Acute Poems | Examples


Premium MemberAcute Childhood Astronomical Paranoia

In the sky, a brightly shining sun
is sending rays to catch someone, 
but 'neath the trees I swiftly run.  

Now, the hunt is taken by the moon,
but she won't snatch me very soon.
I peek from bed at that cratered goon,

who, undaunted, does then recruit
reinforcements, evil stars that shoot 
twinkles at me, in hot pursuit, 

but I'm laughing, oh so loud, 
stars in bed, sun behind a shroud. 
What's this - I'm chased by a cloud!

Everything in the heavens, high, 
is after me, an important guy.  
Do you know the reason why?
Categories: acute, humor, moon, stars, sun,
Form: Rhyme

The Mirage

The river Life is nothing but a glib tunnel,
Except for the dazzling water, it is just a disastrous canal.
Except for any untamed misery,
It would only be an adversary.

Except for an acute pied piper,
This river would be an unalike well-giver.
The fragile memories spring up in the corridor,
In which nobody can hope for the undisclosed Advisor.

It is just a storehouse of harassment,
The well-giver is just a warped embodiment.
To bid in the farewell is only a colossal audacity,
To sacrifice your psyche is nothing but a callous mendacity.

The perpetual night is the name of an idiot,
Nothing can last for an everlasting period,
Nobody can live long without their deeds,
In the end, I want to confront my haughty demeanour and its mistreatments.

This river is only a four-digit number,
It does not wait for any illusory diver.
It does not cost more than a voyage,
It is no more than a mirage.
Categories: acute, allegory, confusion, extended metaphor,
Form: Rhyme


Premium MemberAcute Observation

How wonderful you looked tonight
Those boots you wore were out of sight
You truly are the cat's meow
When you walked in my eyes said, "Wow!"
All woman, yes, from head to toe
A tattoo on my heart, you know?
Desire's there at every turn
And I still think about slow burn
Categories: acute, beautiful, desire, for her,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberA New World Question

A New World Question

Now —
It must be asked— seriously —
How despised is hatred?  
Hating hatred?

Who?  When?  Where?  How?
What…to do about that?  The ways
Of feeling — totally pondered — so
Considerably needed for 
Actions sculpted
To fit a better, newer, whole world —


——.      ————————         —————-
(c)sally young eslinger 5/17/22
Thanks be to God
Calling forth of poets
Categories: acute, conflict, future, hate, history,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberTo Acute Awareness

Let us not wallow in a quixotic stupor;
Becoming their silly food-stamped serfs:-
Maudlin beings drained of all our vigor—
Doomed to old slave quarters berths.
Categories: acute, allegory, black african american,
Form: Quatrain


Premium Member- Acute Diarrhea -

let's share what we have

                                       some people have no filter ~

                                     common sense ~ or shame










11/01/2021
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Senryu - Humorous, Satirical or Dark Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
2nd place in the contest
Categories: acute, angst, fun, satire,
Form: Senryu

Premium MemberAcute Little Love Foray-

Cavalry chivalry;
Splendor cadillac ;
I'm sure love 
For you shall;
Not to be ignored;
Beloved you are my 
Beloved;
And heated bliss;
I must insist;
I 'll seal our hearts wish;
With the Velvet kiss;
Splendor a cabaret;
 I love you so this day;
What a beautiful foray?


12/23/20
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr © 2020
Categories: acute, cute love, engagement, heart,
Form: Rhyme

Acute-On-Chronic Bumper Sticker Deficiency

Politics season
Sans rhyme and reason
Never-ending blitz
Constant News Network
Won’t give it a rest

Traffic today
Bumper stickers’
Noted absence
Relief, not grief

Excitement 
Is absent
Root against

Trump chump
Hill pill

Lose.

3/22/16
Categories: acute, america, humor, political, ,
Form: Diminished Hexaverse

Acute Consumption

Weary, sullen, mournful face,
A tale of internal disturbance tells,
Perhaps of some chronic illness,
Or of current affairs!

Dark rings around the eyes,
Malar prominence and sunken cheeks,
Malar flush of high fever,
Makes the diagnosis more clear

Clinicians! beware! pay attention!
It may be Acute consumption!

( Note:-- The first episode of 
Acute consumption i.e.
 Acute miliary tuberculosis may
 masquerade Acute bronchitis. )
Categories: acute, education, health, science, social,
Form: I do not know?
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