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Bottoms Up

I just hit rock bottom I fear The landing sure tore up my rear A BADLY bruised butt But hey, ya know what? I'm starting to LIKE it down here

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/10/2015 4:02:00 PM
I'll drink with you to this witty write, Tim! Like your humour! #7 // paul
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Date: 8/6/2015 7:50:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha....this is so funny!! Thank you Tim for making me laugh. Hugs
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Date: 8/6/2015 7:20:00 PM
You are hilarious and so upbeat. That is what I have always admired about you and your poetry. Excellent limmy Timmy! Always, Laura
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Date: 8/6/2015 8:16:00 AM
I am still laughing!!!. Thank you for starting my morning on a high. Great limerick, Tim. Elaine
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Date: 8/5/2015 10:54:00 AM
lorra laughs Tim excellent limerick hugs 7
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Date: 8/5/2015 2:33:00 AM
Tim, you are one of those poets here in Soup who can easily put a smile in me!! funny one!~Olive Eloisa =')
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Date: 8/1/2015 3:59:00 PM
lol.......there's only one way to go from there..........and that's UP !!!! ^ !!!
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Date: 8/1/2015 9:45:00 AM
lol very amusing Tim hugs 7
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Date: 7/30/2015 12:14:00 PM
Love this! It's going into my favs.
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Date: 7/30/2015 12:04:00 PM
Tim, fun Limerick a well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, in the garden and for the nice comment
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Date: 7/29/2015 12:48:00 AM
haha. I thought it was gonna be a poop poem. You big tease!!!!
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Date: 7/28/2015 2:16:00 PM
oh no , you better pull yourself up, lol... enjoyed your humor, tim.. how are you?.. huggs
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Date: 7/28/2015 5:55:00 AM
- Hope not your butt became yellow and blue :)))) .... well done, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 7/28/2015 6:02:00 AM
I'm afraid it did Anne and I'm still a bit sore...Thanks for the comment!
Date: 7/28/2015 4:41:00 AM
lol great one Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 7/28/2015 6:03:00 AM
Thanks my friend! Your comments always mean SO much to me...