Premiere Contest WinnerForgiveness


As dawn would bring no daylight without dark
empty night; the clearest day no beauty hold
without the dreary rainstorm's dismal mark.
As spring would bring no rebirth without cold
winter sleep; the fallen snow no cleansing
without the ashen stain of fall.  As love
would bring no healing without the stinging
wounds of hate; and laughter give no joy of
gladness without the woeful tears of pain.
As peace would have no glory in its quest
without the fear of war.  Life's thrill would wane,
no meaning hold, without the awe of death.
As heaven is no prize without hell's fires therein;
forgiveness is no virtue without the sinner's sin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Seeker Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 4:36 AM
Oh wow! A loft orientation of acceptance of what is, paving way for forgiveness as a given. Warmest congratulations on your trophy win, with this superb sonnet, dear Sandra, God bless
Scott Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 2:55 AM
Brilliantly written as a poetic exposition and a worthy win, Sandra. Very well done and blessings for this season :)
Rodgers Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 7:10 PM
Sandra, congratulations on winning the Forgiveness Premiere Contest! Your work is a testament to your creativity and dedication. Keep up the great work! ?????? - Blessings, Daniel
Liguori Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 4:40 PM
Thank you for entering your forgiveness poem into the contest. It is a blessing to read. Congrats on your trophy win.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 6:43 AM
A sonnet polished in a most unique way! Lines that seem to end but continue on. Great message. Congrats and saving!
A. Sharma Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 1:09 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Sandra!
A  Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 12:02 PM
sweet win. SKAT
Liguori Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 4:23 PM
Where r u?
Cheema Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 6:51 AM
How philosophical Sandra! Congrats on your win! Balveen
Y. Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 9:24 PM
Sandra, I enjoyed reading this piece tonight. " As love would bring no healing without the stinging wounds of hate." Wow! Such powerful words of truth.Excellent message.Congratulations on your win it was well deserved:-)Alexis 7
Haight Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 8:44 PM
Hi Alexis, thank you so much for your visit, congratulations and encouraging comments and support. I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Puddifoot Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 8:30 PM
another interesting variation on the modern sonnet, very beautiful, it has a traditional feel to it and yet it is totally contemporary - congrats on your win in the contest! :)
Haight Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 8:43 PM
Thank you, Charlotte. I appreciate your visit, congrats, and uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 5:29 PM
Excellent Sandra! You have written this like a master. I am fav'ing it! Congratulations my friend! #7
Haight Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 7:18 PM
Hi Connie, thank you so much for your generous support with your outstanding comment, FAV, 7 and congrats! I so much appreciate it! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 4:42 PM
A wonderful message Sandra many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 7:17 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Wadel Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 11:00 AM
What a beautiful collection of words! I have to say this spoke to my heart. Thanks for ministering!
Haight Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 4:11 PM
Hello Darren, thank you for visiting my poem! I appreciate your positive comments so much. Thanks again, Sandra
Dunn Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 6:40 PM
Dear Sandra What a sad yet meaningful write of deeply felt feelings, cheri
Haight Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 8:22 PM
Dear Cherl, thank you so much for your visit and supportive comments. Much appreciated. Sandra
Bateman Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 3:51 AM
Hello Sandra, A most excellent sonnet indeed. Congratulations on the POTD honor! Cheers and Best, Gary
Haight Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 9:27 AM
Hi Gary, so nice of your to visit my poem! I appreciate your supportive comment and congrats! Thank you, Sandra
Smith Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 10:29 PM
So true. We must be able to feel sadness in order to enjoy happiness. Love the message Sandra. Congratulations on POTD.
Haight Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 9:28 AM
Thanks for your visit, Tim, and for you kind comments and congratulations. Much appreciated. Sandra
Sassy Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 9:29 PM
I've never read such a beautiful and profound description of forgiveness. Extremely impressive Sandra. Looking forward to reading more from you....Sassy
Haight Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 9:29 AM
Dear Miss Sassy, so nice of you to visit my poem and leave such positive and supportive comments. I really appreciate it and thank you so much! Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 4:51 PM
WOW! flawless. Thank you
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 7:23 PM
Thank you, Russell! Sandra
Dew Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 2:59 PM
Forgiveness is no virtue without the sinner's sin. You wrote truth with such ease. Great read
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 7:23 PM
Hi Dew, I appreciate your visit and comment. Thank you, Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 1:53 PM
What a wonderful choice for POTD, congratulations.
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 5:33 PM
Thank you so much, Richard! Nice surprise this morning...first time for POTD for me! Sandra
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 1:11 PM
- Back with: CONGRATULATIONS !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 5:34 PM
Hi Anne Lise, I appreciate your return with your congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Tor Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 1:08 PM
Love your write Sandra a well deserved POTD
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 5:38 PM
Thank you, Michael, for your supportive comment! Much appreciated. Sandra
Raha Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 12:45 PM
Congrats on POTD.
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 5:39 PM
I appreciate your congratulations, Miraj! Thank you so much. Sandra
Anish Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 11:08 AM
You clearly illustrate the complementary nature of life in this work. You show the ying and the yang of existence here. Congratulations on being the POTD! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 5:42 PM
Hello Matthew, thank you so much for visiting my poem and for your supportive comments and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 10:21 AM
Great job! :)
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 7:17 PM
Hi Laura, thank you so much. I appreciate your visit and nice comment. Sandra
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