Lubricant- MJF

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Contest: Lubricant.

 

I feel it smoothly, gliding freely,
Liquid fluidity surging.
Not a fraction of too much friction,
An undulating path followed effortlessly.
Movement and balance allowing continuous flow.
A sense of harmony as the lubrication guides easily.
Embracing depth with no distraction.
No tension felt as if all melts with fluid energy.
A transition of like particles melding without abrasive motion.
A sleek silky transition is accomplished.
Liquid fluidity surges.
The artist textured an abstract artwork to the canvas.
Bold gradient strokes, are a pivotal attraction adding to the ambience.
Light, and layered emotion captivate through transitions and bold contrasts.
The paint melts across the canvas, intersected by frivolous bubbles and a masterful juxtaposition of cracked and fluid textures.
Each element from the fractured patterns to the luminous flow of paint, contributes to a sense of wonder of movement. 
The more I gaze into this painting the more I see the effects of lubrication.
Imagining the paint is still actively moving freely on the canvas to a degree.

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Date: 8/6/2025 8:25:00 AM
This is a great poem and a great take on the contest, congratulations
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Date: 7/19/2025 10:06:00 AM
Your wonderful SV, you nailed it! Most can only think of one thing when they hear that word, you've made an absolutely amazing entry and most beautiful oil <--lol you've posted! Wow
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Date: 7/25/2025 8:53:00 AM
Well dear friend, I cant say that 'one thing' didnt cross my mind. I guess inuendo plays a part of all poetry. Thanks for your encouraging words. Really appreciated.
Date: 7/15/2025 8:40:00 AM
This certainly has my mind spinning Svvie. Really enjoyed the ride! :)
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Date: 7/25/2025 8:44:00 AM
Thank you lovely one. :)
Date: 7/11/2025 11:28:00 AM
Amazing imagery. All I can think about when I hear lubricant is sex. Hmmm maybe I can do a limerick.
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Date: 7/11/2025 12:49:00 PM
I had to be careful not to go too far down that track. Needed to stay with the painting. A limerick will be good. GL :)
Date: 7/10/2025 11:14:00 AM
Great paintng experience.
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Date: 7/11/2025 12:49:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend.
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