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Premium Member A Shout Into the Void

Upon the arc rises familiar visage of tenebrous dawn
As birdsongs protest, yet another day gone wrong,
In anguish of emptiness thrashing~ stygian, forlorn,
Screaming relentlessly of despondent, indignant void
Blasting his emotions, clasped in poignant thoughts.

Nothingness was the theme of his darkened night
That brazenly shrouded luminance of starlit skies,
As the waxing moon turned pallid, refusing to shine
And benevolence of Venus dolefully uttered a sigh
When dreams, too, acceded to nightmares’ assault. 

Life has been a long journey, trekking hills of misery
In hollow pursuit of hope, always despaired trying~
Every forward step of progress unresponsive, lacking
To rescue him from oblivion, from gravity of abyss,
Where silence echoes fear, warning there is no exit.

He knows intimately, she too feels dread of anxiety:
Of ocean-storms unseasonably rushing summer heat,
Parching her delicate notions of blossoming spring,
Of harsh winters encroaching on her autumns fiercely;
Yet, she stands steadfastly, defying the curse of grief.

Prodding goodwill of divinity she tolls bells of harmony 
Giving voice and meaning to life’s reassuring feelings
Clamoring for a day to brighten halo of their morning,
Demanding relief; with her clenched fists at the ready…
Forever, if it takes that long, to alter path of destiny.

December 20, 2021
Poem of the day on December 22, 2021
Placed 1st: Pick-A-Title, Vol 27 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Title: A Shout Into The Void

TWINFLAMES

TWINFLAMES 

Obsidian oscillated into lava
     slid across syntactic streams
        tumbled thick greenwood thickets 
           impenetrability an intricate illusion wicked
              shattering splintered sassy sinkers

Lord Ashtar himself lifted gnarled garbage 
    two big broken black bags to Source 
      split seconds of screaming searing sores
        then baby posture soaked singular satin  
              Prophet Daniel’s prison-free prediction

Coloured lava languid loosened
     yin-yang of yesteryear’s yarrows
        as Watchfulness wedded yearnings
        no black bumblebees boomeranged bombs 
              rainbow hands belled belly beckoning 

Solar flares ignited twin hearts atoning
  corona emissions spilling splashing space
      sodalite sprinkled sundrenched shores 
       kaleidoscope pupils pleasing pulsing fate
           Hearts purely placed on golden plate 

Four eyes fathomed Guy Fawkes fickle 
    feuding onto a fervid foolproof floor
       Stonehenge now sturdily steadily stood 
           sedating simple silent sleep suavely 
               Axis acceded alchemical ascensions  

Missions matched mottoed moulded mountains 
    timelines merged in mossy musical movement 
        Justice jumping jibbing Jungian jurisdiction 
          Presence posied a present perfection
            Dreams delivered dictums to Duet
                                      
             Delicious domed desserts diffusing !
     

©GhairoDanielsPoetry&Song
2024

The Slime Rises

Here in the brook a frightful sight I saw,
A frightful sight for sure!
Lo and behold! What an eerie beast of awe,
And knew I then 'tis most obscure.
 
How this tale would unfold I tell it true,
Of villains, of echo's in the night!
It is this and more, as distinct I'd most construe,
Whereof vultures were quite forthright.
 
And below, at my feet I saw terror,
A crawling freak of nature was it.
Yes, it is this and more, just no unjustly error,
But some slime 'twas there I submit.
 
O I couldn't ignore, I was extremely mad,
Up my leg it went slowly that vile beast.
'Tis a creature unlike any I'd thought most bad,
Likely I was dead, or plain dreaming at least.
 
The merest, I was in pain, and in fear,
Now upon my torso it creeped!
Scream out I wanted to ever so clear,
But there only despair had seeped.
 
That and the blood of woe bled tragically,
While once upon my chest it dug in.
Tearing into my flesh it did quite drastically,
Wherefore I felt my heart bleed within.
 
The horror of the slime was a nightmare,
Such creature above all I deplored.
Clasped I its slimy matter, and I grasped it fair,
For I'm old, yet the risk I most explored.
 
I acceded I must engage this fright nigh,
That others may rest in some peace.
And I'll lift the grave weight to most decry,
Hear me now, the slime I will release.
 
The story so is told, as fated to weep,
Of a creature bewailed and hated.
It is this and more, as till it remains a horrid creep,
In my hour of dire quiver, it was ne'er awaited.
 
Whence they wrought much havoc upon me,
Still this agrise I diced with fairly bent.
And 'twas fraught there something to try flee,
The villains within the slime were intent.
 
They'd come a rapping at my torn heart,
From within the slime they poured out.
Rapping and muttering nonsense I could't impart,
But it soon dawned on me beyond doubt.
 
I was dead, that I surely was and nothing more,
Tho' how, I knew not, yet 'tis quite true!
All the echoes were of ghastly demons that tore,
Bleeding merely a grim death to push thro'.


