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Whispers Of Hell

DISCLAIMER : THIS IS AN ACCOUNT OF THE MASSACRE IN ORADOUR-SUR-GLANE IN FRANCE WHICH TOOK PLACE ON JUNE 1OTH 1944 TO MY READERS , " SOME LINES IN THIS POEM ARE GRAPHIC , AND SOME MAY FIND THEM OFFENSIVE . MY INTENT IS NOT TO OFFEND ANYONE , MY INTENT IS TO SHED LIGHT ON THE GRAPHIC REALTIES OF WAR AND EVENTS WHICH HAPPEND ON THIS DAY. "Our voices will never be heard if we choose to remain silent " Whispers of Hell As I walked, no thought of what may lie ahead, I strolled into someone else's frozen hell, now mine. I swear, if I could have plucked my eyes to make blind, And this day ripped my flippant tongue so not to tell, Images that haunt and scar still this fragile mind . The living remains of death, this mueseumed shell, I would with all my heart, have wrenched this tragic find. Encircled by Panzers, 200 raging beats rage, stealing peace, Men shot where they stood , women the ultimate invasion. Eyes like cameras snap each vivid detail, hate in eyes seared, The Martyred village with tongues ablaze, and houses raised. Man's courage smouldering , a child muted in terror hidden, peers Afraid , a child once soft with purity of heart, another child erased . Bodies piled by the roadside lost memories mangled in a heap . And lifeless lives unsung, old and young, the sleeping dead, Brains and beauty mass-acred , they'd huddled close in prayer. Direct orders from Adolf Diekmanm , lay squarely on his head, No sanctity of life as they nail a baby to the cross, in dare, Religion raped in mockery, a crown of thorns upon her head, The screams of crippled mothers laying, crying in despair. The doors locked the torches lit, winged angels soaring, fled. Thanatos through nostrils flamed, spits venom upon our world, The vestry window open, a woman desperate, wriggles, squirms, Outside Gods basilica in flames, lay the wounded and grateful dead. As killers disguised as men herd all life, all life that isn't burning, Those they had shot and wounded , no way to run and hide, Eyes and hearts petrified, the marching helmets with devil's horns, As mens eyes weep with guilt and shame, what has Man become ? The ruins of Man's soul lays quietly within it's now guarded walls, Where 642 women children and men, witnessed the irony in man-kind And now where I softly tread where you once smiled and loved , I fall To my knees and like the impending dead cried what has Man done ? They were the fire beneath the earth , the keepers delivering Hell . And from death and destruction, we have learned nothing from our God ? I roam with heartfelt dread among the ruins and souls of the placid dead. Their homes and hearts ripped out and eighty years on, the ruins lay untouched, Gifts made by the loving hands of a father, destroyed by another man's hate, Homes made by the love of two people, murdered, by the hand of Man's greed,. Loving children slaughtered, "in lawful play", by enemy fathers, disguised as men. My emotions are unequal to their suffering, Man's pain should not be in vain. Our world has learned nothing from our past , a truth known all too well. As today idly our world stands by . "Enjoying Saturday nights out with friends " , My only hope, come Judgement Day, is they will see, and feel the hand of God . The boot stamp of war , embedded in memory, flickering images in my head: Singer sewing machines in ruins lay strewn about the shells of homes destroyed Ready to repair, to mend, to create, a message transcended from the martyred dead. A message of hope, of defiance, of love, our voices heard over the whispers of Hell. " Our words will never be read unless we choose to write them ". A new village has replaced the old village close by and this museum has Been preserved as a reminder of the evils of Man , mankind to horrors of Which we are capable of , it is a part of every French schools curriculum And every child must visit this museum with their school , so they learn and never forget what happened Here on June 10th 1944 , four days after the D-Day landings . All 642 people are buried here and only 7 people escaped . There are monuments and graves across the site laying tribute to all those that died .

