Forgiveness Premiere Contest Winner


As dawn would bring no daylight without dark
empty night; the clearest day no beauty hold
without the dreary rainstorm's dismal mark.
As spring would bring no rebirth without cold
winter sleep; the fallen snow no cleansing
without the ashen stain of fall.  As love
would bring no healing without the stinging
wounds of hate; and laughter give no joy of
gladness without the woeful tears of pain.
As peace would have no glory in its quest
without the fear of war.  Life's thrill would wane,
no meaning hold, without the awe of death.
As heaven is no prize without hell's fires therein;
forgiveness is no virtue without the sinner's sin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 12/26/2023 4:36:00 AM
Oh wow! A loft orientation of acceptance of what is, paving way for forgiveness as a given. Warmest congratulations on your trophy win, with this superb sonnet, dear Sandra, God bless
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Date: 12/26/2023 2:55:00 AM
Brilliantly written as a poetic exposition and a worthy win, Sandra. Very well done and blessings for this season :)
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Date: 12/25/2023 7:10:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on winning the Forgiveness Premiere Contest! Your work is a testament to your creativity and dedication. Keep up the great work! ?????? - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 12/24/2023 4:40:00 PM
Thank you for entering your forgiveness poem into the contest. It is a blessing to read. Congrats on your trophy win.
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Date: 6/27/2017 6:43:00 AM
A sonnet polished in a most unique way! Lines that seem to end but continue on. Great message. Congrats and saving!
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Date: 10/13/2015 1:09:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Sandra!
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Date: 10/10/2015 12:02:00 PM
sweet win. SKAT
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 12/26/2023 4:23:00 PM
Where r u?
Date: 10/9/2015 6:51:00 AM
How philosophical Sandra! Congrats on your win! Balveen
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Date: 10/8/2015 9:24:00 PM
Sandra, I enjoyed reading this piece tonight. " As love would bring no healing without the stinging wounds of hate." Wow! Such powerful words of truth.Excellent message.Congratulations on your win it was well deserved:-)Alexis 7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/9/2015 8:44:00 PM
Hi Alexis, thank you so much for your visit, congratulations and encouraging comments and support. I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/8/2015 8:30:00 PM
another interesting variation on the modern sonnet, very beautiful, it has a traditional feel to it and yet it is totally contemporary - congrats on your win in the contest! :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/9/2015 8:43:00 PM
Thank you, Charlotte. I appreciate your visit, congrats, and uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/8/2015 5:29:00 PM
Excellent Sandra! You have written this like a master. I am fav'ing it! Congratulations my friend! #7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/8/2015 7:18:00 PM
Hi Connie, thank you so much for your generous support with your outstanding comment, FAV, 7 and congrats! I so much appreciate it! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/8/2015 4:42:00 PM
A wonderful message Sandra many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/8/2015 7:17:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/3/2015 11:00:00 AM
What a beautiful collection of words! I have to say this spoke to my heart. Thanks for ministering!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/3/2015 4:11:00 PM
Hello Darren, thank you for visiting my poem! I appreciate your positive comments so much. Thanks again, Sandra
Date: 10/2/2015 6:40:00 PM
Dear Sandra What a sad yet meaningful write of deeply felt feelings, cheri
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/3/2015 8:22:00 PM
Dear Cherl, thank you so much for your visit and supportive comments. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 10/2/2015 3:51:00 AM
Hello Sandra, A most excellent sonnet indeed. Congratulations on the POTD honor! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/2/2015 9:27:00 AM
Hi Gary, so nice of your to visit my poem! I appreciate your supportive comment and congrats! Thank you, Sandra
Date: 10/1/2015 10:29:00 PM
So true. We must be able to feel sadness in order to enjoy happiness. Love the message Sandra. Congratulations on POTD.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/2/2015 9:28:00 AM
Thanks for your visit, Tim, and for you kind comments and congratulations. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 10/1/2015 9:29:00 PM
I've never read such a beautiful and profound description of forgiveness. Extremely impressive Sandra. Looking forward to reading more from you....Sassy
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/2/2015 9:29:00 AM
Dear Miss Sassy, so nice of you to visit my poem and leave such positive and supportive comments. I really appreciate it and thank you so much! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/1/2015 4:51:00 PM
WOW! flawless. Thank you
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2015 7:23:00 PM
Thank you, Russell! Sandra
Date: 10/1/2015 2:59:00 PM
Forgiveness is no virtue without the sinner's sin. You wrote truth with such ease. Great read
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2015 7:23:00 PM
Hi Dew, I appreciate your visit and comment. Thank you, Sandra
Date: 10/1/2015 1:53:00 PM
What a wonderful choice for POTD, congratulations.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2015 5:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Richard! Nice surprise this morning...first time for POTD for me! Sandra
Date: 10/1/2015 1:11:00 PM
- Back with: CONGRATULATIONS !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2015 5:34:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise, I appreciate your return with your congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/1/2015 1:08:00 PM
Love your write Sandra a well deserved POTD
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2015 5:38:00 PM
Thank you, Michael, for your supportive comment! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 10/1/2015 12:45:00 PM
Congrats on POTD.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2015 5:39:00 PM
I appreciate your congratulations, Miraj! Thank you so much. Sandra
Date: 10/1/2015 11:08:00 AM
You clearly illustrate the complementary nature of life in this work. You show the ying and the yang of existence here. Congratulations on being the POTD! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2015 5:42:00 PM
Hello Matthew, thank you so much for visiting my poem and for your supportive comments and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/1/2015 10:21:00 AM
Great job! :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2015 7:17:00 PM
Hi Laura, thank you so much. I appreciate your visit and nice comment. Sandra
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