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Premium Member The Last Organ Grinder

Between paper-soft 
worlds of fragile 
imaginations, 
I float upon those
gossamer tulips 
that split every 
second of saccharine 
musings and 
eclipsed confessions, 
distinguishing all
photoelectric synonyms
of lachrymose 
stimuli towards 
glassy manipulations
of blood-fragranced sun. 

Everything that is 
sown in sweetened 
textures of afterglow-soil, 
always blossoms upon 
decayed fossils of 
frivolous fates, as 
balanced bullets have
forever pierced 
through the pulpy 
sheaths of nature's 
rainbow-blankets,
but their aged roots 
always adorn nourishing 
gemstones of 
ephemeral healing, 
to spread their wise 
branches across earth's
mirrors, as the thin
veil disappears. 

What is the raven-spade
-hearted impulse
without its nascent yet 
succulently flowing 
snow-white mist? 
What if, reality speaks
of those skies smitten with 
hypnotic illusions of
chess-shaped horizons? 

Have yin and yang ever
repelled each other's
rusty-maroon notes
that they whisper in 
immortal prelude? 

We have remained 
skillfully blindfolded to 
the isles of inceptions, 
swirling amidst ripples
of diamond-kismet 
estuaries, washing away 
consciences with
diplomatic dewdrops
of frosty maple fog. 
Tending to forget that, 
we are mere syzygy knights, 
crawling along 
slanting seesaws as 
bioluminescent bishops. 

Our schizophrenic 
threads have been 
tied to the aroma of 
poisoned satin within 
these final alphabets of 
enchante´ epitaphs, 
where life will be 
the last organ grinder 
of karma, playing 
an evanescent checkmate
which shall ascend 
every soulful spirit 
beyond Persephone's 
penumbral embrace.

Premium Member The Downs Syndrome Child

Someone near and dear to me 
Has a child with Downs Syndrome,
Who, more often than not
Is beyond difficult to control.

The little boy is six years old 
But acts as if he’s two,
He can’t speak at all, just yells a lot 
Throwing wild tantrums until he’s blue.

He likes throwing things around
As if everything’s a toy,
And has difficulty distinguishing
Between bad behavior and pure, ecstatic joy.

(And his mother is a nervous wreck, 
always picking up after the boy).

His fingers are his eyes at times
As textures are his friends,
If he doesn’t like the way it feels 
He won’t go there again.

And he likes to lay down on the ground
Balling up like a boulder,
Until someone comes to pick him up  
While he gives them his cold shoulder.

It’s difficult to fully describe
All the nuances of this child,
The range of his emotions 
From anger and sadness to his beautiful, blissful smile. 

(And his mother is a nervous wreck,
walking many lonely miles).

They wonder about his future
And those around him always near,
And wonder how much happiness
Will follow him through the years.

Will he learn to play an instrument 
Or dance and sing a song,
Is it possible he will marry someday
Will true love come along?  

Will he find friends who will love him
And treat him sweet and kind,
Or only those who will shun him
And close him off like blinds.

(And his mother is a nervous wreck,
And losing her own mind.
His mother is a nervous wreck
And loves him
All the time).

© Terrell Martin, 02/26/2025

Premium Member Cancer's Cost

Cancer's Cost

Cancer may ravage whole body parts
but it can never conquer resolute hearts.
Battered and bruised by aggressive procedures
we may hardly recognize our distinguishing features.

Remember this my friend, all hope is not lost
You can fight this evil enemy, but there is a cost.
The price is determination, a strong will to keep living
you have so much goodness left inside to keep giving.

Remember this my friend,
We are more than the sum of our human body parts
Cancer cannot kill the eternal love dwelling in our hearts!


John Derek Hamilton
December 21,2015


The Flight of the Butterfly For John

Floating in the air
Wavering in the breeze
Butterflies,
land with ease
(in my stomach as I read)....

Such passion,
such beauty
In the summer air
It's all around me
(when you are near ~so on I read)....

distinguishing you
and oh, my heart skips
to the tune
so much different
(with admiration I find
the butterflies.... the beauty) deep inside.....

Velvet, satin,
plain or platinum
Touching the degree
in which you speak to me
(where once upon I time,.... were butterflies).....

Yet I am still a worm,
trying so hard to be
beautiful in your sight
I crawl so willingly
(Yet beauty in distinction)

Free and falling

from the midnight air

into the great unknown

of the atmosphere ~
        the flight (metamorphosis) of the butterfly ~

Note: Thanks John, :)                 March 29th 2011

Premium Member Only Man

Only Man sees beauty in a star 
or gleans delight from a bird in flight.
And He's the only being thus far
that can discriminate wrong from right.

