Kissed By the Passing Breeze of Awakening

Kiss by the Passing Breeze of Awakening

Dust of divine whimsy
Flutters softly on unconscious cheeks
With ephemeral dawning
Fleeting like the flash of silver sandals
In moonlight - here then hidden -
Stepping out of the opaque
Soul stirring from oblivious daydreams
Stepping into moments of classical
 Lavender-rose moments.

The leaven of breezes in stardust essence
 Flares in lambent clarity
Caches of chimera, that drain the heartbeat,
Shrivel in bursts of cheeky shooting stars.

Aroused from the depths of sleepwalking,
Grace notes float on rose scents 
Harvested in potpourris for strangled screams
Scrambling through midnight fogs,
Sentience revisits in soft swirls
Awareness, roused by reveille,
Stirs caressed codas in soft preludes,
Awakes in fresh mindful raptures
Nurtured by a passing angel kiss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 6:06 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara
Mcintosh Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 3:33 PM
Once again - Wonderfully done, dear friend. God bless you and Congrats on your win. Much love, Gina
Hamilton Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 7:25 PM
Lovely writing Sam your phraseology and vocabulary are so artfully utilized sounding fresh and alive not contrived. A worthy winner!
Kauffman Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 10:28 AM
Thank you so much, John! What beautiful feedback especially from another poet and songwriter! This theme birthed so many inspirations and images. It was fun to process the possibilities! I so appreciate your visit. Sending you blessings!! Are you writing songs again?
Ayantika Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 5:32 AM
Congratulations, Sam on this winning piece! It is beauty brewed in words..
Kauffman Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 10:22 AM
Thank you so much Akanksha! What lovely feedback. I am deeply touched. Thank you! Sending you blessings of joy.
Mcintosh Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 2:50 AM
Wonderful writing. Congrats and God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Kauffman Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 10:19 AM
Thank you so much Gina! This was a wonderful contest theme. Rekindled in me that desire to be awake and alert! Sending you hugs and blessings, sweet friend! Have been enjoying your poems of faith!
Agustin Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 7:17 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent as proven by this muse of yours... so delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. God bless you.
Kauffman Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 10:16 AM
Hi Beata! Thank you so much for your visit and lovely feedback. I am so glad you found the "delight" in this poem. I had fun writing it! Sending you bunches of blessings.
Lane Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 5:07 PM
There’s a gentle stirring of the senses throughout your lines, Sam. I’m so happy to be reading it now since I missed it when initially posted. Congratulations!’
Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 4:43 PM
from the "dust of divine whimsy" to a nurturing "angel kiss"....this is a riotous romp through the realms of color, texture, scent and sound....all on paper....WOW!!
Kauffman Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 9:30 PM
Thank you so much John. The process of awakening can be a magical experience as the day unfolds. I am so glad that you liked this poem." BLessings.
Daniel Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 3:50 AM
Wow! This is a stunner, Sam, your love for music pours out in each poem making me rapturous, "angel kiss" - that's what this is:)
Kauffman Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 10:19 AM
Ever grateful to you Jo for your lovely messages and feedback that is so encouraging! Thank you! I feel so blessed by music. It is surely God's "angel kiss" to us! And, just discovered, it releases endorphins but doesn't, unless it's a lullaby, put us to sleep like that Thanksgiving turkey dinner! Thank you for sharing in this awakening with me! Sending you blessings of joy and appreciation!
Lindley Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 10:28 AM
My good friend your poetry has a freshness about it. As you present truth and light in the verses. A pure joy to read such refreshing language and thoughts you convey. Another fav my friend. God bless,
Kauffman Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 10:11 AM
Bob, thank you so much! So honored by your fav! I am deeply gratified by your gracious words and compliments! We, as poets and writers, are so blessed to be able to present "truth" in a fresh light that hopefully resonates in a new experience of life - live in a life of inspiration touched by the hand of the ultimate Creator! Thank you dear friend for affirming these simple efforts. Sending blessings of joy!
George Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 9:36 PM
Each time I read your poems, I come across some phrases and images so spectacular and telling- never used by any one before. Such images give the reader 'lavender rose moments' and when stringed together, they make your poems stand out. Often the 'codas' of your poem lift the reader to a higher plane. Lovely, dear Sam. All the Best!
Kauffman Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 9:58 AM
Dearest Valsa, what beautiful feedback. I am so honored. Thank you!!! I feel the same way whenever I have the joy of reading your poems. It is such a blessing to share poetry with you and I marvel at your poetic gifts. We are indeed blessed to encourage one another and spur each other onto that "higher plane!" It is a rare and beautiful gift, dear friend. Sending you blessings!
Hind Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 1:29 PM
I am speechless, Sam. This is amazing and going to my favs!
Kauffman Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 9:53 AM
Thank you so much Paige! So honored by your fav and your lovely feedback! This contest really provided so many opportunities for imagery and fruitful musings. Take care! Blessings to you!
Baker Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 9:39 PM
Your imagery and descriptions were exquisite, Sam. Well written poetry, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Kauffman Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 10:18 PM
Hi Bill! Thank you so much. The contest theme provided so many vibrant possibilities for images. So grateful for your feedback. Hope you are staying cool. So good to hear from you! Your friend from the Golden State! Blessings!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 12:32 PM
A lovely write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed weekend.....................
Kauffman Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 10:06 PM
Thank you so much Paula. This was a lovely theme to work with - so many possibilities. I hope you have you have a blessed weekend.
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