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The Obtuse Angle

An obtuse angle is an angle of greater than 90° and less than 180°. Wiki

I must be looking like an obtuse angle
in my funeral agent's eyes - 
an over ninety years old, 
(but less than one hundred and eighty) 
indigent sunburnt naked geezer 
who likes to meditate on the rooftop -
an egregious instance of treachery and immorality.
He is pretty delicate, my funeral agent, though, 
when calling to enquire after my health.

- Nausea? - he's asking me with hope. 
- Delirium? 
- Convulsions?

Insouciance.
Freedom.
Awakening.

I'm sorry to disappoint him. 
I like funeral agents: 
they mediate between life and death 
and consecrate the right to a decent funeral. 
Alas, they attach too much importance to acute angles.


15/08/2019
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Obtuse Egg and Dull Seed

I see them everywhere I go,
Folks who just do not seem to know,
What life is really all about,
They just go on their prescribed route.

Life to these indecisive sloth's,
May as well be wearing loincloth.
Don't question them about the news,
They spout others jargon as true.

Original thought unlikely,
Its like talking to a TV.
They give a blank  look and discuss,
The high fares of the city bus.

"What about Iraq" you might ask,
He says, we should finish the task.
"But what about all the dead," we pose,
Oh, yes, that part I do oppose.

"Is America still racist?"
Oh, sure, it is an ugly cyst.
"But we have made so much progress,"
Yes, now racism is much less.

"Katrina, was it Bush's flaw?"
Sure, didn't you see what you saw?
"But doesn't the state share some blame?"
You damn right I think it’s a shame.

"What about the high price of gas?"
Price gauging from the ruling class.
"It isn't supply and demand?"
Oh, yes sure, now I understand.

"How is your job, doing all right?"
I am scaling corporate heights.
"Didn't I hear they will downsize?"
That's supposed to be a surprise.

"How are the wife and the children?"
They are all good even the twins.
"Someone said you got a divorce."
But everyone does in due course.

This man goes through life on the dull,
He has no gift to think and mull.
What he hears he thinks it is true,
He, like so many have no clue.

An ambivalent clown this man,
Everything he hears is his plan.
He is like a pale, docile weed,
From an obtuse egg and dull seed.

Want Obtuse

Fiddle de dee and me nor comprehend..it's price! it's weight! Then again..
I'm going forlorn so gift this quick, Tucker the Mouse, let's read between!
The day came at the subway and pretending saved none from need of money.
Mother! How could you've known?..
Father, I suppose each to their own!
Fiddle de dee and please understand..it's life! it's paid! Then again..
I'm slowing for more so gift this quick, Tucker the Mouse!
Play your games, find your solitary ways that they may release such prayers unto cats.

    Cricket In Times Square, the
Jonathan Michael Conlon


Of Being Obtuse

If broken of heart
But mended of mind
Where do I start
If the blind lead the blind

While healing my soul
From all the abuse
Not is my goal
Of being obtuse

Broken of spirit
Healing of soul
We can all feel it
Taking it's toll

Take me alone
Or leave me away
If you are prone
To going astray

If it's happy we are
Then sad we are not
You stay right on par
Not missing your shot

Heart is not broken
Mind is on mend
Of all I have spoken
Can there be no end

Premium Member Clothes Obtuse

Today is like any given day
He puts his clothes on in the same way
Shoes on first
Pants diverse
He just doesn't know what to say

Russell Sivey

Obtuse Mother

You feign contrition
No body for resolve
Absolute you’re dying eyes
Cocoon in silken wrappings
The inner being consoles
Obtuse mother
With her little stranger
Those counterfeit tears
Bellows no more
Lack of compunction
Halo of strife
I didn’t ask
To be born
But I was begat
To this life


Obtuse Myself

The hard core cult was fixing
the flies on the podium.
A snapdragon becomes a cannibal
devouring its own seeds.

Beyond insanity lies the phantom zone
where you hang upside down your faith.

A lunatic threatens to jump
from high tomb –
after excavating the remains of
a forbidden fear.

There was nothing except the 
worn rags of a fakir.					


SATISH VERMA

Premium Member Obtuse Thought

Obtuse Thought
David J Walker

It is 
out of the nothingness 
that everything abide 
where
imaginations collide 
with 
ill-defined reality

it is 
of a meaningless 
language of the adjective 
from the 
imaginative 
tongue of 
no one 
in particular 
where
everyone is 
peculiar 
and nothing is as 
mundane 
as the usual

it is
the obtuse thought
of what is real
and what
is not
though 
no one should care
when or what
they might wear 
into oblivion

Utter Nonsense

Allow me to introduce
the hermit Hugh
who
I do deduce
felt it within himself
to eschew
an embrace
yet
being obtuse
when on a wild chase
did goose a moose
in the caboose
then a disgrace
but such behaviour
did induce
Bruce
another recluse
to pick up the pace
when playing footsie
under the table
fast and loose

Premium Member Dog Is Obtuse

i spy black rat snake
my dog races to my side
not seeing culprit

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