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The Language of Creation

When I think of poetry I think of a child manipulating his first steps, the wobbly nature of his strides~that confused, meandering toddle, and then trip and fall – the dear first efforts of us all. When I think of poetry, I think of my introductory cords attempting articulation: the naive study of lips, the spitting aspirations, how the throat struggles, and then the mouth opens to the notion of sound. When I think of poetry, I think of the squinting and the rounding of the eyes first awakening to light – how the heart adjusts to thought...and how, somehow, it is all related to love, the cooing, caressing of a mother, before weaning. Then when I think of poetry, I finally think of nothing... empty myself, letting poetry think for me – become my sight and voice, my very direct line to God~knowing best the language of creation.

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Date: 9/28/2022 9:19:00 PM
I missed this earlier on but I can't pass up on your "letting poetry think for me." That's a real classy line! Elizabeth
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/29/2022 10:18:00 AM
Hi Elizabeth; perhaps overly romantic for some, but not for us true believers. Blessings my friend!
Date: 9/20/2022 11:26:00 PM
This was a wonderful read. Your words have incredible power.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/21/2022 7:09:00 AM
Thank you so much...you made my day! Blessings!
Date: 2/25/2022 3:30:00 PM
This is so lovely! I so appreciate this beautiful poem, as I held my newborn grandson, and looked into his innocent eyes. There is so much mystery in this world for him, all brand new. I love your comparison. I love it when the words just flow, it is an amazing and wonderful gift! Congratulations on this being honored with POTD!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/25/2022 4:09:00 PM
You could not have paid me a nicer compliment. Thank you. Looking at a newborn, one cannot help by feel the wonderment. Blessings to you and yours. Joe.
Date: 2/24/2022 1:34:00 AM
Congratulations on having this divine poem honored with POTD Joe. You already know I loved it and faved it. I am so happy to see this poem in the spotlight! Sorry this comment is belated. Blessings xxoo
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/24/2022 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, Connie; no problem, there is only so much time and energy in a day. I like to comment back to everyone who leaves a comment for me -- and like to put some caring, appreciative thought into what I am saying; frankly, halfway through the day my mind is aching, having to rest with a cold beer and "Star Gazing"~even in the after noon:)
Date: 2/22/2022 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations Joe on POTD! Blessings ~ Debra
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/23/2022 7:10:00 AM
Thank you so much, Debra; have a beautiful Day!!
Date: 2/21/2022 1:05:00 AM
Hi Joe....Back to your beautiful poem with congratulations on it being honored as POTD
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/21/2022 6:56:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa; this is all very exciting. Have a great day my friend!
Date: 2/20/2022 11:52:00 PM
Beautiful read
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/21/2022 6:57:00 AM
Thank you, Zoleka; have a wonderful day!
Date: 2/20/2022 11:45:00 PM
Joe, I enjoyed your musings on poetry, especially "letting poetry think for me". It is a beautiful mystery. Congratulations for POTD honor today ~ John
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/21/2022 6:59:00 AM
Thank you, John; I often feel need to trust something greater than myself. It seems to have worked, at least, for this write. Blessings my friend!
Date: 2/20/2022 11:16:00 PM
The last few lines sum it all up so well, Joe, congrats on POTD!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/21/2022 7:02:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Life is a mystery, trying myself always somehow to feel connected with Source. Blessings!
Date: 2/20/2022 6:57:00 PM
Dear Joe, Congratulations on your POTD! A stunning creative piece~relating poetry to all the 'firsts'....and to the Holy Spirit that works within you. Very lovely! Blessings,Paulette
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/21/2022 7:08:00 AM
Thank you, Paulette; I read somewhere: "Permit the children to come to Me; do not hinder them; for the kingdom of God belongs to such as these." I know nothing outside of faith. Blessings my friend!
Date: 2/20/2022 6:42:00 PM
A very interesting way to view poetry. When words, moments and emotions collide- a poem is born. Congratulations Joe, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/21/2022 7:12:00 AM
Thank you, Brandy -- I think you are right, there must be a loving collision in the mystery of time and space. Thank you my friend!