Balance of Inequities

Look up in green eyed jealousy
as they sneer at the sniveling masses,
who occupies moral high ground
in the war of unequal classes?

When the Rothchilds become day laborers
and Rockefellers beggars and tramps,
may they learn the sting of humility
when shuffling into our camps.

But no, who then would produce the finest
or the best that could be made,
what artesian would do his utmost
if there were no riches to trade?

The wealthy need poor to support them
and the poor need the rich to pay,
it has to be both or nothing
it seems there is no other way.

What chef would take pains o’re the savory
who proudly wax the Rolls Royce,
what good to sculpt and weave royally
if poverty was the only choice?

Aspiring to the ultimate heights
keeps people at doing their best,
prospering by being rewarded
sets us apart from the rest.

The stifling of human ambition 
cannot and has never succeeded,
diligence seeks the redemption
of glory to be acceded.
© Bob Quinn  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Faith Analysis

When challenged to ponder about inventory of survival-status
my mind succumbs toward sublime intellectual deconstruction
yet conquering spirit emerges to prevail with blissful glow
for triumphant testimony, exposing meaningful existence.  

Analysis of faith’s wholeness
Exposes my vain worthlessness
Humbling me to seek God of grace
Completing me with love’s embrace.

When confronted vis-à-vis my understanding about the Almighty
with this vital spiritual question, "Do you really know God?
my predicament regarding the divine was then put into the crucible
an encounter that has become a milestone in my faith venture…

Faith-inquiry for the first time
Awakened my soul with blest chime
While pointed to God Who’s the way
The truth, and life I must obey.

When invited to a Bible study “to know the Lord all the more”  
I declined many times being settled with my religious status
asserting that I believed in God, having been raised going to church
with parents and home, considered as good and well.

Bible study of faith-venture
By God’s prodding midst love-gesture
Did lead me to His gracious heart
And through trust, never to depart.

When I acceded to the spiritual endeavour expounding Who God is
I learned from the Scriptures His testimonies, precepts, and statutes
as well as His grace, mercy, and compassion, power and wisdom
that define and describe HIM as the Lord, and distinguish HIM as the Saviour.  

Scriptures indeed exalt God’s name
Expressing what His truths proclaim
Granting me peaceful pardon peace
Thus, my skepticism did cease.

When I responded to the Holy Spirit’s gentle working 
my soul received the promised life eternal offered by Jesus Christ
along His assured genuine freedom from iniquities’ condemnation
setting me toward heavenly abode along victorious journey.

Fortified faith upheld by God*
Ascends along His guiding rod
While Him I praise, thank, and worship
Serving Him through sweet partnership.

*Jude 1:25 To the only wise God our Saviour, be glory and majesty, dominion and power, both now and ever. Amen.

February 10, 2022
3rd place, "Pick-A-Title, Vol 28- A Deconstruction" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Edward Ibeh; judged on 2/13/2022.

Mental Illness Inherent Since Birth

Fresh home from therapy,
     and resonate with zeal
tush air cerebral cogs a turn'n
     analogous to and pinion wheel

hence attempt made to bare soul,
     sans thru poetry re: veal
ling avidity, asper barreling neurological
     daily kos loaded truck full

     heading toward figurative
     lifelong landfill deposits
     on weekly psycho
     logical session I unseal

manipulating bothersome issues
     controlled via bot size thumbwheel,
which grave undertaking i.e.
     professional counseling allows,

     enables, and provides opportunistic
     gradual process at selfheal
ling oft times necessitates
     reviewing silent Virgina reel

comprising the story
     of earlier life piecemeal
akin to a slapdash montage
     chronicling existential ordeal,

now referencing adenoids
     (removal first mention within
     poetic endeavor, when young boy)
     loosely linkedin with nasopharyngeal

pseudo oral palate
     highway tucking each meal
     across miniature bridgework,
     ma late mum meekly

     acceded to doctors orders,
     said operation sub
     sequently deemed unnecessary
affecting negligible decreasing nasality

     predicated on split (bifid
     or bifurcated uvula), viz laryngeal
utterances finds me speculating
     speculating now, whether taking kneel

ling pose possibly coo dove
     wrought divine intercession
giving me super powers ideal
for fighting off being bullied

     gloating this instant imagining
     bringing beastie boys to heel
actual reality visit my kid self,
     a most convenient scapegoat

socially withdraw puny size lad
internalizing hateful barbs glom
     ming up significant emotional gearwheel
inferiority complex predominating

     supplemented with cumulative
     anger, a potent feel
ling exacerbating anxiety prone disposition
     courtesy chromosomal 
     (pop'n mom genes) art of the deal.


The Withered Tree Spake

"The withered tree spake"

Battered and bruised - yet I stand, 
firmly rooted deep down;
seasons have gone by - blowing hot and cold, 
yet, I live without a frown!

