Best Awakening Poems


Premium Member Abigail's Spring - POTW

Abigail’s Spring  

Beneath the shelter of winter’s barren arbor
My winter abused heart
Watches the day’s light linger in the sky resisting darkness -
Begging to play a little longer every day –
Pushing twilight away at arm’s length with pink and brilliant orange
Leaving wispy trails of color in the sky;
Urging empty branches and shivering wheat
Lift up their eyes from bruising rains 
And crushing chill of wilderness storms;
Seeing here howling tirades of blizzards
Trade places with long sunbeams stretching slowly
Across my sun starved shadow, warming the winter’s wildness -
Coaxing pale green shoots to peek timidly at meadows
Covered with patchwork quilts of blue and yellow -
Orange scattered across arching hills –
Welcoming the face of spring with arms spread wide;
Listening for the bleating of black faced sheep 
When they shed their fleecy coats;
Not looking back into the breath of moaning winds,
Longing sighs transformed into shouts of laughter
Chase themselves across the plains in children’s games;
My spirit, once wrapped in hibernation, feels the changing of the wind
Running up the road – knocking on the gate -
With a moveable feast born of abundance; 
Stone cold frozen heart beats again in rhythm with gracious blessings
As the simple sparrow teaches 
Her young to fly with the morning light
Rejoicing on warm nights filled with songs of mourning doves –
My face turns - embracing this greening valley -
As spring sprints breathlessly up the path.

April, 2020
Contest: Personal Favorite No. 2
Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins

5/16/20
Contest: Poetry Marathon Mile 13
Sponsor: Mark Toney

30 Lines

First place - Brian Strand Your Choice B - 5/17/20
Number 1 Best New Poem - 6/13-20
Poem of the Week - 6/20/20
First place - Brian's Choice G 6-21-20 - Brian Strand
First place Your Best Poem of 2020 - John Hamilton
Top Ten, #10, Poet Destroyer 11/7/20
Chosen for publication in PS It's Poetry

Premium Member A Wild Awakening

Springtime rain brings fresh array 
of flowers east to west.
The Rockies’ red and purple tufts
of mountain pride are best. 
And mats of foliage named moss pink face south to get the sun
while buttercups put forth large blooms
so not to be outdone.

Then comes the rain to bleak terrain 
where gloriously unfolds
alongside barren roads - in patches -
desert marigolds.
Mojave yucca, blue lupines, 
and sego lily whites
with Indian prairie fire flowers 
paint the deserts bright.

And common flowers of the fields 
in every place abound.
Sweet Joe-Pye weed; Black-eyed Susan 
push up from the ground.
The California poppy makes 
a  patchwork orange and blue
while dandelions most unloved
will countless seedlings spew.

In southern marshes blossom too 
the water hyacinths,
making of the waterways 
pesky labyrinths.
In northern streams grow pussy willows
naked with no petals,
and somewhere on a touch-me-not 
a bumblebee now settles.

Blossoming in woodlands now 
are flowers in the shade,
but most prefer the sunlight of  
an open forest glade.
The wild columbine dressed blue 
and handsome in the breeze,
fragrant like the violet, 
gives nectar to the bees

All across the country 
there awaken everywhere,
each in their appointed region, 
wild flowers fair.
Daisies, clover, daffodils 
and lovely Queen Anne’s lace.
They briefly stay, but we can see 
more fully nature’s grace!

(now for PD's Contest on Best Flower Poem)
For Constance La France's mini-contest: Wild Flowers

Premium Member Awakening to the Red Road - An Ecopoetic Odyssey, 'Part 2 of 6'

II. Nature's Cyclical Dance

End is not death. Changing into something new is good.
A leaf falls, then goes back into the dark soil.
Next year's flowers sleep under winter's quiet.
We fear the end, but nature shows us it's not bad.
Death is a new start.

My Anishinaabe mentor Little Deer laughed at my wide eyes.
That first forest walk, as he plucked a bright trillium —
"Cherish her fleeting beauty, but mourn her not, my friend.
This flower's death will birth a thousand more to come."
His people know life dances on; death is rebirth.

I hear them now. Those ancient voices riding wind's breath.
They speak through birch and pine... calling me back to the way —
Honoring and not fearing, the seasons' turning tides.
Each dawn's first birdsong and each brook's gentle murmuring
Echoing the rhythm pulsing through this wild... 
and wondrous earth.

Let me join this cycle, rooted but free.
I'll welcome death and the return of life.
Like the forest floor, decay and new growth mix.
With every breath, I'll connect with the source.
This cycle of life, death, and being born again is a gift.

