Going Un-Noticed

The short pink dress
the long blonde hair 

She cakes on her makeup 
but you dont care 

She wants you to notice 
that shes there 
Like the night of your first kiss

Do you tell her you love her
does she know
Does she know how you feel 
although its been a year
Do you treat her with love or make her feel fear 

She waits for you to open her door 
but you bite her head off 
and then enter a storm 

She doesnt know why 
she deserves this pain 
waiting for someone
to show her the way 

she'l forgive you again 
and again and again 
until one day, 
it will be too late
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 18, 2010 at 7:31 PM
Every dog has its day. A person can only take so much and then they either leave or retalliate. Excellent piece.
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