Best Detail Poems


It's Your Attention To Detail

Gentle caresses sweep my skin
with creeping tenderness,
devouring every curve of my body
and feeling its sizzling melt 
against your skin.
Your loving gaze enters my soul
striking away all attempts 
to keep the padlocked
heart and mind 
shuttered from any harm.
Your finger tips tantalize 
my womanly form
raising delightful awareness.
You lead my chin towards you
brush your nose and lips 
over my face as you slowly
move towards my mouth
then meet, magically.
Explosive emotions 
dynamite through my mind 
as we meld together
powerless 
I become putty in your hands
and you play purposely 
mastering your art
knowing it’s your attention 
to detail that matters
in loving me.

Premium Member County Trash Detail

Number
Four two four one
Cars racing by stealing
Images of consequences
Entertaining clowns collecting their trash
“That could be me” clicking tongues chirp
Four two four one just smiles
Those were his thoughts
Before

Drawing Your Day

*** DRAWING YOUR DAY ***

Well, wake me, then, before it’s
Time to sleep, so I may eat
Some bites of cheddar cheese 
(A delicious catalyst for lively dreams);

And,too, tell me, please,
Every detail of your day, because I
Will, draw it all — to treat the eye — 
In the corners of a flipbook (at least I’ll try).

I’ll depict you as a tiny stick figure, coming
And going…Even in flight, rising in the sky!
Above clouds.  With a flock of birds — wing to wing;
Returning on through heaven’s stars; angels waving good-bye.

I’ll wake you, then, later when I’m done,
And show how I I pictured the end of our fun:
When, before my leave, we ate slices of bread and cheese,
Praying our thanks for sharing these hours of memories.

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(c) sally young eslinger 11/19/22
Thanks be to God…


A Detail

Oooops!!!
I didn't mean to..
That's ok.
I should have knocked.
Yes...you should have but
....awkward
to say the least
You're still there
I'm still here
Why?!?
I...I don't know...
habit maybe
Maybe...
Yes...
I used to be able to...
not knock
Yea...
What happened?
A word...
friend.

On a Detail In a François Boucher Painting

Poems ascend in luminous sapphire skies 
As prettily as any Boucher dove
In flight eternal.  The artist's strokes devise
Each beauteous form to represent great love.
How many shades of light, how many hues
Playfully linger on each feathery wing?
Such subtle shadows!  Gentle tones infuse
The senses, sweetly prompt the soul to sing.
Cherubs frolic, blissful, plump and pink,
Companions to each poem or lovely bird,
Painted in Master's oils, or pen and ink,
They celebrate that now their song is heard.
Once seen, once read, no one can rend asunder
These artefacts portraying Nature's wonder.

Premium Member Special Sea and Anchor Detail

He sits quietly on a cargo hatch,
Patiently watching deck apes
Secure rat guards to hawsers.
They make his job a little easier.
There’s no requesting liberty.
Not even the thought of it.
The Bos’n won’t approve.
It’s been entered in the deck log,
He’s a ship’s cat.
He's always on the watch list.
He never goes ashore.


Detail Oriented

No, no, no.

You still don't understand
That my hands tend to tremble
and you don't even think about
A butterfly's thoughts in it's last moments
You don't pause to consider the colors of a tree
And until you do, you'll never understand me.

Premium Member The Texture of the Wall

Laying on the floor beneath the window,
staring up at the painted plaster,
little cracks run 
through the goosebumps in the paint.

I can read where the wall is hollow
where it is brick,
by running the tips of my nails across its gibberish braille.
In certain spots, the paint is almost smooth

and slightly darker, 
polished by years of rough feet,
the action of the mattress
trying to remove the braille.

To the left there is a stain running down the wall.
It is easy to imagine a tomato slammed there
like a bird flying into a pane of glass,
and not breaking through, slid to the floor,

but the truth is, it was a can of soup,
the kind with a pop top,
unheated,
drunk straight from the can, that spilled and would not come clean.

Burial Detail

This is the third time I’ve done it this year to be honest I feel a pride in being picked to do it but the very thought brings forward a tear.

Dress uniform ironed and ready, creases sharp as a knife brasses gleaming cap badge straight its time to commemorate not a death but a soldier’s life

The family, friends and fellow soldiers gather to honour a soldier who has died there has been much reflection and many have cried.

The flag draped coffin, headdress and medals carried by 6 fellow soldiers all in step with military precision, a lone warrior killed,  because of a politicians decision.

