Darren White Poet Free verse

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I Am Drinking You

I am drinking you
With my eyes open wide
And my lips moist
My nose catching scent

I am eating you
Savouring every little detail
My tongue distinguishing
Sweet, sour, salt

I am seeing you
With veiled eyes
Shedding tears of salt
And sweetness

I am hearing you
And all the words
Not said but guessed
In all the small cries

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Jason Williams December 17, 2016 at 6:46 PM You wrote this one before I joined soup, but I remember reading in from your blog. So so passionate and sensual this one is. Love it! Darren White December 17, 2016 at 11:42 PM Yeah, indeed. Glad you love it <3

Kai Michael Neumann November 7, 2016 at 2:14 AM Wow, that touches me. Great, Kai Darren White November 7, 2016 at 2:40 AM Thank you! I loved creating this one.

Carol B. November 5, 2016 at 4:23 PM Wow this is outstanding. I love love this piece. A definite fav. Darren White November 7, 2016 at 2:40 AM You honour me! Thank you :)

Chris Green November 5, 2016 at 1:44 PM Damn, you were right, you do pour it out my friend. This one was deep and sensual and everything else. Nicely done. Darren White November 5, 2016 at 4:04 PM Thank you :)) It was, wasn't it!

Tim Smith November 5, 2016 at 11:19 AM Bathe in all the flavors and feel the love. Darren White November 5, 2016 at 11:20 AM Yes, exactly, a feast for the senses.