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For Constance La France, Unadorned, Utopia, Utterly, Uplifiting poetry contest

 

Without you my words are an unadorned poem. By poet.
At the edge of silence this soul screams, unable to save the decaying flowers in her garden of deceit. When her sadness is in love with me, anchoring emotions weigh me down, as cathartic metaphors reveal a labyrinth of tears. In an unadorned monochrome world hope floats from purple petals to ebony buds, where a jaded heart is breathing to exist. But If black wasn't a colour how would stars glow? Would the marigold moon be forever invisible? When grief is a guest how would we portray darkness? Satan will always seduce scarlet poetry inducing Lilith to dance in the ballroom of temptation, where demons meet me in the wasteland of wicked souls, but I've already drank from the fires of hell. It's been a while since your rose darkened my garden, so I search for pastures of poetic peace, where idyllic dreams compose an effervescent melody. Life is an endless journey of adversity, I've become a king of trials, engraving my seeds onto a tapestry of tulips. I am my own warrior polishing a maroon mirror, so I can sing with an orchestra of angels. Those who judge my words, say a rainbow will overflow into the shadows. We are all petals of imperfection sharing the same sun, envisioning vivid visions of verdant valleys. My palette of poetic musings manifest verses in revolving echoes of kaleidoscopic tones. My blood flows through emerald ink veins, in hues of burgundy bliss like blushed blue butterflies, tangled in turquoise tranquillity, yearning for serenity from a peach and rose sunset. Destiny cries to the empress of the waves, to adorn me in her effervescent treasure. To kiss me in the cerulean bay of harmony, under the shimmering of azure moonlight - as miserable colours can only heal from her touch.

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Date: 4/7/2024 3:16:00 PM
Silent, congratulations on your win in my contest with this outstanding poem, I like the quote too, hugs
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Date: 3/28/2024 2:15:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, S.O. :) - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs
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Date: 3/26/2024 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Unadorned" is a beautiful write/great quote. God made all the colors even black. We need to keep Satan out of our journey in life. Love your ending... Enjoy your day/win..............
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Date: 3/26/2024 8:26:00 AM
Metaphors, alliteration, imagery, this has it all, and to perfection. It's difficult to pick just one or two favorite lines as they all blend together to create the whole. ;) Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/24/2024 8:16:00 AM
That's it. I'm most existed with the play of words and metaphors like this. Could imagine how in love her soul is with you. "But If black wasn't a colour how would stars glow?" I loved all the lines on this wonderful piece. And yeah! Black is my favourite colour. Always a pleasure reading your craft, so indulging.
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Date: 3/23/2024 8:20:00 AM
SO, this creates a feeling of something wishing you down that would be great to escape from. You do so with poise, longing, and marvelous descriptions of things in thoughts and mind as you go about your existence.
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Date: 3/23/2024 8:13:00 AM
You have a great way with words, Silent one. The last line is memorable. Can see me borrowing it.
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Date: 3/23/2024 6:48:00 AM
A wonderful blend of nature and emotions woven in metaphors, SO. --It's been a while since your rose darkened my garden, so I search for pastures of poetic peace, where idyllic dreams compose an effervescent melody--splendidly poetic, my friend. You never need luck to win.
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Date: 3/22/2024 10:24:00 PM
"But If black wasn't a colour how would stars glow? Would the marigold moon be forever invisible? When grief is a guest how would we portray darkness?"..... To enjoy brightness, black is necessary. So occasional turmoil and adversity will make us mature and stronger. Your raw feelings of pain are so penetrating and you pile images on images.... that are haunting and soul stirring. "My blood flows through emerald ink veins, in hues of burgundy bliss like blushed blue butterflies, tangled in turquoise tranquillity,".... Wow... what beautiful alliteration and what flow of emotions. Excellent dear friend.
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Date: 3/22/2024 5:47:00 PM
Excellent entry for the contest, Silent One. Your imagery is exquisite as usual, and you share life's story through your engaging verses. A favorite line or phase of mine ... "like blushed blue butterflies, tangled in turquoise tranquility, yearning for serenity from a peach and rose sunset". Good luck in the contest, my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 3/22/2024 4:58:00 PM
You 'adorned' your poem with wonderous metaphors, alliteration, and images--all of which made for a meaningful read for me. I especially liked these lines: "We are all petals of imperfection sharing the same sun, envisioning vivid visions of verdant valleys." Your poem was soulful and true winner for the contest. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 3/22/2024 4:39:00 PM
thanks poet, while reading this marvellous poem, i asked myself what will be the future of mankind, there is sadness but hope in your verses, how deep and generous poetry is have a nice week end
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Date: 3/22/2024 3:19:00 PM
Keep singing with that orchestra of Angels dear friend, you all sound heavenly from here. :)
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Date: 3/22/2024 2:49:00 PM
Descriptive and expressive language used in this one. Left me wondering. Thanks for sharing your work with us and for dropping by. Sara K
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Date: 3/22/2024 12:43:00 PM
Dear silent one, i love your quote and also i love how your poem flows with metaphors and brilliant alliterations too, so creatively, in such a heartfelt and soulful manner. So many lines stood out for me but i especially love the lines “ pastures of poetic peace,“ and “ your rose darkened my garden,“ ah how beautiful! I love that! Wish iv used that line too. So good! There is so much expressed here in such unique ways, and i agree life.. is an endless journey of adversity and also we are all petals of imperfection… sharing the same sun. True. Couldn’t have said it any better, that last stanza i really do love that! Empress of waves! So inviting! And expresses longin in such an impeccable manner. “ miserable colors can only heal from her touch” thats so deep and soul touching really! I loved that! A fav definitely!
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