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Upon Awakening

Upon Awakening I see you morning, curling down into my front yard like a big golden cat come to play. your paws ruffle the trees but they are only bones clacking noisily like .geese squabbling making your ears twitch. you snuffle the dried beds wanting to rub against the lilacs but they are sleeping within the grey hard branches and will not answer you. ah but there is a rose, sheltered from rude November by the cottage in a quiet spot, one last hurrah as red as berries you curl around it and purr.

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Date: 12/2/2017 5:28:00 AM
Wonderful pastoral poem, Pat. Splendor is the imagery of this most expressive poem. The allusions are spot on. Mighty fine poetry. Love and smiles.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/2/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thank you Freddie.
Date: 12/1/2017 12:14:00 AM
November can be rude the opposite down here, like a dog on heat. Love the analogy
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/1/2017 5:49:00 PM
Thank you Jannie.
Date: 11/29/2017 9:52:00 AM
This is just fantastic...
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/1/2017 5:46:00 PM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 11/28/2017 9:43:00 PM
Totally divine, Patricia. Undeniably a FAVE for me!!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/1/2017 5:45:00 PM
Line you are very kind. I hope it gets us some sun.
Date: 11/28/2017 4:33:00 PM
Excellent--from start to finish--love the way you depicted morning--and then it got to the rose to curl around....--very creative, Patricia!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/28/2017 4:43:00 PM
Thank you Vijay.
Date: 11/28/2017 2:56:00 PM
Beautiful and imaginative imagery, Patricia. // Barry.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/28/2017 3:13:00 PM
We have had so few sunny days I really take notice when it happens. Thank you and welcome to my home.
Date: 11/28/2017 2:00:00 PM
I love the unique imagery you relay in this enchanted piece. A last lovely red rose! Beautiful Patricia! : )
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/28/2017 3:07:00 PM
Thank you Connie.
Date: 11/28/2017 12:46:00 PM
A gorgeous scenery you paint! Love it :) A lovely day to you sweet sister of the pen xomo!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/28/2017 3:06:00 PM
And to you. Is that us flying? Thanks for the lift.

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