True Love Waits

He stared out into space with disbelief
Her tear stained note lay crumpled on the floor
She said she never meant to cause him grief
Ten years had packed and walked right out the door

Between his fingers, burned the cigarette
While down his cheeks flowed streams of yesterdays
His hurt and anger swirled in pirouettes
Like lovers in a mindless  sad ballet

Yet through the smoke he saw her in his arms
He heard her say, "I'll love you 'til I die".
His cigarette rang rationale's alarm
He dried his yesterdays, vowed to survive

Though cheaters never win the games they play
There are no winners when love is betrayed


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In loneliness he pined for "used to be"
That bitter taste had sweetened over time
Recalling only happy memories
He heard faint echoes of old wedding chimes

Forgiveness somehow soothed his aching heart
He realized that he was part to blame
Old arguments that tore their love apart
Unwillingness to compromise, his shame

And if fate should allow another chance
Together they could mend a broken trust
Then sparks may once again ignite romance
The bond of love be polished of it's rust

A rose of love will grow in shifting sand
When Father Time lays on his healing hands


   October 16 2016
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Duet Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 7:08 PM
Lovely write, Daniel. And, congrats on placing in the contest. Carole
White Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 11:58 PM
I love your final two lines, how hard is it wot work towards forgiveness in only 28 lines.... Congratulations.
Garcia Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 8:30 PM
Father Time always takes forever, doesn't he? Great poem, my friend. You know how much I admire your abilities in this form - I wasn't surprised to see your name as a winner. Thanks for submitting and congratulations on placing.
Gulley Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 9:24 AM
Two very lovely Sonnet writes, Daniel. I love them both. Sharon : )
Sands Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 5:48 PM
I love this one Daniel. Very well written. A 7!
Turner Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Thank you, Heidi. It was quite a project for me. I normally don't have that much to say. i appreciate your kindness and your support:)
Onclaud Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 11:51 AM
hello daniel, looking forward to your next masterpiece!..huggs
Turner Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 8:27 AM
You may be waiting a while. Lol Thank you nette for friendly visits.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 6:19 PM
Daniel this is a bgreat write I enjoyed your poem.
Turner Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 1:09 PM
Thank you, Darlene. I appreciate your kind comments and support.
Raven Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 5:08 PM
Hi Daniel, another excellent sonnet from your pen my friend. This one touches the heart so easily Daniel. You bring out the emotions of this reader so easily. It has my vote for sure. This is a fav and a seven Daniel....Mike.
Turner Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 1:08 PM
Thank you Mike. So glad to see you today. You been doing OK? I appreciate your time and support my friend.
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October 18, 2016 at 8:57 PM
Another wonderful piece!
Turner Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 8:19 AM
Thanks Mike:)
Daniel Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Excellent, Daniel:) you write sonnets so well and with such deep layers of meanings:) a winner in my eyes:) a 10:)
Turner Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 8:19 AM
Thank you, Jo. I appreciate your kind comments and support. I also appreciate the high marks:)
Canerdy Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 10:08 AM
Wow! What can I say? Beautiful, moving, skillfully-written, SUPERB, Daniel! Janice
Turner Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 8:17 AM
Thank you, Janice. I appreciate your kind comments and support.
Kannan Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 12:19 AM
Beautiful sonnets... You did a great job ...A7... Good luck with the contest....
Turner Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Thank you, Supraja. You're so sweet! I appreciate all of your kindness:)
Wigley Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 11:21 PM
Brilliantly thought through and elegantly expressed, Daniel. You will do well, methinks. regards, Viv
Turner Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Thank you, Mr Viv. That's very kind. I hope you are feeling better. I appreciate your time, kind comments and support.
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 8:43 PM
Wow, you did REALLY well with YOUR project, Daniel. I did not follow the instructions to the letter regarding the way I did my second sonnet, so maybe I will be punished for that. I think THIS duo is gonna score for sure.
Turner Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 9:22 PM
To be honest with you, Andrea. I wasn't even going to try this until I read yours. It gave me the confidence to give it a shot. Thanks for the inspiration and for being such a sweet lady friend:) I really appreciate your support.
Smith Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Wonderful work Daniel, a lot of emotion. Congratulations on one of your best...
Turner Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 9:22 PM
How 'bout them Cowboys!!!
Turner Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 9:20 PM
Thanks Charlie:) It was a lot tougher than I thought. I appreciate your kind comments and support. For a Texan, you're OK. Lol
Hamilton Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 7:42 PM
This is a classic all time write you should be proud of! I know it is a stretch for you, but you portrayed the difficulty of reconciliation very well with the rose in shifting sands. A7 Phillip will love this one for sure!
Turner Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 9:15 PM
Thank you, John. It was most definitely a project! I do appreciate your kind comments and your confidence in me. I hope you are right:)
Onclaud Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 6:48 PM
love conquers all.. love happy endings and wonderful sonnets, daniel..huggs
Turner Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 9:14 PM
Thank you,nette. I love kind visits and sweet comments. I appreciate both:)
Bauer Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 5:35 PM
wonderful rhyme, daniel! the whole poem is excellent but, as a rhymer, i'm impressed with some of the choices you've made here...
Turner Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 6:24 PM
Mrs Ilene, I take that as an exceptional comment as I think you are a wonderful rhymer. I do so appreciate your kind comments and support:)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 4:34 PM
I njoyed both but the second is my favorite.
Turner Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 6:23 PM
Thank you, Richard. They come as a pair as they are for a contest. I appreciate your kind comments and am thrilled to see you visiting. Have a wonderful evening.
Manassian Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 3:29 PM
There is so much depth of emotions here, Daniel. It's hard to know what to write in response to such a sad poem. The "what ifs" can drive someone to madness. I felt that in this write. Good one.
Turner Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 3:34 PM
Thank you Eileen. I found this topic very challenging. So few couples split and then get back together to stay. I gave it a shot. i appreciate your support. Really nice to see your beautiful smile:)
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:49 PM
- Give love another chance ... if there is a spark there a hope for everlasting love - Beautifully written, Daniel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 3:23 PM
Hello sweetie! Yes, I am a romantic. I'd like to believe that if there is a little hope, love can survive. Unfortunately that is not always the case, So glad to see you today. So sad about your puppy:(
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:29 PM
Hello Daniel,You are right there are no winners when love is betrayed,Yes we do pine for tha loss love, In time you will heal,then in time find a true lasting love. This poem is well done.
Turner Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 3:20 PM
Thank you, Darlene. It is a contest write, not personal. I do however appreciate your concern and thoughtfulness. You are very sweet:)
B. Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:28 PM
I feel the pain in this write. It's a tough situation to find yourself in. Once trust has be broken it can be very tough to regain. Great piece)
Turner Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 3:19 PM
Thank you, Carol. Your kind comments are truly appreciated. it's a contest write. Trust is one on those things that takes years to build and only seconds to tear down but this is what the contest asks for.
P  Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Trust is never easy to mend, there'll always be some amount of doubt. Love the imagery of pirouettes and cigarette smoke. 'A rose of love will grow in shifting sand'...charmed line.
Turner Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:34 PM
My trust was broken.
P  Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:14 PM
You tried what? Cheating or mending fences?! It's always my pleasure to read you. :)
Turner Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 1:56 PM
You're telling me, I tried it once! Thank you so much for taking the time to read this epic, Paloma. I really appreciate your support. This is a lot of information in one write, for me.
Smith Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Such sadness DT. Excellent job, that final couplet is amazing...go hogs!!
Turner Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 1:51 PM
HOW "BOUT THEM HOGS!!!! Thanks Tim. I appreciate your support and treasure your friendship:):)
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