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Awakening Sunshine Morning

In loving warm tenderness outside crystalised dew reflecting rainbow colors shine shining frosted glitter sparkling love beautiful upon the ground Looking towards a blue sky brushed with pearl white clouds Dreaming in a plane's vapor trail destiny calling within a path golden sun warm smiles touching deep mixed with bird songs magic appears A fresh cool December breeze blowing caressing the brow, thoughts baby whispering winds sings out in one union rising up from the chimneys, smoke signals Silver dancing wisps in warm turf fire trailing down the valley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/5/2014 11:06:00 AM
Simply beautiful my friend loved the images this has left behind in my mind, Truely awesome, cheri
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Date: 12/5/2014 5:21:00 AM
such fantastic imagery Liam old pal your pen wrote golden in this hugs
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Date: 12/4/2014 10:45:00 PM
A beautiful painting liam....cheers
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Date: 12/4/2014 10:02:00 PM
you always write so beautifully, Liam. so smooth and peaceful this is.
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Date: 12/4/2014 9:43:00 PM
This poem is so very beautiful Liam! I truly enjoyed reading it this very fine morning my dearest friend. I can almost visualize what you saw when you wrote it. And like our friend Dave says, it is good to be alive! A 7 for me +++! Have a very wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 12/4/2014 9:15:00 PM
I feel the fresh air and smell the smoke -- it is good to be alive . . . nicely done my dear friend.
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Date: 12/4/2014 9:13:00 PM
Sounds like a morning I would like to wake up to :) Beautiful words my friend :)
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Date: 12/4/2014 8:38:00 PM
Smoke signals of love. :)
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Date: 12/4/2014 5:54:00 PM
such wonderful imagery Liam its a 7 from me and into faves - will want to read this on a sad dull day
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