The Far View

THE FAR VIEW
     Of  this quaint mountain village sparks a longing  strain lay dormant these many years. Was it some childhood visit, one too early to recall, or existence in another life? The two, to my searching soul, ever close together.
     A white steeple  pokes through, rising from a wealth of green. The instant sensation,  deja vu. I’m standing at the edge of Castle Lookout – so said a sign – a mountain promontory surrounded by jack pine, and the cozy little town – if you could call it a town – lay half buried in verdant summer wealth, purple mountains distant. All one may see of dwellings are white sidings and reddish roofs, save for one large two-story quite near. I could swear I see a lad and his dog on a patch of meadow But no. He’s disappeared.
     A flash! An instant panoramic spectacle,  an all encompassing vision covers, blots-out the town, the distant purple mountains, every waking sight. I am playing with the lad and his dog, throwing a stick for some fetch it game. His name is, Tommy, and I know him well, both he and his family. And for just that instant – superimposed – I walk those village streets, hear a park band in the square and wave at familiar folk. It has been given when a person falls from some high place his whole life strings into consciousness. Yes, but this too-real-apparition has other-worldly quality. No childish imagination pervades the montage. It is that of my mature self, save playing with the boy and his dog, which reaches back even more mysteriously. I sense all at very depth of soul. The traveler is not my present self. He has appeared from some other port of call too distant in time to name. 
     Now I’m back, visitor on a whim, and deigned experience what few have gone the crystal ball route. How polar different I feel  walking back to my car. I am almost reluctant to leave, the two-entity identity still with me, but I get in, start her up, and drive onto the highway with a wide-eyed shrug for that glimpse of transcendental history.

Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/30/2014 7:02:00 PM
Is this the long one you posted at PFT? I had no time to read it earlier in hotmail. Let me see it now. .... wow, this is so unusual and truly it is transcendental. Gosh , did this actually happen to you? it's very descriptive and nostalgic. Great title too.
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Daver Austin
Date: 10/1/2014 9:40:00 AM
No. As I've said, I have a picture out of American Art Review in front of me and I make the whole thing up. Hardy har, har. Love
Date: 9/30/2014 12:07:00 PM
Hey Daver! Wow..."transcendental history" this has the feel of an astral voyage where it is imperative to 'drive' away. Super creative and as "clever", as jack has commented. Love the pace and imagery.:) Keep well...love, Mikki
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Date: 9/29/2014 10:41:00 AM
loved this clever, imaginative piece, Daver
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