Fresh Homemade Bread

Growing up my parents continuously brawled
Verbally and throwing things was the norm
This day was uniquely funny
My Sis thought it was not
As an adult my sister sees the comic side
Though she was left a little traumatized

The events that transpired left me mesmerized
Father was busy kneading bread with pride
Mother cooking stew in the pot
Day was nice and sunny
Until mom and dad started brewing up a storm
Juiced words and names were ultimately called

Dough enough to make twelve loaves was angrily balled 
Then thrown with strength, precision and fine form
Mom scurried like a swift bunny
As to the fridge Sis trot
Did not see it coming,  no time to jump aside
Dough pinned Sis's head to the fridge, she was pressurized

Jan 14, 2020
For Contest - A Little Memory 

* My sister was 5 years old, I was 11. It was like a cartoon.
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Lamoureux Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 10:28 AM
Ha ha, poor sis, unfortunately it wasn’t a close miss. Thanks for adding some humour to my morning.
Fenn Avatar
February 6, 2021 at 9:56 PM
Wow Cecilia! I guess this poem is like a tragi-comedy, funny and sad at the same time. It’s really clear, almost as if you filmed this scene. Good job!
Macfarlane Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 4:25 AM
Exactly...intense and hilarious the day was seared into my brain. Hugs
Allison Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 3:24 PM
I could picture the final scene, sad scenario with sparring parents but funny at the same time:-) hugs Jan xx
Macfarlane Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 4:16 AM
Yes, this day was a more humorous fight. Hugs
Downing  Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 10:35 AM
Lol! What a fun memory for you but not for your sister. Oh I enjoyed this one greatly :)
Macfarlane Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 4:17 AM
Happy I made you laugh. It is a funny memory. Hugs
Gondolf Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 6:25 AM
It's nice to be able to laugh now at our tense moments in the past. Best of luck in the contest, Cecilia. Hugs, John
Macfarlane Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:37 AM
Yes, I look back and laugh, it truly is the best medicine for tense moments. Thanks John. Hugs
Wolf Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 7:18 PM
You know, there was anger and tension in my house growing up, and your poem dredged up all the memories that I rarely think of anymore. Took me until past 35 to come to grips with all of it, and then let it go... As you can see, for me your great, and I mean great, write elicits no laughter, only sadness to think of the damage that such a marital relationship can cause... O.K., off my soapbox now: Once again, great write; superb contest entry, Cecilia. Best wishes, Gershon
Macfarlane Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:35 AM
So sorry if I dredged up unpleasant feelings, but happy to hear you were able to let it all go. Thanks Gershon. Hugs
Nicole Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 6:27 PM
Oh my !! "Dough pinned Sis's head to the fridge" Of course that wasn't funny then, but to look back- it brings a smile now. Thank you for sharing this trip down memory lane. :) Brandy
Macfarlane Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:39 AM
Glad you enjoyed my little memory and that I made you smile. It was a hilarious scene. Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 5:16 PM
oh my, making comedy relief out of it. I really LIKE that. Great poem!!
Macfarlane Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:40 AM
Thanks Andrea. Happy you liked and enjoyed. Hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 2:53 PM
A storm in the kitchen, an hilarious write Cecilia, though I guess it wasn’t funny at the time... Hugs, Belle :-)
Macfarlane Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:42 AM
For me it was funny, for my Sis not so much. Glad you it made you laugh. Hugs
Ball Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 12:03 PM
Good Grief! My husband and I fight too but so far we don't throw anything but insults. I would hate to have my head glued to the fridge by bread dough. It had to hurt. A fine write my friend with great expression and imagery. God Bless, JB
Macfarlane Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:44 AM
Thank you Judy. My sister was more shocked then hurt. Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 11:46 AM
Oh my goodness! I was mad once and hit a lamp that almost hit my daughter. I put myself in check. Anger is not a funny thing, no matter if you are riled up.
Macfarlane Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:46 AM
Anger certainly isn't, but I can't help but laugh at that outcome. Hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 8:22 AM
Good Lord. That was in part funny. Hope the parents learned their lesson. ~~
Macfarlane Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Throwing things were their thing when anger bubbled over. This day was funny, many others were not. Hugs
Cunningham Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 6:59 AM
Lol I could just picture the scene Cecilia, happy childhood memories. Tom
Macfarlane Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:51 AM
Yes this memory always makes me laugh. Hugs
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