----

"The Sacred Forest, a Nurturing Mother, never lets life die, / But reclaims, recycles, and rebirths in her eternal lullaby." - Daniel Henry Rodgers


Premium Member Awakening

if you follow borealis,
you might hear children's laughter

innocence brings us closer,
our darkest corners can find light

the laws of man    have not changed

do not travel into the valley of the snakes
do not travel      into the valley
                                  of the snakes

your brothers before you
      .......saw the scorched earth

the laws of man    have not changed

love waits       until the bird with
the broken wing can fly

step away from the shadows,
your brother needs you now!

do not wait for the sun to rise,
cast your light upon My children!

it's never too late-

           to show the way!

if you follow borealis.
you might hear children's laughter

                    might    hear

                                   children's

                                            laughter

Premium Member Upon Awakening

Upon Awakening

I see you morning,
curling down into
my front yard
like a big golden cat
come to play.

your paws ruffle the trees 
but they are only bones 
clacking noisily like 
.geese squabbling 
making your ears twitch.

you snuffle the dried beds 
wanting to rub against the lilacs
but they are sleeping within
the grey hard branches 
and will not answer you.

ah but there is a rose,
sheltered from rude November
by the cottage in a quiet spot,
one last hurrah as red as berries
you curl around it and purr.

Premium Member Kissed By the Passing Breeze of Awakening

Kiss by the Passing Breeze of Awakening

Dust of divine whimsy
Flutters softly on unconscious cheeks
With ephemeral dawning
Fleeting like the flash of silver sandals
In moonlight - here then hidden -
Stepping out of the opaque
Soul stirring from oblivious daydreams
Stepping into moments of classical
 Lavender-rose moments.

The leaven of breezes in stardust essence
 Flares in lambent clarity
Caches of chimera, that drain the heartbeat,
Shrivel in bursts of cheeky shooting stars.

Aroused from the depths of sleepwalking,
Grace notes float on rose scents 
Harvested in potpourris for strangled screams
Scrambling through midnight fogs,
Sentience revisits in soft swirls
Awareness, roused by reveille,
Stirs caressed codas in soft preludes,
Awakes in fresh mindful raptures
Nurtured by a passing angel kiss.


Premium Member Awakening Hope

Another impoverished evening
 draped so strangely harsh, the moon weeps 
for one more burning a soul must retain.... 
And she clings among lost stars
 with frozen heartbeat thawing minutes 
weighed on jagged sounds of owl's play.

Yet, an intercepted light begins to kindle 
as she gazes at an old man by a lamp post, 
seemingly collecting crumbs of reminiscences-- 
The tick of hours mirroring her own disquiet
 while couples pause to catch a  flurry of mist:

She quivers, turns away from the glass pane 
listening to the teapot ... her meditative chant for now--
Till a discovery of self-awakening lifts gently
 Where a tiny place in her bosom invites calmness
 yet to be born ...
through growing roots of spirit- fire.

First Prize Premier

Premium Member Spring's Awakening

As the snow melts and winter passes away.
On bare twigs, emerald buds start to display.
Set on trees with gem-glazed blooms evincing through.
A sight to behold, a promise of something true.

With each passing day, signs of life grow stronger.
Birds chirp and sing; their melodies are longer.
The sun shines brighter, warming the earth.
Nature awakens in a joyous rebirth.

The air is filled with the scent of fresh flowers.
Butterflies flutter, dancing for hours.
Bees buzz around, collecting nectar sweet
All God's creatures, in harmony, meet.

The dawn of spring offers hope and wellness.
Taking time to ponder life awareness
In this time of expansion, let us rejoice.
And be glad for the blessings of birds' voices.

Written: June 07, 2023
© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Re- Awakening

A lone candle light in the abyss of darkness 
Yet words are woven in creations of your smile, 
The sweetest words are those not said intense timeless 
When in your embrace one melts to your unique style. 

Your flame renewed kindle in sweet resurrection 
Emerald eyes that glow in lust of perfection, 
Can but dowse puritan thoughts with insurrection 
Rebellion is kindled in this new affection 

Fires of passion the candle lit the abyss 
To burn forever more in the flame of true love 
To melt in your arms with the promise of a kiss 
The iron hand now firmly in the velvet glove 

Love like this has never before been given birth 
My life my love this is your awakened loving worth 

© Harry J Horsman  & Mandy Tams 2013

Premium Member Awakening - the Inn of My Heart Part I

The inn of my Heart 
has many rooms;
I thought I knew them all.
They were peopled with 
husband, children,
  family and friends.
    Even God had a room,
      and I visited them all frequently.
I really didn't think
there were any more rooms;
Until one day,
while walking through my Inn,
I discovered a suite of rooms
unoccupied.
"Who is this for?"
I loudly asked,
"And why have not these rooms
been used?"

