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County Trash Detail

Number Four two four one Cars racing by stealing Images of consequences Entertaining clowns collecting their trash “That could be me” clicking tongues chirp Four two four one just smiles Those were his thoughts Before

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/6/2011 4:54:00 AM

hmm trying to remember, you changed the POV? is the word "his?" let me know! Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/3/2011 8:45:00 AM

incredibe, james.. big congrats on the high spot! :) huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/3/2011 5:29:00 AM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of deb, James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2011 5:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Jack Out Of Box" contest James. Love, Carol

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 6/2/2011 5:09:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS!!! Well-deserved win!!! ***jun-jun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/2/2011 3:40:00 PM

Congrats James on a spectacular win by stepping out of the box and still creating a lovely treasure my friend.. enjoy ..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/30/2011 5:43:00 PM

You have some BITE here Jamie! Didn't guess it was you either! ;) Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/22/2011 7:33:00 AM

Great job, Jim.....I never thought to try this form....it is also one I've never done...but you nailed it beautifully!! Excellent entry....for jumping out of the box!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/22/2011 4:27:00 AM

Beautiful form nicely explored with this humorous and witty write, Jimbo and good luck in the contest,

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/21/2011 8:39:00 PM

Interesting form that's new to me, James. Those last three lines carry your message home nicely. We see the trash collectors and fail to realize they probably had other aspirations, just as we do. Great entry for Deb's contest, Jimbo. Winning wishes coming your way. Love, Carolyn