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Not If I Should See You First

a good axe, a fine form and a full house can you dig this scene of clockwork clowns? little hierarchies 'mongst the mediocre I'm all too often hit when this stuff comes down watch that river running in reverse you will not see me, not if I should see you first - the brothel basement, walled in, tortured soul blind to beauty from pillar to post sings like a cowboy, never once saw a horse 'standing in what looks like bordelaise sauce should you think that it could get no worse you don't phase me, not in any universe - walk barefoot n' I've got dirty feet like any sailor far away from sea - with a little love, what is there to lose? no one going nowhere no time soon inane skeletons, all poised for conquest n' falling nothing short of the burlesque over-hyped, deluded amateurs we'll step outside, I'll take anything that hurts - watching the river run in reverse you will not see me, not if I should see you first <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< This is new, changes might occur. You like?

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Date: 7/22/2016 6:36:00 PM
I've always loved your style, Paul. I really like!! You are always impressing with your original, fun and witty lyrical content.Always, Laura
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Rightly Jennings
Date: 7/22/2016 7:41:00 PM
Thanks. One of these days I'm really going to make an effort. Lol. I'll keep trying. Rightly.
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Rightly Jennings
Date: 7/22/2016 7:31:00 PM
Thanks. One of these days I'm really going to make an effort. Lol. I'll keep trying. Rightly.

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