A Shout Into the Void

Upon the arc rises familiar visage of tenebrous dawn
As birdsongs protest, yet another day gone wrong,
In anguish of emptiness thrashing~ stygian, forlorn,
Screaming relentlessly of despondent, indignant void
Blasting his emotions, clasped in poignant thoughts.

Nothingness was the theme of his darkened night
That brazenly shrouded luminance of starlit skies,
As the waxing moon turned pallid, refusing to shine
And benevolence of Venus dolefully uttered a sigh
When dreams, too, acceded to nightmares’ assault. 

Life has been a long journey, trekking hills of misery
In hollow pursuit of hope, always despaired trying~
Every forward step of progress unresponsive, lacking
To rescue him from oblivion, from gravity of abyss,
Where silence echoes fear, warning there is no exit.

He knows intimately, she too feels dread of anxiety:
Of ocean-storms unseasonably rushing summer heat,
Parching her delicate notions of blossoming spring,
Of harsh winters encroaching on her autumns fiercely;
Yet, she stands steadfastly, defying the curse of grief.

Prodding goodwill of divinity she tolls bells of harmony 
Giving voice and meaning to life’s reassuring feelings
Clamoring for a day to brighten halo of their morning,
Demanding relief; with her clenched fists at the ready…
Forever, if it takes that long, to alter path of destiny.

December 20, 2021
Poem of the day on December 22, 2021
Placed 1st: Pick-A-Title, Vol 27 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Title: A Shout Into The Void
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Deo Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 11:20 AM
How do you (& others like Robert Lindley, Besma Dziri, et al) string so many great words together?! Kudos
Cunningham Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 4:45 AM
Back with congrats Vijay on the top spot, well deserved too. Tom
Pandit Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 9:23 AM
Thank you Tom. Much appreciate.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 8:17 PM
Congratulations on having this beauty at the top of the best new poems list Vijay! Kudos! Blessings xxoo
Pandit Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 9:23 AM
Thank you for your return visit Connie. Much appreciate.
Kiser Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 3:26 PM
OH wow, beautifully done and Congratulations on your win!
Pandit Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 9:22 AM
Thank you MLK.
Sands Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 10:12 AM
Congratulations for #1 on the best new poem list Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 11:16 AM
Thank you Heidi. Much appreciate. Haven't seen a new poem from you for a while.
Proxenos Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 10:04 AM
Vijay dear friend, my husband and I have been away for two weeks - i thought of you and the wonderful descriptions you write describing landscapes with such talent, we visited the awesome, amazing Midlands of Kwazulu Natal, and for three quarters of our stay were shrouded in mist, heavenly! Congratulations for your POTD on the 22nd of December, a truly remarkable poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 11:17 AM
Thank you Jennifer. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Sounds like you had a great time being away on vacation.
Jangid Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 7:44 AM
Beautiful amazing
Pandit Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 8:41 AM
Thank you Arjun.
Kiser Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 4:10 PM
I get a chill when I began to read this, then it builds to something hopeful; beautifully depicted imagery.
Pandit Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 6:03 PM
Thank you MLK--much appreciate.
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 12:06 PM
"Prodding goodwill of divinity she tolls bells of harmony Giving voice and meaning to life’s reassuring feelings" ~Beautiful. Like a bridge of hope, you lifted my heart. You wrote a masterpiece in this amazing and awesome poem! Happy new year Vijay <3
Pandit Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 6:02 PM
Your comments are very generous and eloquent, BJ. Thank you for visiting --much appreciate.
Ibeh Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 9:51 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest, Vijay:-) Your poem is spectacular, no wonder it won POTD! Well-deserved, for sure.
Pandit Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 6:01 PM
So very kind of you, Edward. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks for sponsoring contests with superb themes.
Alex Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 9:43 PM
Great narration and beautiful work. "Life has been a long journey, trekking hills of misery In hollow pursuit of hope" - The whole poem is beautifully written. Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 6:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Kauffman Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 11:10 AM
Out of darkness comes "bells of harmony," "halo of morning," "to alter path of destiny." Out of darkness comes a demand for hope to spread its wings over "harsh winters," "ocean storms" and "curse of grief." Wonderfully written take on the theme Vijay! It was tough and challenging theme ! Congratulations on your POTD! Sending you all the blessings of the Christmas season.
Pandit Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 7:24 AM
So very kind of you Sam. Many thanks for taking the time to write a detailed, insightful feedback. Much appreciate your visit and comments. My very best to you for the new year, Sam.
Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2021 at 10:10 PM
Love how you took this challenge and I see you also got a POTD for this one . Big congrats for that
Pandit Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 7:22 AM
Much appreciate, Andrea. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 25, 2021 at 7:49 PM
Congratulations on POTD,
Pandit Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 7:21 AM
Thank you Kim. Much appreciate.
Awtry Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 4:11 PM
So descriptive and filled with so much feeling! Fantastic writing. Congratulations on your POTD honor :) -ps
Pandit Avatar
December 25, 2021 at 4:06 PM
Thank you PS--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.
Messina Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Wonderful write, Vijay. Your pen always so bright and golden. Wishing you and your family a very Merry Christmas and a Happy & Healthy New Year. All the best, Charlie
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 9:13 AM
So very kind of you Charlie. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks. My best to you for the holidays and the new year.
Brown Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 8:14 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Vijay ~ Enjoyed
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 4:26 AM
Thank you Debra--much appreciate.
Nicole Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 6:27 PM
Your words shine through the darkness. Echo through the void. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 4:26 AM
Thank you for your return visit my friend. Much appreciate. My very best to you for the holidays and the new year.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 6:14 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Vijay. An amazing poem with a poignant thought-provoking theme! Your images always take my breath away! Best wishes ~ Mala
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 4:25 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, Mala. Many thanks.
Watt Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 5:33 PM
Vijay, always a delight to enjoy your poetic mastery of the emotional journey called life... melancholy with a hopeful conclusion, I particularly enjoyed 'Giving voice and meaning to life’s reassuring feelings'. Congrats on your POTD acknowledgement, my friend.
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 4:24 AM
So very kind of you John. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Y. Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 5:22 PM
WoW! Vijay, What an outstanding entry for the contest theme. I found it to be intriguing and thought-provoking. Congrats in advance. Best wishes in the contest. Congratulations on a well-deserved poem of the day. Have a good evening:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 4:23 AM
Glad you stopped by my friend with your kind thoughts. Much appreciate Alexis. Many thanks.
Doll Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 4:52 PM
Vijay, Congratulations on POTD. Fantastic~ Warren
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 4:23 AM
Thank you Warren. Much appreciate.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 3:54 PM
Congratulations on having this amazing poem honored for POTD Vijay. Your talent is astounding. Blessings for a wonderful Christmas/holiday. xxoo
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 4:22 AM
Thank you Connie. Much appreciate your kind remarks. My best to you for the holidays and new year.
La France Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 1:37 PM
Vijay, wonderful poem and congratulations on your POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 4:21 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, Constance. Many thanks.
Trifiatis Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 1:23 PM
Congratulations on this poetic melody that was honored as POTD, my dearest friend, Vijay! Merry Christmas!
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 4:20 AM
Thank you my dear friend. Best wishes to you and your family for the festive season and new year. My thoughts reach out to you as you carry the burdens of family and friends who are going through tough times.
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