Abrasive Poems | Examples

Premium Member Lubricant- MJF

I feel it smoothly, gliding freely,
Liquid fluidity surging.
Not a fraction of too much friction,
An undulating path followed effortlessly.
Movement and balance allowing continuous flow.
A sense of harmony as the lubrication guides easily.
Embracing depth with no distraction.
No tension felt as if all melts with fluid energy.
A transition of like particles melding without abrasive motion.
A sleek silky transition is accomplished.
Liquid fluidity surges.
The artist textured an abstract artwork to the canvas.
Bold gradient strokes, are a pivotal attraction adding to the ambience.
Light, and layered emotion captivate through transitions and bold contrasts.
The paint melts across the canvas, intersected by frivolous bubbles and a masterful juxtaposition of cracked and fluid textures.
Each element from the fractured patterns to the luminous flow of paint, contributes to a sense of wonder of movement. 
The more I gaze into this painting the more I see the effects of lubrication.
Imagining the paint is still actively moving freely on the canvas to a degree.
Form: Ekphrasis

Premium Member A Game Of Telephone

Let's play a game of telephone...

crepitant tongues converse

overly dramatic tendencies 

incoherently  concrete

awakening preoccupation 

a train flying off the tracks

chaotic clumps crust up

dissonance distended 

indecorous reception

viral instigator

I dont want to sift

sterilize rhetoric

abrasive to the ear.

A game of telephone...let's play.


Atlas Thomas Buchanan

Admirable 
Tough
Lots of energy 
Abrasive
Sunset

Trusting
Hardworking 
Original 
Mature-ish
Accommodating 
Sociable

Balanced
Ultimate edition 
Candid
Healthy
Abundant
Non-nonchalant 
Agile
Neighborly
Form: Acrostic

Premium Member It was a Fright

Let’s get rid of that old antique thing, my daughter said.
Was she talking about the clock? Was she loose in her head?
I pretended I had not heard her weird kind of blasphemy.
That clock was given to me by my oldest Grandma McGee.

Sure, it was ancient, it no longer played a pretty song
Some of it had splintered, its chimes were abrasive and long
But there was a connection between that timepiece and me.
Maybe because it had come from my favorite Grandma McGee.

That night I sat up in bed, wondering if a ghost was about the house.
That clock was playing like it was haunted by moose and mouse.
My hair frizzled with fright, for I had not had this experience before.
I broke off three teeth grinding them; I locked my bedroom door.

Could not get to sleep the rest of the night; this was a fright, it was a fright.
Next day, I tried to give the clock away at the first sign of daylight.
Who would want it? Asked my daughter, it's scary as a gargoyle on speed.
I can deliver it to your house, however, if you have a desire or need.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member My Pain

My Pain is invisible to one's naked eyes
With no emotional sensitivity. My Pain

Physical collateral damages awakened me
Consistently from a sound sleep. My Pain

Emotionally pain is overwhelming, racing
thoughts, vulnerability, traumas, and grief often
haunt me. My Pain

Abrasive relationships and familiar faces encounter
me with no emotional sensitivity and no support.
Material losses, lessons gained I don't want no
more pain. My Pain
Form: Bio


I can't read minds

I don't read between the lines and I can't read minds
I was unsuccessful on my last three tries
you asked for my opinion but what you're seeking is agreement
so I toss what I was thinking in the trash like I don't need it
I do whatever works unless what works is inconvenient
then I kill the plan I had and act as if I'm in bereavement
I don't care about possessions and I know how hard success is
when successful at any level it don't feel like I expected
and regardless how I feel I have no choice but to accept it
sometimes the stuff that happens ain't as grand as its perception
that's just the way it is and that's how will explain it
if the statement that I'm making is too abrasive then I'll replace it
when I'm told I'm acting childish my ability to form
an excuse that I can use while I'm building me a Fort
goes right outside the door and I resort to getting petty
Richard Petty go in circles till civilities restored
Form: Rhyme

Bloodletting

Real poets don’t make lasting friends
they shun fraternity
Their truth like gritty sandpaper
abrasive when intoned   
The reader may be gratified 
with what the words uncover
More likely though the pain involved
— will cut them to the bone

(Dreamsleep: February, 2024)
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Leprechaun Larrys Secret Weapon Boast

I have a secret weapon Leprechaun Larry said.
We thought he was odd, a bit tiny in his head.
It will get me the magic secret to the pot of gold.
His claims were abrasive, rude, impolite and cold.

