanging plaque?" He said I'd found 
something special. "This is hallowed ground," 
he muttered. "Matsukaze and her sister 
Murasame mourned here, Mister. 
Then Heaven took pity on the two brine 
girls, and turned them into this pine." 
By mortal things, we should set no store: 
but hearing this, I wanted to know more.
Categories: promontory, myth, , memorial,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member A Little Poem

(I.)

Of Ulysses, Homer's Troy And The Wrathful Gods

I, who am of the ancient tribe of trees
  Climb slowly.

Eons unguessed, ere I shall see the crest
  Of the blue towers, - love's high citadels
Hath reared, utterably beautiful
Unutterably holy, truth's infinite light.

I, who am of the ancient tribe of trees
  Climb slowly.

Thy mystic news from out the Invisible  
   Would save all men, were they content to dwell
In the lowly station, proud to share the power
That forms the world in secret hour by hour.

I, who am of the ancient tribe of trees
  Climb slowly.

I have not heard any man yet born
  Unlocked in verse such cruel agony
Great gusts of song, raw as uptorn
Thou grim and gruesome master of the sea.

I, who am of the ancient tribe of trees
  Climb slowly.
  
Set thee upon some mountain promontory
  With no companion but that ancient story
In the mirror of Princes,
And thou shalt find thy throne restored to thee.

I, who am of the ancient tribe of trees
  Climb slowly.
  
(II.)

Duality

Thy day is filled with echoes of olden time,
   Shadows of pain. I watch the skylark climb
Into the sun above the golden grain.

One thou lovest for that he wrote his dream
In blood, then died. True joy is it doth gleam
Even among the sweet flowers of summer tide.

Yet thou and I are he that now doth write,
Of ancient seed deep-rooted, dark and light,
Sheltering good and evil at their need.

(III.)

A Little Poem

A little poem a dark soul brought forth
  One hour of loneliness and misery;
Yet round it swung the keen stars of the north,
And deep within it moaned a troubled sea.

The joy'est trust of those eternal fires,
And all the calm those billows yearned unto,
Were in that poem, in that soul's desires,
And in the Heart that flashed that vision through.


R.J. Lindley, April, 3rd, 1973
(Within the shadows of a youthful mind's 
mysterious desires and radiant glow)...
From my new blog....
Categories: promontory, art, creation, deep, passion,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Two White Wines

Dinner with old friends:
salmon with red cabbage, asparagus, Caesar's salad, penne with
      broccoli, two white wines.
Jane Jacobs could analyze how it all got to our table
or even how their daughter came to us from Cambodia.
The economy or market bringing a thing of beauty, the farms, the trucks,
such comfort. The ancients knew this too
yet we are anxious about famine, genocide and nuclear war.
How can we organize (govern) ourselves to end self-imposed suffering?
That Quebec and Puerto Rico may secede peacefully at any time a
      majority chooses is a source of pride. Why not Kurds, Chechyns,
      Tibetans and Armenians?

Difficult to write a poem about it. At table, candlelight, we debate
or whine about the other side winning and making a mess
of our lives. The election could be stolen, tampering with voting
      machines,
what policy question does that possibility raise? War in Iraq,
school testing, prison population. Religion, the abyss surrounding the
little promontory life.

It'll all work out in the end. Go to your daily practice, be a good citizen.
Another failed effort to write what I mean. Such confusion, yet
two white wines.
Categories: promontory, daughter, farm, friend, old,
Form: Verse

Premium Member Alpinist

I can feel the frigid air bite my lungs
as my shallow breaths try in vain to
soothe and stop the burning pain.
Each struggling footfall could be my last,
yet the mountain taunts me to keep onward.
The snow has consumed my crampon booted feet 
with numbness as trembling loins beg my brain for rest.
Heartbeats match the pounding in my head.
I just can’t stop now when so near the summit.
Blinding snow begins to fall as I leave my two
closest friends behind on the promontory.
They plead with me to turn back with them.
All sensibilities have vanished into the whiteness.
“As I feel the snow fly, I will conquer or die”.
Let these words be my epitaph I call to them,
should the mountain claim my sorry soul.

