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Forgive and Forget

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I asked you what I have done wrong But there is no response - just a stony silence No words can convey my guilt, my inner sadness This will be my last goodbye My final letter to you my love Tears flow down my ashen face Tears of sadness, tears of regret Drip Drip Drip Drip Tears fall on the paper as I write They mingle with the damp blue ink The inky water leaches into the paper Its colour starts to bleed and spread Until it fades into nothingness I am empty, devoid of emotion I can say no more Forgive me for being me Forgive me for caring Forgive me for loving you Goodbye forever 02~15~15

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/7/2018 9:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan, beautiful and sad ! Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2018 12:51:00 AM

Thanks eve:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton

Date: 3/5/2018 9:00:00 AM

My my Jan, what an amazing write! Congrats on a fine piece of free verse, and your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2018 11:28:00 AM

Thanks so much John, there is a little more to me than just a humourist and i surprise with an occasional serious poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 3/5/2018 5:57:00 AM

wow Jan! You really got me with this one! those last 2 words..goodbye forever, says it all. thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2018 11:25:00 AM

Oh thanks luloo I surprise people with the occasional seriously poem and this was written some years back:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White

Date: 10/5/2016 2:32:00 PM

That hurt my heart, it does... But in a beautiful way, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2017 11:53:00 AM

Thanks for the comment Darren Sorry I missed replying before:-( hugs Jan xx

Tanis Troutman

Date: 7/30/2016 4:50:00 AM

That is heart wrenching. Very nice and congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/30/2016 6:58:00 AM

Thanks so much Tanis:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Arnone

Date: 7/28/2016 10:35:00 PM

Are you sure it's the very last letter? ;-) Love the Drip, Drip, Drip. Congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2016 7:25:00 AM

As it was a suicide letter I don't think there will be another letter lol:-) hugs jan xx

Janis Thompson

Date: 7/28/2016 10:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,,,,,,

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2016 7:25:00 AM

Thanks Janis:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 7/28/2016 9:56:00 PM

Drip, drip, drip, Jan..love it, Congratulations on your awesome win in my "Premiere Contest." Enjoy the few words I left on my blog. Forever *SKAT*

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2016 7:26:00 AM

Guess I'm just a drip Skat lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Donnay

Date: 2/26/2015 6:45:00 PM

Thank you Jan for sharing this poem with us, as it really touches on how I have felt a lot of the time in mmy life. I have voiced my feelings so many times only to be met with silence..keep writing!! Hugs to you

Jan Allison
Date: 2/26/2015 6:48:00 PM

I have no idea where the inspiration from this came from - I have to go with the flow of my pen - but it is an unusual write for me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Edward Ebbs

Date: 2/22/2015 6:57:00 PM

Kinda of sad :(, congrats on your win :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2015 7:00:00 PM

I have no idea where this sad write came from Ed - i just have to go with the flow of my pen:-) Hugs Jan xx

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/22/2015 9:46:00 AM

Back with my congratulations for your placement in the contest... well deserved !! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2015 10:51:00 AM

Thanks Debra - i will get round to congratulating the winners but life issues are taking precedent at the moment:-) Hugs jan xx

Gautami Phookan

Date: 2/22/2015 9:18:00 AM

Deeply emotional words there, Jan! Thank you for this beautifully versed poem and Congrats on your win!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2015 9:24:00 AM

Thanks so much Guatami:-) This is so so different from my usual writes - i just have to go with the flow of my muse:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 2/21/2015 10:27:00 PM

Jan, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2015 6:37:00 AM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2015 8:54:00 PM

Nice win Jan... LINDA

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2015 6:37:00 AM

thanks so much Linda:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/21/2015 7:26:00 PM

Hi Jan, stopping back to congratulate you on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2015 6:37:00 AM

thanks so much Sandra - i have a lot of catching up to do on contest congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Janet Eaton

Date: 2/21/2015 4:17:00 PM

Dropping back to congratulate you on the win

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2015 6:36:00 AM

thanks so much Janet:-) hugs Jan xx

Rob Carmack

Date: 2/21/2015 2:21:00 PM

Jan, congrats. I liked the pic you included too.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2015 6:35:00 AM

Thanks so much Rob - i have no idea where this deep sad write came from:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 2/20/2015 6:26:00 AM

Powerful and emotionally sad poetry Jan, hugs, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/20/2015 8:26:00 AM

I do love this emotional write James - I just have to go with the flow of my pen - wrote the 2 limericks and this on the same night:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 2/17/2015 2:12:00 PM

Sensitive, beautiful write a sad emotional poem for a plea. Love your write and good luck in the contest. Blessings eve 7

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2015 2:15:00 PM

Thanks Eve I have no idea where this came from - I wrote my 2 cheeky limericks in the same night - just have to go with the flow lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/16/2015 12:20:00 PM

So heartbreaking !!! But ever so well expressed !! This packs a punch and I'm sure it will do well in the contest. Good Luck !!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/16/2015 12:30:00 PM

Thanks so much Debra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 2/16/2015 11:50:00 AM

Jan, wow what an impressive write, so full of emotion, just wonderful and good luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 2/16/2015 12:02:00 PM

Many thanks for your lovely comment broken wings:-) Hugs Jan xx

Daver Austin

Date: 2/16/2015 9:48:00 AM

Tears obliterate even the words. That is sadness for sure. Love, daver

Jan Allison
Date: 2/16/2015 10:52:00 AM

Thanks so much Daver:-) Hugs Jan xx

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 2/16/2015 8:06:00 AM

A poignant poem, written in awesome hardhitting response to a faithless lover. Wow! Befitting and artsy, creative and great to read! So nice to read u again. Hapy valentines day, take care

Jan Allison
Date: 2/16/2015 10:52:00 AM

Thanks so much - its not written from personal experience it just flowed from my pen:-) Hugs jan xx

Robert Heemstra

Date: 2/16/2015 8:05:00 AM

Wow!! Reading the poem and the comments. When I first got in to creative writing it was easier for me to write than to read the works of others. I could certainly relate to what you have wrote. Forgive and Forget is always challenge. I know exactly what you mean once I start writing I never know what it will be. I enjoyed the read and your comments as well.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/16/2015 10:51:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Robert - I just have to go with the flow and see what happens:-) Hugs jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/16/2015 8:00:00 AM

That makes my tears want to follow that steady river your words have created. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 2/16/2015 10:50:00 AM

Thanks Cas I have no idea where this came from it just flowed from my pen:-) Hugs jan xx