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Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann  11/7/25

Contest: Lubricant.

 

I feel it smoothly, gliding freely, Liquid fluidity surging. Not a fraction of too much friction, An undulating path followed effortlessly. Movement and balance allowing continuous flow. A sense of harmony as the lubrication guides easily. Embracing depth with no distraction. No tension felt as if all melts with fluid energy. A transition of like particles melding without abrasive motion. A sleek silky transition is accomplished. Liquid fluidity surges. The artist textured an abstract artwork to the canvas. Bold gradient strokes, are a pivotal attraction adding to the ambience. Light, and layered emotion captivate through transitions and bold contrasts. The paint melts across the canvas, intersected by frivolous bubbles and a masterful juxtaposition of cracked and fluid textures. Each element from the fractured patterns to the luminous flow of paint, contributes to a sense of wonder of movement. The more I gaze into this painting the more I see the effects of lubrication. Imagining the paint is still actively moving freely on the canvas to a degree.

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Date: 7/11/2025 11:28:00 AM
Amazing imagery. All I can think about when I hear lubricant is sex. Hmmm maybe I can do a limerick.
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Date: 7/11/2025 12:49:00 PM
I had to be careful not to go too far down that track. Needed to stay with the painting. A limerick will be good. GL :)
Date: 7/10/2025 11:14:00 AM
Great paintng experience.
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Date: 7/11/2025 12:49:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend.

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