August 10, 2014
For Charlotte Puddifoot's
Dark Poetry Contest
Categories: promontory, dark, life, mountains, snow,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Breathtaking

Begin your Diamond Head hike in the early hours of morning as it
Requires two full hours to climb to the top at an
Elevation of seven hundred sixty two feet from sea level.
After reaching the top of Diamond Head Crater,
That was formed by a volcanic explosion 200,000 years ago,
Honolulu and Waikiki are the breathtaking views from 
The top of the crater, spreading out from the Ko'olaus to the sea.
Allow yourself enough time to capture panoramic pictures as
Keepsakes of your climb and bask in the beauty surrounding
Impressive famous landmarks from the Manoa Valley to the
Natural harbour featuring the Arizona Memorial at Pearl Harbor.
Gorgeous amazing views greet the eyes in every direction.
  
*Ko'olau Mountain Range

Diamond Head Hike:

Diamond Head is the name of a volcanic tuff cone on the Hawaiian island of O'ahu and known to Hawaiians as Le'ahi, most likely from lae 'browridge, promontory' plus ahi 'tuna' because the shape of the ridgeline resembles the shape of a tuna's dorsal fin. Its English name was given by British sailors in the 19th century, who mistook calcite crystals on the adjacent beach for diamonds.
Categories: promontory, beautiful, mountains, places, ,
Form: Acrostic

Premium Member Waves

Two young friends sit on a promontory
     overlooking the windswept 
sea as a lonely lighthouse studies their 
      actions unnoticed.
They converse excitedly about the gift
     of a crimson parasol 
from a handsome new lad at school.
      Their hearts soar as they 
dream wild romantic thoughts as the   
       sound of the waves enchant.

There's something wild about 
      being near the waves…
Hearing their last hurrah as they 
      hit the sandy shore.
Bursting bubbles of white 
      foam on wet sand,
The only evidence of their 
      brief existence, save the
Sea salt scent wafting in 
      the wild wayward wind.

Then there is the chameleon 
      colors mesmerizing eyes
As the sun and clouds play 
      with light 'til day is done,
And the orange orb slowly sinks 
      below the sea's horizon
Sharing a romantic kiss goodbye 
      with the twilight sky.

June 11, 2016
Categories: promontory, beach, dream, friendship, sea,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member The Far View

THE FAR VIEW
     Of  this quaint mountain village sparks a longing  strain lay dormant these many years. Was it some childhood visit, one too early to recall, or existence in another life? The two, to my searching soul, ever close together.
     A white steeple  pokes through, rising from a wealth of green. The instant sensation,  deja vu. I’m standing at the edge of Castle Lookout – so said a sign – a mountain promontory surrounded by jack pine, and the cozy little town – if you could call it a town – lay half buried in verdant summer wealth, purple mountains distant. All one may see of dwellings are white sidings and reddish roofs, save for one large two-story quite near. I could swear I see a lad and his dog on a patch of meadow But no. He’s disappeared.
     A flash! An instant panoramic spectacle,  an all encompassing vision covers, blots-out the town, the distant purple mountains, every waking sight. I am playing with the lad and his dog, throwing a stick for some fetch it game. His name is, Tommy, and I know him well, both he and his family. And for just that instant – superimposed – I walk those village streets, hear a park band in the square and wave at familiar folk. It has been given when a person falls from some high place his whole life strings into consciousness. Yes, but this too-real-apparition has other-worldly quality. No childish imagination pervades the montage. It is that of my mature self, save playing with the boy and his dog, which reaches back even more mysteriously. I sense all at very depth of soul. The traveler is not my present self. He has appeared from some other port of call too distant in time to name. 
     Now I’m back, visitor on a whim, and deigned experience what few have gone the crystal ball route. How polar different I feel  walking back to my car. I am almost reluctant to leave, the two-entity identity still with me, but I get in, start her up, and drive onto the highway with a wide-eyed shrug for that glimpse of transcendental history.

