Clothes Obtuse

Today is like any given day
He puts his clothes on in the same way
Shoes on first
Pants diverse
He just doesn't know what to say

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 5:43 PM
He sounds like Mr. bean. the scene when he is trying to take off pants at a beach in front of a blind man!! That was priceless.
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 5:42 PM
Fun one. He truly is obtuse!
Ellison Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 3:53 PM
"shoes on first!!!" not that's quite tricky!!! LOL
Pandit Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 9:08 AM
You painted him well here!
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