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Date: 3/12/2024 6:22:00 AM
this mueseumed shell… And now where I softly tread where you once smiled and loved , I fall To my knees and like the impending dead cried what has Man done ? …the horrors of war (let us not overlook, make light of, every life mourned)…that infant received into the hands of Christ after his(her) horrible death. Congratulations on POTD! Indeed each deed brought to light to its shame.
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Date: 3/11/2024 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Daniel! Well done….Debx
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/11/2024 7:42:00 AM
Many thanks Deb for all your lovely comments they mean a great deal to me , thank you for taking time out of your day to message .Daniel
Date: 3/10/2024 7:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Daniel! A tragic example of the evil outcomes of war. Thank you for sharing this history with us. A poet in Texas, Bill
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/10/2024 10:13:00 PM
Good Morning or is it Evening ? Many thanks Bill for taking the time to read my poem , it's never easy to convey someone else's suffering even many decades after the event , but too often history writes it's own varied and sometimes convenient truth , as who's truth would you like to hear.Thank you so much for taking the time to convey your congrats, as it is truly most appreciated , Daniel
Date: 3/10/2024 3:31:00 PM
' Our voices will never be heard if we choose to remain silent. ' So true. You've expressed in such detail, this horrible event. War is never the right way to handle any situation. Congratulations Daniel, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/10/2024 10:02:00 PM
Good Morning Brandy , many thanks for taking the time to message and like others taking something positive from this poem , war is futile and only breeds more resentment and hate , dialogue for me is always the only option . Once again my many thanks for your kind words . Daniel
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Date: 3/10/2024 6:28:00 PM
Thank you your kind comments on my poetry below, Brandy.
Date: 3/10/2024 1:11:00 PM
Daniel, I've just discovered your poetry (shame on me) and in awe of your talent. Congratulations on having masterfully written today's choice of Poem of the Day.
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/10/2024 1:58:00 PM
Good Evening Lin , there is absolutely nothing to be ashamed about , I have only been on poetry soup for a few weeks (4) and it's difficult to take the time to read every unknown writer, I do thank you for your kind words , everyone on this wonderful platform, has been so kind and encouraging , when I lacked in myself both the courage and the confidence to express myself like I am now . Thank you for your kindness , Daniel
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Date: 3/10/2024 1:37:00 PM
Dear Lin, congratulations on Poem of the Week. The ending brings me back to the beginning. ' this bird was not of flesh and blood, but an Origami work of art.' Like a poem, it has no breath, you paint with words. That's definitely art. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 3/10/2024 1:03:00 PM
It’s interesting to see your wonderful humor the other day and then to see this masterpiece regarding suffering today. Not surprising though as I have often found that those that can do comedy see the world in all its colors. Congratulations on a worthy POTD.
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Date: 3/10/2024 1:49:00 PM
Good Evening Robert , thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful words , I try to write something which is close to my heart which is serious but there is also a need to balance my sanity with humour , but I much prefer the way you have described it as seeing the world in all its colours . I thank you for taking the time to message me , it genuinely means so much to me . Thank you Robert
Date: 3/10/2024 12:06:00 PM
Dear Daniel, your poem, is such a haunting masterpiece that delves into the depths of human suffering and the horrors of war. Your vivid imagery and poignant storytelling captivate the soul. It's no surprise it received POTD—it's a profound reminder of our capacity for both destruction and resilience. Your words echo through history, ensuring we never forget the atrocities of the past. This is a very powerful piece and I enjoyed it. Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/10/2024 12:30:00 PM
Dear Daniel , I always value your comments , but as I have said to get POTD was unexpected and whilst grateful it is tinged with the sadness of those who lived and continue to live through such atrocities, nothing is or will ever be achieved by war , it is futile . Thank you once again for your kind words . Daniel
Date: 3/10/2024 10:13:00 AM
Depravity we mustn't forget. "Man's pain should not be in vain." keep shedding light on history, nobody wants war except powerful people who have vested interests in war. Many shun politics and history. God loves those who help others & understand what occurs in the world. A genocide in progress, devastating to watch, leaders won't cease fire, be ashamed! Congratulations on POTD! "The Price of Liberty is Eternal Vigilance" Merci beaucoup mon frere "Whispers of Hell" French have suffered much too much! hugs~I Am Anaya
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I Am Anaya
Date: 3/10/2024 11:32:00 AM
It's my pleasure, Daniel, your words are heard. A n a y a :)
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/10/2024 10:56:00 AM
Good Evening I Am Amaya, thanking for messaging with such kindness in your words , war is a futile exercise and only breeds more resentment and hatred in man , nothing has or will ever be solved or resolved by the destruction and dehumanisation of our fellow man , thanks again for taking the time to message me . Daniel
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Date: 3/10/2024 10:36:00 AM
Here in the States they've banned history books, be ashamed! you can't erase history, it's like trying to kill a zombie, it'll come back after you!
