Premiere Contest WinnerAwakening Hope

Another impoverished evening
 draped so strangely harsh, the moon weeps 
for one more burning a soul must retain.... 
And she clings among lost stars
 with frozen heartbeat thawing minutes 
weighed on jagged sounds of owl's play.

Yet, an intercepted light begins to kindle 
as she gazes at an old man by a lamp post, 
seemingly collecting crumbs of reminiscences-- 
The tick of hours mirroring her own disquiet
 while couples pause to catch a  flurry of mist:

She quivers, turns away from the glass pane 
listening to the teapot ... her meditative chant for now--
Till a discovery of self-awakening lifts gently
 Where a tiny place in her bosom invites calmness
 yet to be born ...
through growing roots of spirit- fire.

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Poteet Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 10:04 AM
Congratulations! Your piece brought to mind, an old "hymn" Whispering Hope: its first line "Soft as the voice of an angel breathing a message unheard."and last line "making my heart in its sorrow, rejoice." Your last line particularly appealing to me for that is what hope is. Well-deserved placement, Nette.
Hind Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 10:10 PM
GORGEOUS, and congrats!!
La France Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 11:25 AM
Nette, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in the contest ~
Brul Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 9:41 PM
I love the crisp choice of words. My kind of poem. Congratulations Nette on your well -deserved Trophy Win with this exceptional piece. A fave!! ^____^ JCB
Croft Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 7:23 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Jones Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 4:10 PM
Congratulations on your top win Nette!
Pina Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 2:27 PM
Congrats on the win, the poem reminds me of a similar experience I had when I was younger. Hope all is well - Seth
Kannan Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 7:14 AM
Where a tiny place in her bosom invites calmness yet to be born ... through growing roots of spirit- fire Beautiful ending ?????? Beautifully expressed, Nette.... Loved it....
Onat Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 6:08 AM
Awed by the change from despair to hope. I didn't expect this; outstanding!
Kendrick Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 5:15 AM
Nette, I can feel the expressiveness and emotion in this one. Glad you shared it with us. Way to go. Sara K
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