Awakening Sunshine Morning

In loving warm tenderness
outside crystalised dew 
reflecting rainbow colors shine
shining frosted glitter sparkling love
beautiful upon the ground 

Looking towards a blue sky
brushed with pearl white clouds 
Dreaming in a plane's vapor trail
destiny calling within a path 
golden sun warm smiles touching deep
mixed with bird songs magic appears

A fresh cool December breeze blowing 
caressing the brow, thoughts baby 
whispering winds sings out in one union
rising up from the chimneys, smoke signals
Silver dancing wisps in warm turf fire
trailing down the valley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/5/2014 11:06:00 AM
Simply beautiful my friend loved the images this has left behind in my mind, Truely awesome, cheri
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Date: 12/5/2014 5:21:00 AM
such fantastic imagery Liam old pal your pen wrote golden in this hugs
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Date: 12/4/2014 10:45:00 PM
A beautiful painting liam....cheers
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Date: 12/4/2014 10:02:00 PM
you always write so beautifully, Liam. so smooth and peaceful this is.
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Date: 12/4/2014 9:43:00 PM
This poem is so very beautiful Liam! I truly enjoyed reading it this very fine morning my dearest friend. I can almost visualize what you saw when you wrote it. And like our friend Dave says, it is good to be alive! A 7 for me +++! Have a very wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 12/4/2014 9:15:00 PM
I feel the fresh air and smell the smoke -- it is good to be alive . . . nicely done my dear friend.
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Date: 12/4/2014 9:13:00 PM
Sounds like a morning I would like to wake up to :) Beautiful words my friend :)
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Date: 12/4/2014 8:38:00 PM
Smoke signals of love. :)
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Date: 12/4/2014 5:54:00 PM
such wonderful imagery Liam its a 7 from me and into faves - will want to read this on a sad dull day
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