Date: 3/10/2024 9:31:00 AM
Man's inhumanity to man. It's endless, deadly, horrifying. You depicted it quite well in your worthy Potd. You might like some of Mark Massey's sonnets detailing the horrors and intrigues of WWII
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/10/2024 10:52:00 AM
Good Evening Tom , and thank you for taking the time to message and share your words of wisdom and encouragement , you were my fist comment on here a month ago when I joined poetry soup , and now just like then it means a great deal to me . Thanking you Tom , Daniel
Date: 3/10/2024 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! What a powerful write/story. It is good there is a museum people/kids can visit/learn what happened. Have a blessed day/week writing away............
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Date: 3/10/2024 7:53:00 AM
Good Morning , many thanks for your kind words , I think it's a wonderful concept for children and adults to be educated about their/our past , by preserving the shocking reality of History, in the hope we stop the senselessness of war in the future . Thanks again Paula for taking valuable time to both read and message , it is much appreciated. Have a lovely day . Daniel
Date: 3/10/2024 7:10:00 AM
Dear Daniel, This is so graphic and chilling. You nailed it though. Congratulations on this well earned write POTD..
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/10/2024 7:20:00 AM
Hello Nancy , many thanks for your lovely message , it is an unexpected but much appreciated honour to receive POTD , but tinged with a reflective sadness . Thanks again for taking the time to message , it's truly appreciated. Daniel
Date: 3/10/2024 6:32:00 AM
Powerful, moving, poignant...also courage, bravery, hope. Distinctly beautiful Daniel. Congratulations on the honor of your POTD! :)
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/10/2024 6:39:00 AM
Hello Linda , many thanks for taking time out to send a message with your kind thoughts . I wish like all of us do, the world never knew the meaning of war , so poems like this one were never written to begin with . Thanks again your words are so appreciated . Daniel
Date: 3/10/2024 4:22:00 AM
Congrats .. New here give my poems a read:)
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Date: 3/10/2024 4:58:00 AM
Many thanks Radhika , I will of course look at your poems , enjoy the experience , so far it has been kind to me , and I hope it's as kind to you . Daniel
Date: 3/10/2024 3:24:00 AM
congrats, Daniel, for your POTD designation. Such a soulful and powerful poem about a tragic event. Grateful for the rawness and honesty of your words that gave us a chance to share an emotional experience--one that underscores the senseless tragedy of war. Well done!