The sharp crack of the rifles salute, the last post plays then the coffin is lowered into the ground to the bagpipes haunting sound 

As I march off this is when eyes fill and lips starts to quiver a solemn promise in the eyes of all present that this warrior will be remembered forever
© Tom Murray  Create an image from this poem.

Cosmic Detail

Not one pursuit but led to disappointment
The system was designed to fail

Corrupted judge has tendered resignation
The horror lurked behind the veil

Another's cruelty fueled his vindication
The true believer's cause for pain

Described to him in full blown cosmic detail
The dronings of a world insane

Death In Every Little Detail Life

Oh Depressed world
Dont fail me now
every ones gone and coping i dont now how

oh depressed world
shine some light on my views of life
tell me why i shouldnt use this knife

oh Depressed world
Dont touch me the way others do
Raping me of my dignity and innocence as a child

oh depressed world
i'll keep talking till my face bursts blue
this idea of keeping others hopes up is just too wild.



Dont Tell Me Dont Do It
Even though i cant escape it
And everyone around me knows it
Then major depression would start
How do you know this is even what i want

I dont know how to get around it
Every key i have doesnt fit
Love, Hate, Depression, Knowledge
Doesn't tell me how to be alive forever

Love everyone you can
If you can you cant hurt
For when someone hurts you
Everyone will want you to cry on there shoulder

oh depressed world
dont let my thoughts flow wild
they dont deserve to pout under their covers

oh depressed world
raping the innocence of a newborn child
I'd hate to see them hiding under the hope of others

oh depressed world
shine some light on my views of life
tell me why i shouldnt use this knife

Oh Depressed world
Dont fail me now
every ones gone and coping i dont now how
© Jake Brown  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Exquisite In Detail

seductive sensuous
    enigmatic ambiguous
prolific & 
             precocious
breakfast pieces
                 peopled
in 
detail
    pin-sharp
        accuracy
 &
        exquisite 
           expressive  eyes
sublime
     in close-ups
posed

     yet all in the detail

intimate interiors
               interwoven
with 
      riddles in paint

A Social Detail

Think, it is a fix amount unequally distributed
But how, since labor contributed
For commodity, growth, and reserved pile
What explains the one sided dispersion?
Not rent or taxes, not expanded hire, but guile
One earns more than thousands in the labor equation
So consolidating now, peasants fortune contracted
Machines long invented has left their task unaffected

But the streets are bigger, wider now
And the feet are gathering clouds of storm
I hear the drum beat of the ancient vow
The city trembles beyond brinking harm
It does not understand the change of times
In France where the revolution is forgotten
And where Enlightenment was begotten
I hear the time clock muting omen, muting chimes.

Deep In the Detail

Nobody really likes a short-form read
a small screed about the mind-shattering infinitude of the universe
or the endless grandeur of nature - I mean not really.

We must move along, be willingly captured
by a more comprehensible minutiae.
The ordinary is the realm of the poet,
let the mystics ponder that big stuff.

For it is we who make our omelets
just a little different every time.
And do we list, label, depict, add, or subtract?

You bet we do.

Do we paint with a fine tipped brush - gush about
the normal, the humdrum, the passed-over,
the often overlooked and so typically common;
all those very ordinary unmemorable
yet essential ingredients of a small egg meal
for one?

Yes we do,
and you like it.

Premium Member HAIBUN in detail

The haibun can be a standard(where haiku etc follows the prose) or afterword (where prose follows the haiku) or prose envelope (prose para haiku,para) verse envelope(haiku prose haiku) or interlaced (chorus, verse, chorus) or verse sequence (haiku,prose,haiku,haiku etc)





a haibun ABSTRACTION

The soft yellow streaked the terra cotta,shadowing the speckled sallow saffron

a bluish buff upon the cochineal;brilliant boneblack grizzled the engrain

citrine carnation as the fallow flaxen,rustic rubrical rainbow-tinted

the magenta mandarine;unseen the ultra-marine, tinged burnt sienna,

reflecting a golden flame of raw umbery upon the earth green;bright mosaic gold

mottled the sallow sorrel virent yellow,oak stained the pale apricot;while

blood red,reddish russetdotted the olive lind;freckled crimson,a chestnut maroon,

on fuchsias faded apple green as burnt rumber sank deep into its sanguine slumber.

 

I walk through the glade

abstractions enlighten me-

colour my rainbow

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