Date: 2/20/2022 6:22:00 PM
This is a great piece Joe. The metaphor you used ofspeech recognition is brilliant. I really look forward to these new ideas coming from you. Thanks again - Ken
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/21/2022 7:15:00 AM
Thank you, Ken; you made my day. Blessings my friend!
Date: 2/20/2022 5:01:00 PM
Way to explain the feelings of writing poetry, "child's first steps." Joe, congratulations on your POTD, my friend.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/21/2022 7:18:00 AM
Always feeling near the edge...and where to set my next precarious landing. Love it! Thank you, Eve.
Date: 2/20/2022 4:27:00 PM
Wonderful write. Congrats on POTD. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/21/2022 7:19:00 AM
Thank you, Regina; have a beautiful day!
Date: 2/20/2022 3:00:00 PM
Nice to see the 'first steps of the child' and the 'cooing of the mother' rewarded with POTD. Congrats, Joe! :) Gershon
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/21/2022 7:29:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon my friend; I still feel like a child, just a bit more unsteady on my feet, and my contrary belly won't let me eat and drink to my hearts content anymore -- oh well!~was a good run while it lasted:)
Date: 2/20/2022 11:28:00 AM
Joe, wonderful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~Constance
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/20/2022 11:37:00 AM
Hi Constance; thank you so much. Have a great day! Joe.
Date: 2/20/2022 10:44:00 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD !! Wonderful Hugs, Susan ;)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/20/2022 11:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan. Have a beautiful day! Your support is appreciated. Blessings!
Date: 2/20/2022 9:33:00 AM
WoW! Joe, This is such a well-written write on poetry. I enjoyed it in its entirety, especially the latter portion. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Enjoy the honor. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/20/2022 11:24:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis; this was all such a pleasant surprise to wake up to this morning. So pleased you like this one. Have a beautiful day!!
Date: 2/20/2022 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A "Beautiful" write. Love your great ending. Have a great/blessed day writing away............
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/20/2022 11:26:00 AM
Thank you, Paula; writing is so much fun -- and on these special, honored occasions, it makes every creative word a bit more special. Thank you. Have a beautiful day!
Date: 2/20/2022 9:26:00 AM
A lovely way to experience the art of poetry. Your analogies were excellent, Joe. Congratulations on POTD. Write On! my friend, Bill
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/20/2022 11:27:00 AM
Thank you, Bill; all from the heart. Blessings my friend!!
Date: 2/20/2022 8:58:00 AM
We are one in the greater body of creation~ the body of God to be precise~ your words inspire me. Congrats on POTD! Anaya
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/20/2022 11:31:00 AM
Thank you, Anaya; as you well know, we can ignore God (Freewill)...but not separate ourselves. The universe made of His Spirited Body. Blessings!
Date: 2/20/2022 5:50:00 AM
Wonderful, congratulations Joe on POTD!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/20/2022 8:08:00 AM
Thank you, Tania; I am very thrilled by the honor. Makes writing seem all the more important. Sharing with one another our deeper nature, which is good at its source. All poetry transcends words I believe~hope I am correct. Have a beautiful day my friend!
Date: 2/20/2022 5:19:00 AM
Joe, congratulations on your POTD honors! I thought your poem to be so beautifully crafted with a lovely message!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/20/2022 8:09:00 AM
Thank you, Mike; next to St. Michael saying, "Coming on in!" this is high on my list of joys. Have a great day my friend!
Date: 2/20/2022 5:04:00 AM
Beautiful write Joe, Congrats on POTD
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/20/2022 8:10:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph; have a beautiful day. Blessings!
Date: 2/20/2022 3:35:00 AM
"letting poetry think for me" - Beautiful final thought about poetry. It could mean still more too. Great work. Congratulations!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/20/2022 8:12:00 AM
I am certain that it is...explore and reveal, that is more of what this poem is about. It is my humble attempt at door-opening. Blessings my friend!
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