What is his secret? I wondered to my cousin Mug.
I think it is that he has a pet, a rare kind of ladybug.
Ladybug was not talking, so we followed him about.
Until Leprechaun Larry began to grouse and pout.

If I show you my secret weapon, I will lose power.
He said this to us in the middle of an April Shower.
I have to get stoked up and ready for March again.
We finally left him alone, because he is our kin.
Form: Rhyme

Paenitentia

We can mortify our flesh,
wear our sign of confession,
perform our penance,
bear portions of scratchy sackcloth
so rough, so abrasive, against our bare backs.

Our sideboard now bears such a treasure,
three posies, nosegays, tussie-mussies,
bound in such pieces that would
love to scratch at our naked flesh
if we pressed it against our chests, our bellies, our backs.

Do we think of our past - our past’s own past?
Do we ignore all history
as we glance at, or disregard,
those posies, nosegays, tussie-mussies,
that sit in scratchy sackcloth?

(11 Dec 2023)

Legacy

LEGACY

If all that is left of someone are the words they said
Or wrote, perhaps – whether as a poem or a diary
Then they must be remembered for such expression
Even if it should read almost as a hesitant confession
The tone can be humble, bold, or maybe even fiery
But if written words, then they might at least be read

All the things they never said, and all that they did
Proudly sit alongside some of those deeds we recall
A life well lived, frontiers that were boldly crossed
But what of the million thoughts at risk of being lost
Don’t leave a unique voice to be never heard at all
Maybe husky in later years, but smoother as a kid

A person is reflected in all things both said and done
For many, a silent photo is sufficient for the memory
Biography in its style for some, sounding too remote
And cannot compare to what they themselves wrote
Yet harsh words recalled may be abrasive, like emery
But for all who were close, they miss the morning sun
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Tongue

* The Tongue
By: Miracle Man
7-25-2023

Sometimes we comply to our inner voice,
giving little thought where it might lead.
We followed blindly, as if void of choice,
then regretting later that we paid it heed.

Remorseful feelings always come too late,
but with forethought we might have avoided.
Once door’s ajar, and horse through the gate,
those abrasive words spoken can’t be voided.



* James 3: 5-12 KJV
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member Serenity

Serenity where are you hiding?
The edges I feel are jagged and 
Abrasive, not conducive with
The peace I seek to find. 

My mind is always busy:
Thoughts rushing like commuters
To a waiting train as the guard
Signals it’s time to leave.

Where is the solace and the solitude?
The time to think, to regroup, 
To just ‘be’, in the moment, 
When the moments are rushing by at speed. 

I long to be still; to slow the pace,
Leave the race and remember who I am.
To dance in slow motion and move
To the rhythm of a gentle tempo.

Serenity where are you hiding?
When did you sneak away? 
How did I miss your leaving?
I must have been racing for that train.

Premium Member Raised On the Streets

Downright nasty
    abrasive was she
  Hostile to friends
    vitriolic to enemies

  Raised on the streets
    she learned their dark ways
  Focus on your target
    and set it ablaze

  Who knew underneath
    was a little girl crying
  Scared-to-death of the life
    she devoted to dying
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Everyone Stop Needing

Everyone stop needing,
can’t you see how I try?
Feels like nothing but stress; 
A mask with a wide smile 
slow dancing with darkness;

Everyone stop needing!  
Popping off those demands,
such an abrasive touch!
It’s driving me insane,
always asking so much; 

Everyone stop needing! 
Wild goose is what you chase 
running down a cyclone; 
You’re not there when I ask,
leave well enough alone.

Beyond the Waterhole

Wandering in the desert
profanity infused me
Each word like a scorpion
the curses on fire

The sand an abrasive
the cactus a warning
The sting of my words
—killing prophet and liar

(Dreamsleep: October, 2022)
Form: Rhyme

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