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Though Gone

On strong wings, I soar Far away from home Out of human reach Free from nagging pain Beyond the oceans Am now with stars Floating in air Like an angel Watch over you Here I dwell So unseen Amid clouds Though gone One in Love June.12. 2022 ~ Placed Second~ Diminished Hexaverse Poetry Contest Sponsor- Caren Krutsinger

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/22/2022 7:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Valsa! Linda

Eve Roper

Date: 7/13/2022 2:11:00 PM

A big congratulations, Valsa , to a beautiful well deserved win. Blessings my friend

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/12/2022 5:26:00 PM

Wow Valsa, this premise is so beautiful! I can see why it got a high rating. Congratulations on your wonderful second place win. Blessings xxoo

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/11/2022 6:37:00 PM

Back again to congratulate you on your win, Valsa. Beautifully penned indeed

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/11/2022 5:33:00 PM

Congratulations for your high placement Valsa! I was starting to think that Caren forgot about her sponsoring responsibilities!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/11/2022 1:22:00 PM

Valsa, your verse is so filled with compassion and tenderness and the sense that love never leaves us but watches over us from a starry perch. Congratulations on your win. This is special my friend! :D