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I am drinking you With my eyes open wide And my lips moist My nose catching scent I am eating you Savouring every little detail My tongue distinguishing Sweet, sour, salt I am seeing you With veiled eyes Shedding tears of salt And sweetness I am hearing you And all the words Not said but guessed In all the small cries

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/17/2016 6:46:00 PM
You wrote this one before I joined soup, but I remember reading in from your blog. So so passionate and sensual this one is. Love it!
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Darren White
Date: 12/17/2016 11:42:00 PM
Yeah, indeed. Glad you love it <3
Date: 11/7/2016 2:14:00 AM
Wow, that touches me. Great, Kai
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Darren White
Date: 11/7/2016 2:40:00 AM
Thank you! I loved creating this one.
Date: 11/5/2016 4:23:00 PM
Wow this is outstanding. I love love this piece. A definite fav.
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Darren White
Date: 11/7/2016 2:40:00 AM
You honour me! Thank you :)
Date: 11/5/2016 1:44:00 PM
Damn, you were right, you do pour it out my friend. This one was deep and sensual and everything else. Nicely done.
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Darren White
Date: 11/5/2016 4:04:00 PM
Thank you :)) It was, wasn't it!
Date: 11/5/2016 11:19:00 AM
Bathe in all the flavors and feel the love.
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Darren White
Date: 11/5/2016 11:20:00 AM
Yes, exactly, a feast for the senses.

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