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Best Hit Rock Bottom Poems

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Premium Member Mountain Drop
`~ MoUNTAIN DRoP~

I want to be like the mountain top.  
The higher I go, the less room I have to stop. 
A moment to...

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© Skat A   Create an image from this poem.
Categories: hit rock bottom, death, depression,
Form: Rhyme



I'Ll Cry Tomorrow
Sitting dying alone,
In this dark and dingy place 
It has now become my home..
The only open bar 
In town, I needed something to heal my...

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Categories: hit rock bottom, addiction, cry, dark, deep,
Form: Narrative
Bottoms Up
I just hit rock bottom I fear
The landing sure tore up my rear
A BADLY bruised butt
But hey, ya know what?
I'm starting to LIKE it down...

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Categories: hit rock bottom, funny,
Form: Limerick
Premium Member I Am
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I AM

I am one breathtaking moment
I am one who is lost or alone
I am one raindrop, or one flowering rose
I am warm as the sun,...

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Categories: hit rock bottom, heart, introspection, journey,
Form: Free verse
Crack of the Moon
I joined a nudist colony,
Was that a big mistake!
Everyone's naked, in the buff,
Sippin' soda by a lake

A big ol' gal named Marsha,
Stepped on a banana...

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Categories: hit rock bottom, funny,
Form: Rhyme



Broken Wing
Self-pity became my days in so 
        many messed up ways,
if only the bottle in my right hand...

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Categories: hit rock bottom, addiction, celebration, depression, encouraging,
Form: Rhyme
The Fool
There is more than one fool on the hill
I know because I am one of those fools
I am a fool who stands upon his own...

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Categories: hit rock bottom, life, music,
Form: Free verse
Dear Lord I'Ve Been Hurt and Abused
Dear Jesus...  I've Been Hurt and Abused...

I've been hurt so much... 
I don't feel like "going on."
It feels like "everything I do turns out...

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Categories: hit rock bottom, caregiving, confusion, daughter, dedication,
Form: Rhyme
Faith - Hope - Love
I took a walk with my best friend,
just the other night.
We expressed our different points of view
on things we thought weren't right.

We discussed a lot...

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Categories: hit rock bottom, lifefaith,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member ''Maybe Tomorrow''
sometimes, I am sleepwalking through life
disconnected
stumbling
not fully awake    lost and confused
I feel, I am not with the living
I tell myself,  "wake...

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Categories: hit rock bottom, depression, sad,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Bottom of Bottle
At bottom of a glass of wine, finds truth
If he has a second, becomes uncouth,

If he has a third, he spits as he talks
Finally by...

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Categories: hit rock bottom, drink,
Form: Couplet
A Flawed Diamond
I am a diamond, a faceted gem
One thousand faces each flawed are them
Some hold the truth but most hold the lies
Hidden barely behind all my...

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Categories: hit rock bottom, life, may, me,
Form: Verse
Premium Member You Can Do It Too
I have survived trauma, Cancer, Lyme disease, Head Traumas,
Many surgeries, bowel obstruction and infection
For those with health issues, life can really hit rock bottom
Pain can...

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Categories: hit rock bottom, change, endurance, health, inspirational,
Form: Free verse
Sunshine After the Rain
Sunshine After the Rain

Her heart is beating faintly, the tubes are down her throat,
The words are playing in his mind, of the last time they...

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Categories: hit rock bottom, strength, suicide,
Form: I do not know?
The False Dichotomy of My Descentt
The False Dichotomy of My 
Descent...



Falling,
beyond the precipice,
into this gaping chasm. 



Numbness ensues,

whirling emptiness,

swirling around and around,

in the recesses of my mind,

as it plummets,

in silent...

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Categories: hit rock bottom, introspection
Form: I do not know?

Book: Reflection on the Important Things