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This is a song I wrote some years ago. I've written many lyrics over the years, but the only two I really care about are this one and Mary Rogers. It's a story of how our upbringing can impact our later choices in life. It's a story of murder and remorse. Ultimately, it's one of forgiveness and hope. All thanks to Maria and her husband Ron for bringing my song to life. Hope you enjoy it.

last thing I remember is the look upon his face shot him dead right where he stood then left without a trace killed a man while robbing his white castle for some change if I could I'd take it back my life I'd rearrange (chorus) as I lie here on this prison bed I look up toward the sky His Word says He still loves me though I can't help wonder why the man I am today is one He pulled up from the mud I've put my trust in these three things the spirit, the water, and the blood growing up I never knew the man who caused my birth the only dad I ever knew destroyed my own self-worth the day he beat my mother was the day I thought I'd die I swore it'd be the last time this young man would ever cry as I lie here on this prison bed I look up toward the sky His Word says He still loves me though I can't help wonder why the man I am today is one He pulled up from the mud I've put my hope in these three things the spirit, the water, and the blood (bridge) looking in this broken mirror I see a man redeemed my newborn faith in God above uplifts my self-esteem the One who sent his Son to die forever set me free these bars that keep me locked up now will soon no longer be (I'll pay the penalty) the time has come the needle waits I find myself at peace today's the day to pay my dues before I find release forgiveness I have begged from Him for causing so much pain my hope is He remembers me and that I'll live again as I lie upon this bed of death I slowly close my eyes his family's all gathered 'round no need to wonder why the man I killed's dear widow helped to pull me from the mud (because like me) she's put her faith in these three things the spirit, the water, and the blood

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Date: 5/25/2025 2:01:00 PM
Tom, this is outstanding. I’m not in the same class as this artist. Well done.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/25/2025 2:19:00 PM
Muchos gracias from both of us
Date: 3/9/2025 9:43:00 PM
Hey Tommy, This is Freddy Max's comment on 'The Spirit, The Water & The Blood', which I'm copying you into below. You wouldn't have seen it without visiting the YT post. You can also see the actual comment by clicking onto the video on my YouTube channel "@FreddyMaxOfficial 5 hours ago Wow!! Such an amazing and powerful song, story, and video!! The man's childhood is similar to mine. I had many chances to wonder off the straight and narrow path. Although I did wonder off the path a few times, God placed certain people in my life to guide me back. Thank you, Tom, Maria, and Ron for this amazing story!!! May it be a blessing for all who hear and see it!!" Hugs Maria PS - It's a pity that number of view's you've had on this page does not reflect on the video on the YouTube Channel, this is where it would get recognition. Obviously they are not going there - Thought I would mention it.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/10/2025 7:01:00 AM
Very cool. I'm going to check out the comments on YT
Date: 2/7/2025 2:32:00 PM
Powerful write. Liken the water and blood which ran from His side, the light of redemption and forgiveness shines forth uninhibited, for... the purchased spiritual gifts of mercy and grace are available to all who come with true repentance. I enjoyed the video immensely! Thank you. Love, Blessings and Faith...
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/7/2025 4:58:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 2/1/2025 6:44:00 AM
Awesome lyrics, Tommy. I could feel the depth of it. Very demure, very graceful and inspiring. The mercy of God keeps us and flushes every other thing that doesn't align with it..
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/1/2025 11:11:00 AM
In death he found forgiveness and peace
Date: 1/26/2025 7:00:00 AM
It was a great honor to read these lyrics. Glory to GOD for HIS enduring mercy and unmeasurable love. And thanks to GOD for "THE WATER, THE SPIRIT and THE BLOOD. May GOD reward your faith greatly in heaven, SOLDIER of JESUS CHRIST. This song touched my soul and tears dropped. GOD IS GOOD ALL THE TIME. Thanks for your comment on my poem as well, my redeemed brethren.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/26/2025 5:24:00 PM
I'm so glad you enjoyed my country western ditty
Date: 1/12/2025 5:42:00 AM
Fine writing Tom with good imagery and expression. Blessings,Gordon
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/12/2025 5:46:00 AM
Glad you liked my little country song
Date: 1/11/2025 7:19:00 AM
Tough and realistic. I like where you put your faith in this poem. That is what saved me from my childhood past. Outstanding
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/11/2025 7:29:00 AM
Very nice. Thx
Date: 1/10/2025 1:22:00 PM
I find your song deeply moving and it carries a raw, redemptive power and your storytelling feels personal and vulnerable, reflecting on a life transformed by faith even in the face of ultimate accountability. They did a beautiful job with the video, too.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/10/2025 1:42:00 PM
This song and Mary Rogers both arranged by Maria with my lyrics. Thx so much
Date: 1/2/2025 12:37:00 AM
Awesome
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/11/2025 7:29:00 AM
Thx Deb
Date: 12/29/2024 1:01:00 AM
Amazing team work on this! So very well done on making it to the top 100. Great job and lyrically powerful, Tom. Blessings Sx :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/29/2024 5:44:00 AM
Hey thx much. Credit to Maria and Ron
Date: 12/27/2024 1:45:00 PM
The new Bob Dylan. Congratulations on this being no 2 on best new poets list. MH
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/29/2024 5:45:00 AM
Wi bibibibibibi (Curly)
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Matthew Herfurth
Date: 12/27/2024 1:57:00 PM
Yip, yip.
