What Do You Need, To Be Noticed

Am i just A convenience to you? I try and try to make you visualise the potential me and 
you have deep inside. I sometimes wish that I pass your mind, so I dont feel so stupid for 
always having you cross mine. I wonder why your eyes are so blind you only see the beauty 
which will soon begin to die. You dont see my beauty within, you only see my scars, and 
smile which hides the truth of A love-sick heart being ripped apart becoming love warned out 
and thrown out. Do I need to have killer thighs with a perfect sense to accessorise, or 
beautiful eyes with a seductive style just to be noticed by you that once in a while? Well 
sorry I dont wear gold or diamond chains, or even play these love sick games. Im not 
everything or anything but will always continue to shine because I will forever hold my head 
up high. I am noticed now, for my question is mirrored back at you. What do You need, To 
be noticed?
 
- Wiko Te Maru
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 14, 2026 at 9:14 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 10:14 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 5, 2016 at 4:28 PM
WIKO, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV -- LINDA--
Croft Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 4:12 PM
very nice. welcome to poetry soup
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