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I asked you what I have done wrong But there is no response - just a stony silence No words can convey my guilt, my inner sadness This will be my last goodbye My final letter to you my love Tears flow down my ashen face Tears of sadness, tears of regret Drip Drip Drip Drip Tears fall on the paper as I write They mingle with the damp blue ink The inky water leaches into the paper Its colour starts to bleed and spread Until it fades into nothingness I am empty, devoid of emotion I can say no more Forgive me for being me Forgive me for caring Forgive me for loving you Goodbye forever 02~15~15

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Date: 3/7/2018 9:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jan, beautiful and sad ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/8/2018 12:51:00 AM
Thanks eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2018 9:00:00 AM
My my Jan, what an amazing write! Congrats on a fine piece of free verse, and your win!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/5/2018 11:28:00 AM
Thanks so much John, there is a little more to me than just a humourist and i surprise with an occasional serious poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2018 5:57:00 AM
wow Jan! You really got me with this one! those last 2 words..goodbye forever, says it all. thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 3/5/2018 11:25:00 AM
Oh thanks luloo I surprise people with the occasional seriously poem and this was written some years back:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/5/2016 2:32:00 PM
That hurt my heart, it does... But in a beautiful way, Jan
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/14/2017 11:53:00 AM
Thanks for the comment Darren Sorry I missed replying before:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/30/2016 4:50:00 AM
That is heart wrenching. Very nice and congrats!
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Date: 7/30/2016 6:58:00 AM
Thanks so much Tanis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/28/2016 10:35:00 PM
Are you sure it's the very last letter? ;-) Love the Drip, Drip, Drip. Congrats!
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Date: 7/29/2016 7:25:00 AM
As it was a suicide letter I don't think there will be another letter lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/28/2016 10:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,,,,,,
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Date: 7/29/2016 7:25:00 AM
Thanks Janis:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/28/2016 9:56:00 PM
Drip, drip, drip, Jan..love it, Congratulations on your awesome win in my "Premiere Contest." Enjoy the few words I left on my blog. Forever *SKAT*
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Date: 7/29/2016 7:26:00 AM
Guess I'm just a drip Skat lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/26/2015 6:45:00 PM
Thank you Jan for sharing this poem with us, as it really touches on how I have felt a lot of the time in mmy life. I have voiced my feelings so many times only to be met with silence..keep writing!! Hugs to you
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Date: 2/26/2015 6:48:00 PM
I have no idea where the inspiration from this came from - I have to go with the flow of my pen - but it is an unusual write for me:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/26/2015 4:49:00 AM
Whoa.. Your pen captivates me. The ethos in this write, the style, how you phrase.. It pulls on the heart, Jan.. I love your winner!
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Date: 2/26/2015 6:23:00 AM
Thanks Dave - I have no idea where the inspiration from this one came from - I simply have to go with the flow of my pen:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/22/2015 6:57:00 PM
Kinda of sad :(, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 2/22/2015 7:00:00 PM
I have no idea where this sad write came from Ed - i just have to go with the flow of my pen:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/22/2015 9:46:00 AM
Back with my congratulations for your placement in the contest... well deserved !! :)
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Date: 2/22/2015 10:51:00 AM
Thanks Debra - i will get round to congratulating the winners but life issues are taking precedent at the moment:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/22/2015 9:18:00 AM
Deeply emotional words there, Jan! Thank you for this beautifully versed poem and Congrats on your win!!!
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Guatami:-) This is so so different from my usual writes - i just have to go with the flow of my muse:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/21/2015 10:27:00 PM
Jan, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 2/22/2015 6:37:00 AM
Thanks Skat:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/21/2015 8:54:00 PM
Nice win Jan... LINDA
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2015 6:37:00 AM
thanks so much Linda:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/21/2015 7:26:00 PM
Hi Jan, stopping back to congratulate you on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2015 6:37:00 AM
thanks so much Sandra - i have a lot of catching up to do on contest congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/21/2015 4:17:00 PM
Dropping back to congratulate you on the win
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Date: 2/22/2015 6:36:00 AM
thanks so much Janet:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/21/2015 2:21:00 PM
Jan, congrats. I liked the pic you included too.
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Date: 2/22/2015 6:35:00 AM
Thanks so much Rob - i have no idea where this deep sad write came from:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/20/2015 6:26:00 AM
Powerful and emotionally sad poetry Jan, hugs, James xx
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Date: 2/20/2015 8:26:00 AM
I do love this emotional write James - I just have to go with the flow of my pen - wrote the 2 limericks and this on the same night:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2015 2:12:00 PM
Sensitive, beautiful write a sad emotional poem for a plea. Love your write and good luck in the contest. Blessings eve 7
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Date: 2/17/2015 2:15:00 PM
Thanks Eve I have no idea where this came from - I wrote my 2 cheeky limericks in the same night - just have to go with the flow lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 12:20:00 PM
So heartbreaking !!! But ever so well expressed !! This packs a punch and I'm sure it will do well in the contest. Good Luck !!
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Date: 2/16/2015 12:30:00 PM
Thanks so much Debra:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 11:50:00 AM
Jan, wow what an impressive write, so full of emotion, just wonderful and good luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/16/2015 12:02:00 PM
Many thanks for your lovely comment broken wings:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 9:48:00 AM
Tears obliterate even the words. That is sadness for sure. Love, daver
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/16/2015 10:52:00 AM
Thanks so much Daver:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 8:06:00 AM
A poignant poem, written in awesome hardhitting response to a faithless lover. Wow! Befitting and artsy, creative and great to read! So nice to read u again. Hapy valentines day, take care
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/16/2015 10:52:00 AM
Thanks so much - its not written from personal experience it just flowed from my pen:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 8:05:00 AM
Wow!! Reading the poem and the comments. When I first got in to creative writing it was easier for me to write than to read the works of others. I could certainly relate to what you have wrote. Forgive and Forget is always challenge. I know exactly what you mean once I start writing I never know what it will be. I enjoyed the read and your comments as well.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/16/2015 10:51:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Robert - I just have to go with the flow and see what happens:-) Hugs jan xxx
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