Dave Austin
Categories: promontory, time,
Form: Narrative

Premium Member Plain Words

Window ledge song
Stray sparrows sing;
A choral duo

~~~~~~~~~


Rain drops slide
Blurry window view;
Furious stormy night

~~~~~~~~~


Not much to say
Old couple sit;
Passing people punctuate

~~~~~~~~~


Coffee maker sounds
Morning makeovers;
Caffeine fix retort

~~~~~~~~~


From this penthouse
Brief promontory;
Puzzling landscapes

~~~~~~~~~


Lovely couple
Youth presides;
Time will tell

~~~~~~~~~


Haiku moment
Zero metaphor;
Captured picture

~~~~~~~~~


Plain words
Tell not describe;
Look and see

~~~~~~~~~


Curious pantomime
Merge into a dream;
Fall into another

~~~~~~~~~


Joy waits
Sorrow appears;
Opposites reconcile

~~~~~~~~~


Eastern view
Western education;
Two worlds endow

~~~~~~~~~


Awakening
Awareness
Abundance

~~~~~~~~~


Bus stop queue
Gadgets in hand;
Electronic toys

~~~~~~~~~


Social media
Conspiracy theories;
Insidious intents

~~~~~~~~~


Girl and boy
Two whirls collide;
Fancy intervenes

~~~~~~~~~


Years have etched
Facial sculptures;
Deep wrinkles attest

~~~~~~~~~


Cite and recite
Write and re-write;
Nothing much

~~~~~~~~~


Opposites attract
To balance out;
Not much more

~~~~~~~~~


Curious wonder
Time runs away;
Not much left

~~~~~~~~~


Like attracts like
To boost buzz;
Ample estates

~~~~~~~~~




Leon Enriquez
10 May 2015
Singapore
Categories: promontory, change, , western,
Form: Haiku

Naked Flamenco

A Polite Warning. The Following poem is somewhat steamy. Not explicit, but explicit in
inference. If this sort of thing offends you, then please be considerate and don’t read
it. Thank you. 

Naked Flamenco

( A sultry summer night spent together
With ardour between us growing
She whispered, “Let me dance for you”
I agreed, little knowing………………. )

Binding spells of mysterious wanting
Soft dark her eyes looked
Into the shades of my mind
An enchantress of fantasy
She etched her velvet pattern
On veiled secrets
Parted

Dangerous lashes flutter desirous
In emerald peacock pupils
Midnight burnished hair let fall
In captivating tangles 
To full ephemeral corners 
Of soft bitten lip
Coy damp line drawn on her cheek

Captivated
Her expression acknowledges
With known provoking smiles
Eye lights shine saying “already mine”
With twisting flamenco poised
Sensual arm insinuates to finger tip
And eventide's rose is pale skinned
And naked

Curved line from ankle
Writes portents to the nape of her neck
Through black tousled sexual spinal blades
Shoulder dipping
Quivers her femininity to rising breasts
While arched longing 
Mouths the indescribable tactile seconds
Of her promontory dancing

Patient in toe tip exquisite she places
Penchant elegance 
Of her naked ballet
The ribbon swirl of vanished gossamer dress
Depicted wing-ed arms
She rises a surrealistic
Flight of angels created

In soft light air brushed forms
Of muscle, rib cage, bones and tendons
Body writhed centres eclipse
On pubic between
The epitome of gestalts navel breathing

I shudder Goosebumps of enthralling
Built by such grace of a heavenly 
Consecrated female
Led beyond mere heated needing
To a place resplendent
With sheer un-tameable and un-nameable beauty

Guitar stringing twangs the milliseconds
Of her overture 
Spanish castanets tap click fervent
Pronouncing the rhythm of my heart
Naked pale formed Goddess
Gently rips from me
Every appreciations confession of
Perfections contours

Fine satin sheen hairs risen
Beading sweats slight trickle
Aroused by my infatuation 
Nipples stiffen
And I am drawn from and by
Heavy breath to music’s ending  
To land in her presence
Panting

She has seen through me
Every century of a woman’s glory
And with a slow beckoning finger
Her eager eyes
Tell me
It is so
Categories: promontory, girlfriend-boyfriend, love, mystery, passionlonging,
Form: Free verse
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