Leaves go dry - they shed off and fly, 
'nay me' - the firm trunk I am!
Here to stay - with a dig in the heels, 
showing character none can fathom!

Ants crawl up and so do the bugs 
and I do see a Pecker;
They huddle-up to nest - and some do rest, 
'hey there' - 'you are a home maker'!

In time they lay - then cuddle-up on it, 
'eureka', the eggs that crack;
Hairless and shrivelled - they feast on the crawlers,  
also learning life's nuances and knack!

Autumn draws the Spring - covers me to the brims, 
thus the change of colour;
Lived long enough - knowing change alone as constant, 
I behold my crest in valour!

Every moment is new - all uncertain, 
around me and in me life adrift;
I've come to terms - acceded to the norms,
that truth is never to shift!

Travails of time, has its way,
to wail and warn you from a collision head long;
May peace prevail with calm and poise, 
will rightfully go back to where we all belong!
© Ram Ram  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Let There Be Limericks: a Little Bit Biblical Ii

Sodom and Gomorrah
There is nothing at all today that remains
Of those two sinful cities that once stood on the plain.
When God vent his wrath upon Sodom and Gomorrah,
They quickly went from here today to gone tomorrow,
And all that poor Lot got was some salt for his pains.


Herod and Salome
Herod's lust for Salome a stepfather's exceeded,
But when he offered to pay her to dance, she acceded.
She didn't ask for gold, instead,
She wanted John the Baptist's head,
And that seventh veil was all the inducement horny Herod needed.


Samson and Delilah
When Delilah learned, to his despair,
That Samson's strength lay in his hair,
She got him drunk, he fell asleep,
And then she sheared him like a sheep.
Some secrets are best to keep and not to share.

His Gift

God made her as his gift and she, once laid
beside the luscious, tempting limbs, acceded
to profane acts under God’s Sacred Tree
and slurped the ill-timed juice, the god-damned seed.

She gave him some; and he did not refuse
her, joining instead the mutinous ménage
against the Trinity. They tasted heaven
and in that moment bit the dust 
of earth.

And now they curse: they curse the Interloper
who came and threw their timing out of joint,
spilling truth - with lies - all to seduce her;
they curse their God for what He gave them - choice.

And since that time, engorged with sweat and dust
they dread the right to choose more than their lust.
© Dee Zane  Create an image from this poem.

HOW CAN I PRETEND: PART 2

HOW CAN I PRETEND ? 
PART 2

Pretence is for those who 
round a corner with I did
read that book, she smiles
with her eyes, then escape 
to humour minds or waves  
agonising over shame 
or secrecy or stealth 
calculating cunning 
strategies for recognition 
such nouns or adjectives 
are human language  
defining egoic grids
instead I marry 
transparency with an 
undisputed path of trauma
truth leaving pretence to 
collect lipstick, mascara 
house-frames whilst I 
hop skip my naked soul

Neither thunderstorms 
dragons, poverty, fungus 
will scare this soul 
basking in authenticity 
whose fireflies danced 
at a polished staircase 
foyer warning of faded 
fragments, smashed 
Cinderella shoes

No pretending about 
tiptoeing across shattered 
glass witnessing that 
even a Coelacanth 
would not swim towards 
a cubic zirconia cloned 
as diamond landing 
on ocean floor in a 
Seapoint walk clothed 
in bitter tears
I’m too smart for
pretence !

How can I pretend having 
Rebirthed through a Heart 
leaving ego standing naked   
at Lions Gate or some other
portal I do not yet perceive 
ready to take instruction
as previously I did from 
my Maker with a Yes !
I will ! 
Anything You say 
as You bliss me out 
slash me with pointed 
Flames clearing this 
muck down my legs
I acceded to navigate 

What do they know about 
tearing torture to wear 
my colours as owl crown
No torture at all !
but a willingness to 
submit to conscious 
suffering like bee to 
pollen whispering 
Come here, my Love 
knowing how to bind 
honey anyway but loose
My mottled magical 
mystical Mary make 
muffins in her median 
muscles whilst meditating 
dare not pretend that
laundry becoming dung  
heaps, rust festering 
around auto-immune
vibrations do not 
matter as threadbare
tyres tell their lies
looping lice

Pretence lies coffined
Cold

 
©GhairoDanielsPoetry&
Song2024

Dieu Et Mon Droit

"Oh King Charles Philip Arthur George,
how do I see thee?
Let me count the ways...
Tho' beauty is only skin deep,
and in the eye of the beholder,
or so we have been told,
yours is more, it goes to the bone,
a sore sight for eyes to behold,
now you have acceded to the throne.
As, like diarrhoea, it seems,
it runs in the genes,
and, if POTUS is President of the USA,
would you be he, KOTUK,
King Of The UK?"
'Surely you jest,' quoth he in dour reply.
Tho', not joking nor feeling surly,
"Some things you simply can't deny,
ours not to reason why," said I,
"and please don't call me Shirley!"

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