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Date: 3/10/2024 4:07:00 AM
Hello Sara , little did I think that I would ever have a poem that was POTD, but like I've said previously it is tinged with sadness as this was other people's reality and that is a pain and truth which is difficult for me to understand, and overcome .As always if it hadn't been for your continued support and faith in me I would never have written this , so thank you Sara . Daniel
Date: 3/10/2024 1:58:00 AM
This is so powerful and soul wrenching, breaks my heart to always read about children and how they are the innocent victims, tangled in the loops of evil hands of humankind, unfair and not something we should witness, although still we see this happening in the world, and its just sad. Youv written it in such a profound soul hurting manner that anyone that reads this would feel every word woven. Sigh. I keep praying for better days. So many lines stood out for me but overall it is all worthy
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Date: 3/10/2024 4:02:00 AM
Thank you Ink Empress , and thank you for taking the time to express your thoughts and to offer congratulations for POTD , although it is tinged with sadness as this was someone's reality , I only saw the aftermath of what remained , but even after all those years it still remained with me , will man ever learn ? Once again thank you for time and kind words . Daniel
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Date: 3/10/2024 1:59:00 AM
Of quotin, so painful and well delivered, congratulations on POTD
Date: 3/10/2024 1:56:00 AM
Daniel, a powerful poem, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 3/10/2024 3:55:00 AM
Thank you Tania , POTD is sad privilege , but I am so pleased that people will learn and hopefully speak about this tragic event . Thanks again, I am always thankful and grateful for others time and shared thoughts . Thank you. Daniel
Date: 3/10/2024 1:52:00 AM
Another terrible atrocity committed by man against man Daniel, proving war really doesn’t have any lows, the rules of engagement are continually flouted, especially when desensitisation to suffering sets in, your POTD is a stark reminder of why we need strong defences and powerful deterrents, to prevent such events happening in the future, appeasement just doesn’t work, A powerful and fully deserving POTD, cheers David
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Date: 3/10/2024 3:50:00 AM
Good Morning David , and thank you so much for your kind words , I think the words "lest we forget are so powerful" , and yet we do , we continuously fail to learn from our past, and yet if we are to strife for a better future we have to recognise our failings in order to correct them . Wasn't expecting POTD , again thank you for taking the time to message , Daniel
Date: 3/10/2024 1:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. This was an intense, difficult to fathom poem.
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Date: 3/10/2024 1:52:00 AM
Many thanks, for taking the time to message. Don't you find life is hard to fathom sometimes. Daniel
Date: 3/10/2024 12:49:00 AM
Back with congratulations to you Daniel on today's POTD honour. Tom
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/10/2024 1:05:00 AM
Hi Tom , Thank you so much , completely unexpected , as when I started writing yesterday morning , I was writing a sequel to Duck Soup Revisited , and then before I knew or finished it , I began writing this poem , completely overwhelmed , thank you once again for taking the time to message . Daniel
Date: 3/10/2024 12:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your powerful potd!
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Date: 3/10/2024 1:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Karen , I'm really overwhelmed and honoured , but more than anything it's about making our community and the world aware of this tragedy and how we can learn from it , if ever . Again thank you so much for messaging, it truly is appreciated . Daniel
Date: 3/9/2024 10:35:00 PM
I remember reading about that one Daniel, man is one evil beast, and now history repeats itself in Ukraine with Putins dogs running amok. It takes time to defeat evil but good will overcome evil in the end. Well done for bringing it to a wider audience. Life certainly isn't all butterflies and flowers. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/9/2024 11:10:00 PM
Good Morning Tom , Many thanks for reading , it just never ceases to amaze me what man is capable of , and as you said it's still happening today , for good to overcome evil we need good people that show leadership through love and empathy , we can but hope , have a great day and thanks again for taking the time to message , it's truly appreciated . Daniel
Date: 3/9/2024 4:45:00 PM
your poem left me breathless, Daniel. You recounted that tragic event with sensitivity coupled with images that underscored the horror of what humans do to other humans all in the name of power.Your poem was poignant & riveting; I felt your courage in writing this poem and share the reality with us. I especially liked: And now where I softly tread where you once smiled and loved , I fall To my knees and like the impending dead cried what has Man done ? I'm misty-eyed at this point. Sara Faving
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/9/2024 10:13:00 PM
Hi Sara , and as always , thank you for your kind words and advice , it was a difficult write emotionally, as what remains there , remained quite vividly in my mind , and always will. Thank you again for everything . Daniel
Date: 3/9/2024 11:46:00 AM
My mother was born in France and my grandma remembers the War very well, I was touched by this,
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/9/2024 12:19:00 PM
Hi , if it only touches one person, you , then it was worth writing , this place is truly haunting and an experience I shall never forget . Thanks again for reading and for your lovely comment .

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