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Premium Member The Night's Alive and A-Shiver

~ The night's alive and a-shiver ~


  The moon's a sliver
  a hammock without strings
  a pale banana with wings
  The night's alive and a-shiver 

  Just you and me on a musical spree
  hitting the clubs, dancing up a storm
  sleek in our costumes, displaying fine form 
  Doing the splits cross the floor, spread-kneed

  The hour grows late, but what do we care
  feeling boundless energy nearly exploding
  at midnight we drink a toast to re-loading
  Ahead of us lay new and brave dares

  Tick-tock, one o'clock; it is already two
  Our hearts are still young, but our feat feel weary
  We retreat to a corner, vision somewhat bleary
  So we sing Auld Lang Syne and down a few...

  Brrrrrriiiing goes the alarm. 6 am.  Can it be?
  Time to shake a leg, get out ahead of the day
  The music and dancing yet whirling in our heads
  We turn off the blinking alarm, and go back to bed

Premium Member Creativity

Robert’s crafted a fine form
of poetry we will sup
drink from philosophic cup
his creativity’s now reborn.


Form "Lind30"

Premium Member Born With a Bent Silver Spoon

I'm in fine form on this sunny afternoon
Feel like frolicking like a silly baboon
What's strange about that
Quite normal for this brat
Brought into this world with a bent silver spoon


© Jack Ellison 2015


Premium Member Palindrome Couplets

Wise ways work -- Work ways wise
Love lines lurk -- Lurk lines love


Deep sleep dance -- Dance sleep deep
Craft clear chance -- Chance clear craft


Voice strange choice -- Choice strange voice
Dream fond poise -- Poise fond dream


Live, love, laugh -- Laugh, love, live
Set sure stuff -- Stuff sure set


Bloom good seed -- Seed good bloom
Form fine feed -- Feed fine form


Joy cheers feel -- Feel cheers joy
Touch and heal -- Heal and touch


Style fond smile -- Smile fond style
Grand sounds pile -- Pile sounds grand




Leon Enriquez
11 May 2017
Singapore

Not If I Should See You First

a good axe, a fine form and a full house

  can you dig this scene of clockwork clowns?

    little hierarchies 'mongst the mediocre

 I'm all too often hit when this stuff comes down

        watch that river running in reverse

 you will not see me, not if I should see you first
 
                            -

  the brothel basement, walled in, tortured soul

      blind to beauty from pillar to post

sings like a cowboy, never once saw a horse

'standing in what looks like bordelaise sauce

should you think that it could get no worse

  you don't phase me, not in any universe

                               -

         walk barefoot n' I've  got dirty feet

                 like any sailor far away from sea
        
                               -

  with a little love, what is there to lose?

      no one going nowhere no time soon

    inane skeletons, all poised for conquest

     n' falling nothing short of the burlesque

         over-hyped, deluded amateurs 

we'll step outside, I'll take anything that hurts

                                -

            watching the river run in reverse

         you will not see me, not if I should see you first







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How I Might Taste You

How I might taste you
in each curve of your being
entwined below each fastening
that I breath apart with my patience
cherishing you longer than any could last
I find some deep meaning in your kiss
and there I know tranquility that gives
your new light to a forgotten day
beholding you naked in form
I gasp at my reaction deep
as you unfurl your beauty
and lay yourself open

With eyes of disbelief
finally at last alone in darkness
that is warmed by a glowing
that touches candles into flame
and quenches raging fires
that have burned a thousand years
to know the taste of your sweet kiss
and suckle the wisdom that flows
from every pore of your being
into every crevasse of my heart
that is open to love you

Fly in to this circle my angel
and see this place to lay your head
in this honey field of golden laughter
that I've prepared for your blessing
where I have labored long to make
myself a better man so that you
can finally fly free and be you
the you I long to see dancing
across the body of a rainbow
into the sunset upon ocean
where God has called you
to be his Goddess sweet

Come into bloom with your soul open
to be touched with every sweetness
and told a thousand evenings
you are the one I have known
would someday bless my shores
without crashing upon my beach
but only walk upon water
that kisses your feet
and says your name
that I love to hear

Be my sweet lover some night
for as long as you care to stay
in my open arms and hands
that long to wash your cares
and kiss each one of them away
making a pillow of hearts
perfectly suited to you
because I have watched you
and know the way you move
and how you love to lay

Then let me just gaze
at your loving image
as you sleep in silken covers
ruffled by a gentle breeze
blowing across your fine form
as I protect you from hiding
any longer in a dark cage
because I have freed you
to be yourself in full
by freeing myself
and loving you


Mr August

Mr. August, the mature man with shining golden hair the color of a ripe cornfield,
He is slightly graying at the temples but his eyes are clear pools of deepest blue,
There are hard lines in his face, they are deep, he's strong it's part of who he is
He stands and looks around him heavy hands on his hips a tall man of rural beauty,

His serene presence hints of much wisdom a good age make his company so delightful,
Casting his eyes as far as can be seen he smiles because all is right for this time,
The rich soils are dry and pillows of clouds wisp across light blue turquoise skies,
The dark greenness of the fields, the meadows and the pastures are strong and sweet.

