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Oooops!!!
I didn't mean to..
That's ok.
I should have knocked.
Yes...you should have but
....awkward
to say the least
You're still there
I'm still here
Why?!?
I...I don't know...
habit maybe
Maybe...
Yes...
I used to be able to...
not knock
Yea...
What happened?
A word...
friend.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 6:57 AM
Kool piece Karena >> James
Kendrick Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 3:34 AM
Yes, those words can end intimacy. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Leng Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 2:22 AM
Funny!!! :D
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