The Unrolling Expanse

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October.13. 2023
As I Watch the Waves Crash Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Anoucheka Gangabissoon

 

Staying on a promontory, I watch, The wobbling mass of water below. Before my eyes, The sea stretches far; An infinite scroll of chiffon, Rolling and unrolling In shades of green and sapphire. In its sedate hours of brooding silence, A calm expanse with feeble waves, As if seized by an uncanny lassitude, Lying in majesty, Swirling in ecstasy. Within this mammoth silver submarine, How many mysterious live forms thrive! What curious shaped corals, what all sea urchins! What wealth of fish, what gigantic mammals! Between the blue sky above And the blue sea below I see seagulls fly, The long beaked pelicans prey, Grampuses heaving their huge form, Above the calm surface, And the milky spray tossing shiny pearls, Upon the stretching naked strands. I can see a distant sail, And the hull of a ship, Gliding over undulating waves, Leaving a frothy trail of foam behind, With water churning and spiraling around, Where sharks and seals and dolphins swim. Piles of silver clouds move above And the golden sands stretch below, With periwinkles, crabs and shells, Scattered by the receding waves. Splashing tides, dancing weeds Rising crescendo, falling rhythm Oh! What a splendid scene, In the rosy gleam of this evening! What delectable mélange Of tinkling sensory delights!

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Date: 10/13/2023 2:43:00 PM
"The long beaked pelicans prey, Grampuses heaving their huge form, Above the calm surface, And the milky spray tossing shiny pearls, Upon the stretching naked strands." Wow, great imagery. Yes, growing up on the east coast of North America, many a night was spent at the shore, admiring and wondering...traveling in my mind and heart. Excellent read!
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Date: 10/13/2023 9:23:00 AM
Beauty is in the beholder. Your description of a calm scene is thrilling and replete with imagery. You mention so many beautiful creatures of the sea. I could visualize them easily since Malta is surrounded by the sea. Blessings.
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Date: 10/13/2023 6:04:00 AM
This is true beauty and peaceful scenery from the picture unto your graceful ways of enjoying the free gift of being surrounded in the presence of God : ). Love the format of this poem as well amazing how you create a picture out of a poem as well, makes reading as breathing in and out in a relaxing peace of mind, joy and comfort
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Date: 10/13/2023 5:13:00 AM
Wow! I am speechless poetic soul! I really love this prompt too but you’ve done an excellent job writing for this. You’ve written in such a descriptive manner. I can see the seagulls, and the blues of sea and sky, how they merge, and your use of colors and various elements of ocean, is beyond impeccable! As an island girl, my heart is full and i cant help but be in awe of the flow of your imagery and how you’ve written about dancing weeds rolling waves, and rosy gleam of the evening! Definitely
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Date: 10/13/2023 5:14:00 AM
A top winner this is! And it made me think, u must love the beach and ocean too? Cus these words are truly magical and left me captivated! Goodluck for the contest. I always enjoy reading you talented soul
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