He watches cattle grazing on the richest grasses and they low because they are well,
The day warms and the cows lay easy, chewing cud a sight worthy of a painter’s hand,
Warm breezes temper the sun as a second spring is flowing through the healthy trees,
He nods to the mighty oak the king of the woods and forests and the trees wave back.

His eyes catch heather on the moors and the dust devils on the heath's new flowers,
They are all there in fine form, dog roses, blue chicory, hawk weed and honeysuckle,
And as he stands nearer he breathes sweet perfumes from his August summer gardens,
Looking to his glades knee deep in grass the blue campanula dances a flowers dance.

Nuts growing fast they are fat and green they hang in the tall hedges and woodlands,
There are more nuts in trees along old woodland lanes and deep in the dark forests,
He salutes the fading roses and kneels down to thank them they have done their duty,
Then waves goodbye to the foxglove with a warm smile and thanks her with a blown kiss.

Did the Foxglove blush, just a little?

Fresh Homemade Bread

Growing up my parents continuously brawled
Verbally and throwing things was the norm
This day was uniquely funny
My Sis thought it was not
As an adult my sister sees the comic side
Though she was left a little traumatized

The events that transpired left me mesmerized
Father was busy kneading bread with pride
Mother cooking stew in the pot
Day was nice and sunny
Until mom and dad started brewing up a storm
Juiced words and names were ultimately called

Dough enough to make twelve loaves was angrily balled 
Then thrown with strength, precision and fine form
Mom scurried like a swift bunny
As to the fridge Sis trot
Did not see it coming,  no time to jump aside
Dough pinned Sis's head to the fridge, she was pressurized

Jan 14, 2020
For Contest - A Little Memory 

* My sister was 5 years old, I was 11. It was like a cartoon.

Premium Member Hollow

Hide where you can,
Observe dark fear;
Live what you scan,
Lost in unclear;
Oblige in vain,
Work the static.
Troubles write plain,
Opt new magic.
Mind what you say,
Exceed your norms;
Live well each day,
Love hurls fine form;
Obey sure heart,
Word a grand start.




Leon Enriquez
07 February 2015
Singapore

Premium Member Fashion

Sweet siesta spreads
Dream dazzles dread


Puzzle piques peace
Effort earns ease


Fashion fine form
Nurture nice norms


Grace gathers gifts
Light laughter lifts


Vote vibrant volt
Bear booming bolt


Sure symbol signs
List lovely lines




Leon Enriquez
13 September 2015
Singapore

In Defence of Haiku

Haiku is a fine form 
You can get your message across
In just a few lines

Premium Member Soprano Soloist

A distinguished soprano named Dinah
sings arias in North Carolina.
But her favourite thing,
without doubt, is to sing
selections from Handel's Messiah.

With extraordinary vigor and pith
she sings "I Know My Redeemer Liveth".
When she goes to perform
she'll be in fine form
and precisely know how to giveth.
© Jim Healey  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Born With a Bent Silver Spoon

I'm in fine form on this sunny afternoon
Feel like frolicking like a silly old baboon
What's strange about that
Quite normal for this brat
Entered this world with a bent silver spoon

Mr August

Mr. August, the mature man with shining golden hair the color of a ripe cornfield,
He is slightly graying at the temples but his eyes are clear pools of deepest blue,
There are hard lines in his face, they are deep, he's strong it's part of who he is
He stands and looks around him heavy hands on his hips a tall man of rural beauty,

His serene presence hints of much wisdom a good age make his company so delightful,
Casting his eyes as far as can be seen he smiles because all is right for this time,
The rich soils are dry and pillows of clouds wisp across light blue turquoise skies,
The dark greenness of the fields, the meadows and the pastures are strong and sweet.

He watches cattle grazing on the richest grasses and they low because they are well,
The day warms and the cows lay easy, chewing cud a sight worthy of a painter’s hand,
Warm breezes temper the sun as a second spring is flowing through the healthy trees,
He nods to the mighty oak the king of the woods and forests and the trees wave back.

His eyes catch heather on the moors and the dust devils on the heath's new flowers,
They are all there in fine form, dog roses, blue chicory, hawk weed and honeysuckle,
And as he stands nearer he breathes sweet perfumes from his August summer gardens,
Looking to his glades knee deep in grass the blue campanula dances a flowers dance.

Nuts growing fast they are fat and green they hang in the tall hedges and woodlands,
There are more nuts in trees along old woodland lanes and deep in the dark forests,
He salutes the fading roses and kneels down to thank them they have done their duty,
Then waves goodbye to the foxglove with a warm smile and thanks her with a blown kiss.

Did the Foxglove blush, just a little?

Premium Member Persistence

Peace of mind feeds,
Etch fond details;
Room for fine seeds,
Seek to avail;
Indulge glad heart,
See to fine form;
Thrill a bold start,
Express new norms;
Note purpose clear,
Calm stillness grows,
Expound on cheer.
Now ever shows,
Opt to just be,
Worth you can see.




Leon Enriquez
01 January 2015
Singapore

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