Bottoms Up

I just hit rock bottom I fear
The landing sure tore up my rear
A BADLY bruised butt
But hey, ya know what?
I'm starting to LIKE it down here

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Paul Callus

August 10, 2015 at 4:02 PM

I'll drink with you to this witty write, Tim! Like your humour! #7 // paul

Cecilia Macfarlane

August 6, 2015 at 7:50 PM

Ha, ha, ha....this is so funny!! Thank you Tim for making me laugh. Hugs

Laura Breidenthal

August 6, 2015 at 7:20 PM

You are hilarious and so upbeat. That is what I have always admired about you and your poetry. Excellent limmy Timmy! Always, Laura

Elaine George

August 6, 2015 at 8:16 AM

I am still laughing!!!. Thank you for starting my morning on a high. Great limerick, Tim. Elaine

Shadow Hamilton

August 5, 2015 at 10:54 AM

lorra laughs Tim excellent limerick hugs 7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 5, 2015 at 2:33 AM

Tim, you are one of those poets here in Soup who can easily put a smile in me!! funny one!~Olive Eloisa =')

Carrie Richards

August 1, 2015 at 3:59 PM

lol.......there's only one way to go from there..........and that's UP !!!! ^ !!!

Shadow Hamilton

August 1, 2015 at 9:45 AM

lol very amusing Tim hugs 7

Carol Eastman

July 30, 2015 at 12:14 PM

Love this! It's going into my favs.

Constance La France

July 30, 2015 at 12:04 PM

Tim, fun Limerick a well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, in the garden and for the nice comment

Andrea Dietrich

July 29, 2015 at 12:48 AM

haha. I thought it was gonna be a poop poem. You big tease!!!!

Nette Onclaud

July 28, 2015 at 2:16 PM

oh no , you better pull yourself up, lol... enjoyed your humor, tim.. how are you?.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 28, 2015 at 5:55 AM

- Hope not your butt became yellow and blue :)))) .... well done, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Ryerson

July 28, 2015 at 6:02 AM

I'm afraid it did Anne and I'm still a bit sore...Thanks for the comment!

Jan Allison

July 28, 2015 at 4:41 AM

lol great one Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Ryerson

July 28, 2015 at 6:03 AM

Thanks my friend! Your comments always mean SO much to me...

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