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/27/2024 1:48:00 PM
More like Johnny C. But thx for the compliment
Date: 12/21/2024 1:53:00 AM
O Blood and Water, which gushed forth from the Heart of Jesus, as a fount of Mercy for us, I trust in You! :-). (John 19:34-37)
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Michelle Smith
Date: 12/21/2024 11:52:00 AM
:-)
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/21/2024 5:50:00 AM
Thx so much
Date: 12/20/2024 12:49:00 PM
Dear Tom, this is an awesome poetic production. Your lyric is deep, rich, compelling. A soulful narrative expressed with the passion of a soul well searched and found to be redeemed. Redemption is a potent force and so is your songwriting. Congrats to you, Maria and Ron for this stunning poetic and video creation. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/20/2024 1:12:00 PM
Appreciate your visiting this one. I've tried my hand at lyrics a number of times but only this one and Mary Rogers have had staying power
Date: 12/8/2024 8:25:00 AM
Loving this. Deep, I love the art
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/8/2024 9:25:00 AM
Thx Fred
Date: 12/1/2024 11:10:00 AM
Wow, another wonderful song by the wonderful world of Woody. Thanks for sharing!
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/1/2024 5:53:00 PM
Your welcome Ben
Date: 11/30/2024 1:50:00 AM
Great poem. Kind wishes, Kai
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/1/2024 5:52:00 PM
Coo
Date: 11/22/2024 6:46:00 PM
Oh! You're a lyric man, indeed. This is superb talent. Honestly... writing a song is a talent I wish I possessed. So many great lines here. Its especially wonderful because of the redeptive message. Well done.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/22/2024 7:59:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it Eileen
Date: 11/21/2024 9:28:00 AM
Great redemptive story and song! Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/21/2024 9:56:00 AM
Thx for compliment
Date: 11/13/2024 8:27:00 AM
This is such a wonderful poem. What a story. I can feel the pain and the redemption and that is very close to my heart. Congratulations on your win. Sending you loving wishes, Kai
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/13/2024 9:08:00 AM
Thx Michael
Date: 11/9/2024 8:37:00 AM
Wow! I love this lyric, Tom, simply awesome work and so meaningful:) love the lesson of forgiveness at the end, it's so hard to forgive the person who killed one's husband, the lady reminds me of Graham Staines' wife:)
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/9/2024 9:31:00 AM
Hmmm I'll have to look that up. Thx Jo
Date: 11/9/2024 7:58:00 AM
"Mary Rogers" is an excellent poem, Tommy, but this one is equally good. I read it minus/with the video and was impressed both times. We all make mistakes in life and forgiveness plays a big part in how we deal with them. ~ Maria & Ron have done another excellent job...well done! (liked the I'll pay the penalty key-change) // paul
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/9/2024 9:32:00 AM
Yes that part rocked! Welcome to the party Paul
Date: 11/8/2024 7:12:00 AM
Love this! What great lyrics! And the video is amazing. Great job!
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/8/2024 7:52:00 AM
I'm glad you liked it Karen
Date: 11/6/2024 11:59:00 AM
Great lyrics great song, enjoyed reading and watching, nice one Tom. I do love when a comment rhymes lol.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/9/2024 5:36:00 AM
Ha! I was better looking twenty years ago
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John Read
Date: 11/9/2024 5:35:00 AM
Hi Tom, that's a better profile picture.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/6/2024 12:38:00 PM
Thank you Mr Read, sir
Date: 11/6/2024 10:50:00 AM
Very true to death..And the life He gives Tom.. I don't know if you have come across (the true Story) of two young Irishmen who went to Falaraki a Greek island, on the night they went To a bar..There were some off duty soldiers There one was aggresive and drunk he picked On one of them and despite the lads attempts To placate him the man assulted the lad i think With a glass i cant recall if it was already broken? Anyway the damage was so bad he died within minutes..At a later point his-
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/6/2024 12:39:00 PM
Ooh, that true story is even better. Thx Joe
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Joe Maverick
Date: 11/6/2024 10:52:00 AM
Grieving mother went to the Very cell the murderer was In and forgave him. I dont know what time elapsed Between the two events.?
Date: 11/4/2024 10:55:00 AM
Hello Tom, I was glad I stopped by to listen to your song, and yes, Maria always does a great job. I love the words, for I always think that the Spirit, the water, and the blood saved us. Wonderful, and I was thankful that I stopped by! Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/4/2024 12:08:00 PM
Much thx Daniel and now that Halloween is over I'm sure I'll be visiting your next
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