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There Is a Moon, I Have Seen It

Alone, the television muted Thoughts float about on shadowed wings Faces with moving mouths appear, nothing is heard My mind collects itself, slanted views Trading happiness for solitude, beneath spinning blades Not sharp, but constant like minutes Time teaches unwanted lessons erasing chalkboards and creating dust There is a moon, I have seen it, felt it, reached out to touch it It lit your face and I knew from that moment... why Who cares what color they say is in, black is here in the silence It flows effortlessly like satin, stitched in memories and dreams It tints the windows reflecting truth Showing what has become, glassed over situations Blocking the moonlght, shuttering desires Burlap trajectories crashing beyond the horizon Fabricated realities for those awake or those alone There is a moon, I have seen it Then it was gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/27/2018 3:08:00 PM
Excellent free verse. I like the title and it makes me think of all phases of the moon :)
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Date: 5/8/2018 2:47:00 PM
Not accustomed to your free verse, but after 3 reads...wow...you know to get a wow these days it must be special!!
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Date: 3/23/2018 12:16:00 PM
I've seen that moon, too, Chris. "Trading happiness for solitude, beneath spinning blades." Such lovely image writing.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/23/2018 7:56:00 PM
Thank you, thank you, thank you my friend. You have no idea how your comment has made me smile tonight
Date: 3/23/2018 12:08:00 PM
DAMN can you write! You capture the intangible feel so well, you deliver to me my own uncomprehendable (spell check doesn't like 'uncomprehendable') feelings - those I can't pinpoint and articulate - and you do it excellently; time after time you and your pen are excellent. This is another WOW for your 'jar' - it is so good I'd even give you one out of my jar. DAMN. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 3/23/2018 7:57:00 PM
You are great for my ego. Seriously, your words are the breath to my lungs. Thank you so much.
Date: 3/23/2018 9:26:00 AM
Amazing poem Chris I really liked it. Especially the last two lines. You always know how to end a poem and leave the reader thinking.
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Date: 3/23/2018 3:59:00 AM
Good Morning Chris I very much agree with Robertina. However because you have seen it felt it and reached out to it it is there remaining within the mind and soul to vision when needed. This entry is more than lovely and in my estimation excellent free verse.
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Date: 3/22/2018 11:00:00 PM
Happiness can sometimes be so fleeting. Emotional thoughts seeping through your mind, Chris. Sometimes the moon is dark, though it may be full.
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Date: 3/22/2018 10:20:00 PM
Awesome creativity Chris!! I enjoyed reading.. Very unique..
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Date: 3/22/2018 9:55:00 PM
The last two lines linger ... a nice poem ...
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