The Wind In the Pines 1

("Noh" is an ancient Japanese style of 
drama, broadly similar to Elizabethan
tragedy.  "The Wind in the Pines" is
my version of a well-known Noh play.)

1. The Buddhist Priest

This was the day of the White Crane. 
I was walking from Kyoto to fair Kobe, 
and not omitting a single shrine, 
now nearing the end of my three-day journey. 
The morning had taken on a hue 
of pastel. I reached a promontory, above the sea 
with curious roadside ancestor tombs, 
slabs of coarse stone. The wind 
and waves, so restless, had done their work, 
scarring and scarifying the soft chalk, 
leaving strange columns, each capped 
by its crude ashlar memorial tablet. 
As I prayed to the dead, my bare head 
was lifted. My gaze (no longer mine) 
was drawn towards a tall pine, 
standing alone, its trunk bifurcated. 
That tree, I felt somehow, had waited 
for me to come. Looking about me, 
I saw a peasant, short and stoutly 
built. "Tell me about the tree," 
I said. "And what's that poetry? 
That hanging plaque?" He said I'd found 
something special. "This is hallowed ground," 
he muttered. "Matsukaze and her sister 
Murasame mourned here, Mister. 
Then Heaven took pity on the two brine 
girls, and turned them into this pine." 
By mortal things, we should set no store: 
but hearing this, I wanted to know more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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March 10, 2017 at 12:34 AM
I have heard of Noh, I know how the stage looks, the dresses, the style, but that is about it. I know nothing about it. It is strange maybe because I try to live by The Tao (while I am the opposite of a religious person), and yet know so little. What I know about Noh is that it has an intricate syllable count. This first part, it reads so easy. You have worked that rhyme into it in a way that most probably makes a hard piece easy to read. (onto part 2)
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March 10, 2017 at 5:47 AM
If I'd been 5% as perceptive as you, at your age, I would have considered myself a genius!
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March 9, 2017 at 10:10 AM
Cheers, Micheal. I had not heard this story before. The special places where, we can say a god lives there.
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March 9, 2017 at 11:25 AM
You've got an excellent insight here, Doug. Thank you very much for commenting!
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