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- Acute Diarrhea -

let's share what we have

                                       some people have no filter ~

                                     common sense ~ or shame










11/01/2021
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Senryu - Humorous, Satirical or Dark Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
2nd place in the contest
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Date: 2/4/2021 9:58:00 AM
Ha ha liked this poem and now off to make lunch. Have a great week my friend. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/5/2021 6:08:00 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2021 8:30:00 PM
Congrats on the contest placement, liked the poem and the picture is great.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2021 1:35:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, J. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2021 11:43:00 AM
Well done Sunshine Smile. Congratulations on placement. Thanks for your soupmail. Howard
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2021 2:16:00 PM
- Thank you very much for visiting my poem with your congratulations, Howard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2021 8:08:00 AM
Appropriate for any pandemic, congratulations Anne-Lise...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2021 2:16:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Charlie ... nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2021 5:15:00 AM
Maybe no filter, but hopefully T.P. Congrats on your win!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2021 2:15:00 PM
- What means : T.P. - ? - Thanks for the congratulations, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2021 9:47:00 PM
Ha Ha....well done and said....Congrats on your win Anne-Lise :))
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2021 2:13:00 PM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2021 7:18:00 PM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise, for your great placement in the contest!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2021 2:12:00 PM
- Thank you very much for visiting my poem with your congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2021 6:41:00 PM
lol ~ well said
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2021 2:11:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2021 4:38:00 PM
Anne-Lise, back with congratulations!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2021 2:11:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2021 3:09:00 PM
Dropping back with many congrats Anne-lise:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2021 2:11:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2021 2:28:00 PM
Loved it first time read, and now congrats to you!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2021 2:10:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2021 2:19:00 PM
Haha, nearly missed this one Anne, congrats on your win. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2021 2:09:00 PM
- Glad you came with your congratulations, thank you very much Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2021 1:09:00 PM
so very true!! big congrats on the win.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2021 2:06:00 PM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2021 12:35:00 PM
A senryu for the times. Congratulations Anne-Lise on your winning placement.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2021 2:03:00 PM
- Thank you very much for visiting my poem with your congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2021 12:00:00 PM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever poem!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/14/2021 12:11:00 PM
- Oh what a surprise ... many thanks for my place in your contest, Tania ... I won with toilet paper ... :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2021 6:08:00 AM
So love this creative funny poem and it made me laugh. We always have loads of toilet paper, guess I grew up with my mum doing this and I inherited this silly habit. In fact Ricky and his wife are the same. However, I see some people shopping and they put one or two toilet rolls in their trolley, how they manage I don't know. Good luck in the contest sis Hugs and Blessings Jennifer.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/14/2021 7:10:00 AM
- A pack of 8 rolls should be enough for a while ... we all need it :) - Thank you very much for your comment, dear friend Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2021 9:22:00 PM
This is so cute Anne-Kise. I remember at the beginning of this pandemic people at the supper market with carts full of toilet paper. They had to put a limit on how many you could buy. Seems like case lots wee in order to me but most were buying toilet paper. God Bless, JB
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/14/2021 7:07:00 AM
- A limit was set here too ... but, then the shelves were empty ... now it is "lock down" ... and toilet paper is hoarded again ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2021 2:58:00 PM
Can you spare a square (Elaine on Seinfeld)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/14/2021 7:03:00 AM
... with pleasure, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2021 1:03:00 PM
lol, I much needed smile today Sunshine , thank you , God bless.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/14/2021 7:02:00 AM
- Glad I could give you a smile, thank you very much Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2021 9:07:00 AM
Truly some people do not have common sense Anne..selfish people... well said in this Senryu..dear Anne.. Hugs ~ Ani
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/14/2021 7:01:00 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment, dear Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2021 6:45:00 AM
Lol! I know a few who hoards over 200 toilet paper... Nice one, Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/12/2021 7:01:00 AM
- Should they start a new store, Akkina? ... - I can not understand such people ... I remember that some used newspaper ... ( they did not have toilet indoors ... and MANY years ago ... ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2021 5:54:00 AM
Love this. God bless you sweet lady
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/12/2021 6:08:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Gina - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2021 4:37:00 AM
Hilarious Senryu dearest, Anne-Lise! God forbid we find ourselves in this predicament! Hugs xxx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/12/2021 6:06:00 AM
- We are in a time where the ego comes out clearly ... really tragic to see ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2021 3:05:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, I agree, one hoarding in this manner has absolutely nothing to do with Covid. Well done:-) Alexis
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/12/2021 6:03:00 AM
- An ugly behavior ... some think only of themselves, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2021 2:04:00 PM
ha! very true, anne-lise! well said...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/12/2021 6:02:00 AM
- A bad thing to do, Ilene ... we have to share ... there is enough for everyone :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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