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Unbearable Beauty In White


Her casket closed at her request,
   so no one saw our beauty queen
there lying peacefully at rest, 
   in her soft dress of white sateen.

Her white hair combed in silky curls
   at fifty-five, was premature;
around her neck a string of pearls-
   an added touch of white allure.

Her porcelain white skin still glowed
   although, her journey had been hard. 
Inside, all white to black erode
   with cancer's spread and disregard.

And there she lay within a white
   cocoon of tufted satin weave,
inside her coffin, hands hold tight
   white rosary beneath her sleeve.

Our broken hearts and tear-filled eyes,
   in death beheld her loveliness;
white angels with her soul would rise
   to Heaven's lasting happiness.

And no one saw our beauty queen,
   besides close family that night;
our mother dear- at peace, serene,
   unbearable- beauty in white.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Peck Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 8:40 AM
So sad, Sandra~and beautiful. A wonderful memorial to your mother.
La France Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 3:40 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your great win in the contest with this wonderful write _Constance
Dutta Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 9:43 PM
Wonderful Tribute. Big Congrats to win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 3:39 PM
Well done...so sad. A final goodbye in beauty white. (My mom has cancer...hoping she fares well!) congratulations on your win!
Chamberlain Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 2:17 PM
Such a beautiful poem and tribute to your mother. Congratulations on your winning placement.
Canerdy Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 12:16 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Sandra. SUPERB! Janice
Fowler Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 8:12 AM
Moving write Sandra. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Gauthier Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 8:34 PM
Thank you for sharing your lovely vulnerability and depths of your sorrow. So touching, Sandra. You sum it up perfectly in your last line.
Barden Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 12:38 AM
Congratulations on your wonderfully dark win, Sandra - blessings, and keep up the great work! :-)
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 3:36 PM
Thank you very much, Gregory, for reading my poem and for your very supportive comments. Sandra
Roper Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 10:32 PM
Sandra, congratulation on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
Haight Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 9:57 AM
Thank you very much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 5:53 PM
So beautiful Sandra!<3 Kim
Haight Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 9:56 AM
Thank you, Kim! Hugs, Sandra
Davey Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 1:08 PM
You always invoke so much emotion in your poetry, another great white Sandra, congrats
Haight Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 9:56 AM
Thank you so much, Brian, for your uplifting comments and congrats. Sandra
Roberts Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 9:43 PM
what a touching , beautiful poem you've written, many congrats on your win
George   Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 1:25 PM
This brought tears to my eyes!!! heart-breakingly beautiful, Sandra. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Rycroft Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 10:54 AM
Congrats well-done Loved your poem x
Haight Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 6:34 PM
Thank you so much, Wendy. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Sandra congratulations on your win in the contest with this emotional and beautiful write~
Haight Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 6:33 PM
Thank you very much, Constance. Hugs, Sandra
Daniel Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 9:55 AM
This is a touching write about your mother, Sandra:) I'm sure she was a beauty like you:) congratulations:)
Haight Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 6:32 PM
Thank you so very much, Jo, for your wonderful comment and congratulations. She is dearly missed. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Turner Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 1:08 PM
Beautiful and tastefully written, Mrs Sandra. If she was anything like you, I'm sure she was most beautiful inside and out:)
Haight Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Thank you again, Daniel, for your kind words. She was amazing. Sandra
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