No one could tell me who,
and no one could tell me why.
So I stumbled around the rooms
exclaiming over the things 
that I found there.
But as surely as day must dawn
the realization slowly came,
and with such a sense of discovery,
I stood there in awe
wondering what I would do.  
For I had entered the rooms
filled with the essence of me.
There were all the hopes,
  and dreams,
    and feelings,
of one human soul.
And when I looked with understanding,
I saw that even the ugly things
had not been forgotten here.

It was a fearful thing
  to be confronted with myself,
    to see so clearly all the things
      I had long ignored.
You see, the things we ignore,
hoping they'll go away,
simply move into our rooms
and wait for rediscovery.

Your turn will come, 
  if it hasn't already,
    to enter your suite of rooms
      and be confronted 
        with all the essence of you.
What will you do?
And, what am I going to do now?
Escape and close the door?
  Lock it?
    Build a wall in front of it?
      Try to forget the things I found
        in my suite of rooms?
          Put my blinders back on?
Or will I have the courage 
to move into my rooms;
to become familiar with those intangibles
that exist in all of us;
To learn to live with 
  the ugly things, 
    and not be defeated by them;
To sort out the useable 
  from all the rest, 
    and use it with enthusiasm;
To know that what I found here
won't always suit those around me, 
But acknowledge it anyway.
I stand now in the doorway,
   looking out, looking in, 
       wondering . . .

Submitted 17 Sept 2016
To Contest: What Might They Find There

The Awakening - a Video Poem

Awakened by the creaking of the dying trees 
In this barren land devoid of a breeze
Imprisoned dreams in a land of unpicked seams
Endless chasms of regrets in which no sunlight beams

Broken chords strumming tunelessly in solitude
Of songs of praises by an adoring multitude
Intruding reflections oppress thoughts that soar
Waltzing through his mind she invades once more
Time when they were darlings of virtuosic impression
Dancing in wild abandon to a public adoration
Truly enamoured in each other, their love did blossom
Though, in Life’s carousel sadly far too often

Pursuing perfection whatever may befall
One loses focus in the fluster of a fall
Adorning false crowns in high esteem
Ego soars and plummets and shatters the dream

In the drop of a pin - displeasure he perceives
past idolising could not now appease
the icy cold rejection she projects as she flees
leaving a broken man - who has failed to please

For many long years he lays wishing death’s end
Dwelling on memories of his so-called friends
Friends he thought steadfast who chose to ignore
his whispered words ‘forgive me I implore’
Shunned he was before his knees hit the floor

After long years of solitude one day he awakens
Finding his dark soulless days have been forsaken
Terrors of the night have been released - set free
From an unsuspecting sky all dark clouds flee

Dark night of the soul heralds White Light of the Self
Perceptions of enlightenment an awakening of himself
From the corner of his eye a movement he detects
A woman of the White Light he strongly suspects

In her iridescent persona to her task she ascends
His vulnerability she sees and her hand she extends
And in a confetti of star showers his heart she mends

Copyright © Nov 2020 Maria Williams

Premium Member Awakening Sunshine Morning

In loving warm tenderness
outside crystalised dew 
reflecting rainbow colors shine
shining frosted glitter sparkling love
beautiful upon the ground 

Looking towards a blue sky
brushed with pearl white clouds 
Dreaming in a plane's vapor trail
destiny calling within a path 
golden sun warm smiles touching deep
mixed with bird songs magic appears

A fresh cool December breeze blowing 
caressing the brow, thoughts baby 
whispering winds sings out in one union
rising up from the chimneys, smoke signals
Silver dancing wisps in warm turf fire
trailing down the valley

Shrewd Awakening

Captive
Grinning coyly 
She feigns timidity
Cunningly knowing fools become
Ensnared
© John Heck  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member The Key Is Love







                                              The Key Is Love

         "Humanity can regain its dignity if it accedes that love is the key to
 
         attaining unity and redefining visions in achieving lasting harmony"







08/19/2023
10:59 a.m.
Aboard Vision of the Seas
Cruising towards Bermuda

The Edge of Night

Such close relationship with death we keep,
As we embrace the nothingness of sleep.
Not careful enough for a fall so steep -
One moment awake, the next fast asleep.

A Goddess of forgotten time therein,
Who donned a crown of stars upon her head,
Constellations engraved on midnight skin,
The land of sleep, the land of halfway dead.

While some embrace the empress we call night
The mass extinguisher of any light,
Unhappy beings relish in their plight
Until the deep abyss swallows their fight.

Does this unexplored boundary exist
If this pull none remember nor resist?
© Di Am  Create an image from this poem.

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