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Waves

Two young friends sit on a promontory
     overlooking the windswept 
sea as a lonely lighthouse studies their 
      actions unnoticed.
They converse excitedly about the gift
     of a crimson parasol 
from a handsome new lad at school.
      Their hearts soar as they 
dream wild romantic thoughts as the   
       sound of the waves enchant.

There's something wild about 
      being near the waves…
Hearing their last hurrah as they 
      hit the sandy shore.
Bursting bubbles of white 
      foam on wet sand,
The only evidence of their 
      brief existence, save the
Sea salt scent wafting in 
      the wild wayward wind.

Then there is the chameleon 
      colors mesmerizing eyes
As the sun and clouds play 
      with light 'til day is done,
And the orange orb slowly sinks 
      below the sea's horizon
Sharing a romantic kiss goodbye 
      with the twilight sky.

June 11, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Warrior Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 5:16 PM
Congrats! on the win Connie...great work...^WW^
Rycroft Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 4:28 PM
Congrats brilliant poem xxxx
Haight Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:43 PM
Connie, back to congratulate you on your fine 1st Place win in 'the red parasol' contest. I knew it would be a winner! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Connie, wow, a beautiful example of the picture displayed. You are amazing lady...congrats on your top placement in the contest :)-luloo
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:21 PM
How sweet of you luloo. I appreciate your lovely comment. Thank you very much my friend. hugs, Connie ; )
Gibson Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Connie, a beautiful song to the sea; you captured it beautifully. Congratulations on your first place placement.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Thank you very much Faye. Cheers, Connie ; )
Lawless Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Connie, I think I'm gonna read this to the waves the next time I visit the shore. Wonderfully written and expressive.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Thank you for making me smile John. ; )
Y. Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 6:11 AM
Hi Connie, Congrats on your first place win it was well deserved: -) Alexis
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:23 PM
Thank you very much Alexis. ; )
Kimathi Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 4:38 AM
Congrats Connie, for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:24 PM
Thank you very much Teddy. The seashore always inspires. ; )
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Congratulations, Connie on a first rate poem. You deserve it...
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:21 AM
Thanks so much Janis. I was ready to give up contests because I have gotten so many N/A's lately. ; )
Roper Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 10:19 PM
Wow! Beautifully , Connie, you changed it and I love this one :) congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:25 AM
I am so glad you liked this Eve. I really appreciate the first placement. Thank you so much! Cheers, Connie ; )
Callus Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 4:42 PM
Beautifully described, and like the two friends on the beach we partake of the sea's enchantment; what a better place for romantic feelings to flow together with the waves! We who live by the sea are so lucky, I suppose! ~ Regards // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:26 AM
The sea and the shore are filled with enchantment Paul I agree. Thanks so much. ; )
Merryman Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 4:10 PM
Connie, your words paint a delightful picture! I like this!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 1:29 AM
Thank you Kim. I had to work on it more after reading the contest instructions over again. ; )
Haight Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 9:33 AM
You have painted a lovely picture, Connie, of a seashore place in your beautiful part of the world. You don't need a photo for this poem! 7 Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 2:15 PM
Thank you very much Sandra. ; )
Vincent Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 2:17 AM
A lovely piece of art my dear,you've actually made me wish I lived close to the sea......it evokes the romantic touch of nature. A worthy 7 from me.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 2:26 AM
Thank you very much Messoh. I appreciate that! : )
Lamoureux Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 8:03 PM
I just love that sound. I also like how you made your poem look wavey. You combined waves and romance, what could be better??? Well done.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 8:53 PM
Thank you very much Richard. ; )
Quigley Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 6:04 PM
Lovely write! I can see them in front of me now...
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 6:13 PM
Thank you Tom. ; )
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 5:26 PM
I really like this one, Connie. I wrote about waves just last night. We were on the same WAVE length. haha (won't be posted till much later though)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 6:12 PM
Twilight is my favorite time of day, morning or night. The sea is so mercurial, constant yet ever changing. I will look forward to reading yours Andrea. Thank you.; )
Allison Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 3:09 PM
Such a beautiful poem Connie I love reading about the sea and seeing it first hand on our little Island:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 5:00 PM
Thank you Jan. I love to watch the surfers in winter on the twenty to thirty foot waves. They are crazy brave. ; )
Manassian Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 1:43 PM
Oh....this is so sweet, Connie. What lovely images your lines evoke. Would that I could see it all...as you have written...right now. Hugs to you, dear.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 9:40 PM
Thank you Eileen. I just visited your recent video and it makes me feel so happy to hear you reading your poetry looking like a professional actress. Divine! Cheers, Connie
Medders Tobechi Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 1:24 PM
Lovely write......
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 4:57 PM
Thank you Janis. ; )
Horne Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 11:36 AM
beautiful write with lovely descriptions, my friend
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 4:57 PM
Thank you Jack. So nice to hear from you. I shall check out your latest! ; )
Andresen Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 6:49 AM
- Waves have always fascinated me - A beautiful poem, Connie - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 4:55 PM
There is magic in the waves, each uniquely different. Thank you Anne-Lise. ; )
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