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It's your attention to detail

Gentle caresses sweep my skin
with creeping tenderness,
devouring every curve of my body
and feeling its sizzling melt 
against your skin.
Your loving gaze enters my soul
striking away all attempts 
to keep the padlocked
heart and mind 
shuttered from any harm.
Your finger tips tantalize 
my womanly form
raising delightful awareness.
You lead my chin towards you
brush your nose and lips 
over my face as you slowly
move towards my mouth
then meet, magically.
Explosive emotions 
dynamite through my mind 
as we meld together
powerless 
I become putty in your hands
and you play purposely 
mastering your art
knowing it’s your attention 
to detail that matters
in loving me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/10/2011 4:23:00 PM
wow, and I love those last three lines. SAying pay attention, man!!! Good write. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/13/2009 12:04:00 AM
A great & passionate love poem Anna-Marie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 11/22/2008 4:10:00 PM
WOW..........I LOVE IT!!!
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Date: 11/22/2008 5:49:00 AM
Wow. What an exceptionally sizzling write. I say you have quite a good thing going on and express it extremely well. Enjoy, no relish, every single moment. Love is a beautiful thing. Happy holiday sweet friend. Love, Shar
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