Only Man can accommodate hate
or feel the pain of love kept apart.
And alter the course of His own fate,
preventing problems before they start.

Only Man can decide to be kind
or separate His wants from His needs.
And ease the burdens of soul and mind,
while shaping His destiny through deeds.

Only Man can realize His dreams,
or understand He's destined to die.
And question what reality means,
distinguishing the truth from a lie.

Only Man believes He has a soul,
or that love exists within His heart.
And defining life, He takes control;
expressing Hope through His works of art.

Premium Member A Melancholic

A disease intrinsic and quiet
infesting a soul which submissively accepts
presenting self inflicting suffering
to the body which covers it.

The record keeper of happiness
loses his work from gross idleness.
The fuel of laughter
even with words and lines so sophisticated
making the inanimate change state
cannot drag a drop of smile
from this soul so wary and pressed.

Company is replaced with tears
and all feelings, compressed into one.
Cracking an egg shell from its edges
is simpler than distinguishing its moods.

What a soul!
Why were you created when nature was sad?
Why were you formed when the gods were asleep?
Why were you blessed when the daughters of cheerfulness were drunk?

The cloth of loneliness 
and the perfume of silence,
you need to unwear no matter how hard.
This will put on the light of proper existence
for you to bathe in the spring
of Life's beautiful varieties!


Premium Member I Am Drinking You

I am drinking you
With my eyes open wide
And my lips moist
My nose catching scent

I am eating you
Savouring every little detail
My tongue distinguishing
Sweet, sour, salt

I am seeing you
With veiled eyes
Shedding tears of salt
And sweetness

I am hearing you
And all the words
Not said but guessed
In all the small cries

~ the Narrow Roads Discerning ~

~ At last! ~ At last! As 
a sweet rejoinder to Him my 
soul cried out aloud, at last, as I 
marveled in the benignity of my 
Lord. For imparting to me, the 
liberal blessing of my life ... 
and for giving me His 
eternal assurances. 
For delivering me ... 
returning me to a veracious, and overt; amenable 
position-of-hope-and faith in Him. Yes-for-purging-and 
lifting; empowering and molding ... maturing me, indemnifying 
me in His certitude, and enduring graciously the-horrid-penalty; 
of my willful prides contumacy. For ne’er to trammel the ambling 
of my committed volition. In the greater wisdom and grace of their 
instruction I willingly did revolt in sheer defiance before His tender 
eyes of mercy. (Amid the futile campaign, (of my own bitterness)). 
Distinguishing only those weary days apart from the welcome and 
gentle fervor, of His embrace; and so, through this detachment, 
and His patient hands my heart’s longing was brought to know 
compassion and to be absolvitory. As written on my heart, 
and being able ... today, and thankful to Him to see. Of the 
many roads I have peregrinated down, illuminated upon 
this narrow path, of God’s all-inclusive way ... it is all I 
~ have come to truly discern, of an aeolian peace. ~







The words of this poem, form the reference in shape and idea; of a heavenly amphora.
© James Long  Create an image from this poem.

The Traveler

Abandoned are thine eyes, as they see not faces or light. Search now do they not, for there is no longer beauty in sight. The shapes of the world blur together, left now are no distinguishing lines. Only hues of greys lay before him, contrasting like shadows cast forth in to night. Tastes are fowl now and colors have faded… like the light from this travelers eyes.  Wearily forced to trudge about this desolation, he slowly fades with each stride. Each breath a grain of sand, tumbling through the hour glass of that which is life. Faces lack detail as one blurs another, for each one, is always the same. A crafted grin, with familiar hints of a warm and welcomed embrace, hiding only intent to lay wrath upon him, he shutters with each whim. Tears form behind his hollowing eyes, blurring vision, of what lay before him. His face, lined with shame and regret blood tears and sweat, onlookers laugh as all now they mock him. Every gift of breath revealed as punishment though committed of no crime. He finds peace as his time here is drawn. A smile cast across his lips as does he know he cannot go on. His shadow fades into dust on the horizon. The light he once cast forth now gone, as the moon gives chase to the sun. This travelers journey now over, as surely as night is followed by dawn.

