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Obtuse Myself

The hard core cult was fixing the flies on the podium. A snapdragon becomes a cannibal devouring its own seeds. Beyond insanity lies the phantom zone where you hang upside down your faith. A lunatic threatens to jump from high tomb – after excavating the remains of a forbidden fear. There was nothing except the worn rags of a fakir. SATISH VERMA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/27/2010 8:59:00 AM
how picturesque this write is with subtle imprints on your theme, satish... just awesome! huggs, nette
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Date: 12/27/2010 8:50:00 AM
Some cults are all-encompassing! Sometimes when a jaundiced believer escapes their grasp, they try and free themselves from the tentacles of faith as well! You have so aptly described this phenomenon! Enjoyed your fulminations!
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Date: 12/27/2010 5:46:00 AM
Very interesting piece - well done! Liz
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