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Whole Day Footles

Sun peeps Gloom flees East bleeds Shafts speed Hours trot Day hot Trade zooms Street steams Men sweat They fret Cars ply Birds fly Wind blows sky glows Sun set In west For rest, Birds nest Light wanes Dusk veils Stars blink Moon winks Owls hoot Pigs snort Night creeps World sleeps ___________________ July.21.2022 ~Placed Seventh~ Brian Strand Premiere Poetry Contest

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/24/2022 9:40:00 AM

Valsa, this is one of the best footles I have read in some time. So creative and fun to read my friend. Congratulations on your wonderful win in this contest by the creator of this poetry form. Blessings xxoo

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/22/2022 8:57:00 PM

Beautiful footle. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/22/2022 8:22:00 PM

There's some interesting contrast, Valsa, cheers on your winning placement my friend, Aloha~William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2022 7:50:00 PM

Big Congrats to you.

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/22/2022 5:42:00 PM

I like the noices these guys make good for footles...Owls hoot Pigs snort! Congratulations on your win! ~Anaya

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/22/2022 12:14:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your winner contest placement. You deserve it with this wonderful footle, dear Valsa.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/22/2022 5:05:00 AM

Valsa, you bring to mind some lovely pictures with each pair. A day that was effectively navigated. Best wishes for the contest.

Anil Deo

Date: 7/21/2022 10:29:00 PM

I love how u crafted this poem. On a lighter note: when "night creeps" so donthieves and other perverts. I hope SIN TAKES OFF ON SUNDAYS or any night, LOL!