Echoing woes

Petals drenched in poison pearls of emerald envy, 
carefully placed objectives whilst adrift in my tears of realization 

Longing sorrowful souls among lilac lakes, 
buried deep into somber depths of tinkering procrastination  

Starving for ruby righteousness and pristine perfection, and yet still reaching towards a tilt heart searching desperately sunset embers

Distinguishing luminescent authenticity among
 bittersweet endives drifts away with each cooling December

Shall I pursue soft screams for kissed loving 
ethereal roses dazzled with enchanting sensations  

To float away from every twisted hazing hoax with every spoken whirling weapon - coated with fabrications

Premium Member Home Schooling

November and April
when the trees are first bare and last naked
have become my favorite months. All the food eaten
except last rose hips and earliest leeks.
Leaves innocent
as dying men and infants.

Study one plant or animal each morning
before writing anything. All reading -
poetry or prose, truth or fiction -
classified the same, the distinguishing
characteristics being helpful or boring, 
beautifully or indifferently written. Then

practice trumpet worried not at all about
my sound or perfection. Afternoon, my sons
return from school, math and (again) 
reading, piano. Wednesdays we walk
observe plants and animals and record
our observations to identify and classify

later in the week. Nothing else special
need be done but stay alive.

Not On My Complexion

Take me back to the days
Where the feel of texture and distinguishing colors among Africans didn't matter
Where the only word was black, and not pale or darker
Where the only weapon was loyalty upto royalty actually smarter
Where mother toung superiority excelled the rest was after.
Where rituals and ceremonies were significant in culture
Where oral traditions activities was a preservation of history.
Where inclusivity wasn't done based on tribe, status or age
Where inspiration and education was passed from generation to generation through storytelling.
Where people performed rather than spoke
Where the media was the speaker's tone, volume, and cadence

Take me back to the days
Where people did not blame nationality, ethnicity, 
culture, economics and education
Where there was no colonial domination
Where there was no concept of slavery, racism or discrimination.
Where Africa was rich in culture and not the fallacy of primitive and a backward jungle
Where Africa was peaceful and not a race with guns and violent.
Where shouting am black and proud wasn't important because color didn't matter.
Where respect for elders remained an unbroken cornerstone in african culture
Where birth, marriage and burial rites was honored.

Welcome to the days
Where exporting and importing of cultures have become the trend
Where cultures travel through deserts, cross trade routes and through immigration borders
Where exchange disregards our notions of geography and race.
Where virtues such as hospitality, empathy, courtesy and respect is long gone
Where the only thing left are byproducts of culture.
Where multiculturalism has faded and everone hails on becoming one
The richness is not in Africa looking like Europe
What makes the world beautiful is in the diverse contributions

Welcome to the days
Where culture is paraded on an image of drum beating
Where media's notion is dancing naked or eating bush meat
Where in the midst of it all culture lost its definition
Where there is no importance in defending a territory with no boundaries.
Where technology dominated our land and mind
The struggle lies in reclaiming what is rightfully ours
I refuse to fall and cramble because I'm for the idea of sameness.
In the mind is where it all starts
I put no blame on culture, not my affliction.

Premium Member Stolen Piece of Time

behind the camera 
scenes comes to life
click of the shutter
opens to capture the light

eye distinguishing
yielding lights and shadows
in black and white
a stolen flawless piece of time, 
a study in still life 
kept captive, alive for all time 

entangled in the  mine
relieving memories of  the past 
photos unblemished echo

captivating the present
softly appealingly  
art works of inspiration 
place In a frame on the wall or in an album
 
 
By Eve Roper 3/18/2015
© Eve Roper  Create an image from this poem.

In Today's Society

11 March 2014 2:46 pm

In today's society
 it's hard to keep hold of reality
Unless you understand the crucifixion
 There's no distinguishing fact from fiction
As the devil helps you to the mountain top
 He shows you all the wealth that he's got
Bow down and worship me here 
 And all of this will be yours from here to there
Every thing to please man
 All for us so we don't understand
Worldly wealth and popularity
 Comes at a price to high to pay
We all must die and go away 
 Follow Him and there's Hell to pay
What does it profit man to sell his life 
 An eternity in darkness absent from the light
Understand and learn it well 
 Christ lived and died and rose to tell
Everyone to reach the light 
 You must Give your life and this is right
Christ already paid the price you see
  All we pay is to believe
To the unbeliever
 The follower of the deceiver
Earth is the only heaven you will know
 Then when you die to hell you go
To the Christ like who don't just believe but know
 Great is your reward when its your time to go
Walking talking with the Father of all
As His friends we are called

Soap Box Politics and the Common Man.

This morning I listened

To the simpleton and the sapient man preach

Yet as they orated to

All we who came to listen and imbibe

I was lost

There was no distinguishing 

One voice from the other.

Later as I pondered 

All that which was spoken

Spewed aimlessly upon us 

I knew that I could not agree

With that which was said

By the simpleton.

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