Not If I Should See You First

a good axe, a fine form and a full house

  can you dig this scene of clockwork clowns?

    little hierarchies 'mongst the mediocre

 I'm all too often hit when this stuff comes down

        watch that river running in reverse

 you will not see me, not if I should see you first
 
                            -

  the brothel basement, walled in, tortured soul

      blind to beauty from pillar to post

sings like a cowboy, never once saw a horse

'standing in what looks like bordelaise sauce

should you think that it could get no worse

  you don't phase me, not in any universe

                               -

         walk barefoot n' I've  got dirty feet

                 like any sailor far away from sea
        
                               -

  with a little love, what is there to lose?

      no one going nowhere no time soon

    inane skeletons, all poised for conquest

     n' falling nothing short of the burlesque

         over-hyped, deluded amateurs 

we'll step outside, I'll take anything that hurts

                                -

            watching the river run in reverse

         you will not see me, not if I should see you first







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Date: 7/22/2016 6:36:00 PM
I've always loved your style, Paul. I really like!! You are always impressing with your original, fun and witty lyrical content.Always, Laura
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Date: 7/22/2016 7:41:00 PM
Thanks. One of these days I'm really going to make an effort. Lol. I'll keep trying. Rightly.
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Thanks. One of these days I'm really going to make an effort. Lol. I'll keep trying. Rightly.
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