The Essence of Yom Kippur, Outside of Synagogue

I’m sorry, honey.
  O.K. I accept your apology.
No, wait. Hold on.
  What is it? 
I mean it. I'm really sorry.
  Are you?
Yes, I am.
  How would I know?
I’ve thought about what I’ve done.
  That’s it?
And I’m never going to do it again
  Even if you find yourself in the same situation?
Yes, even then. … I'm determined to overcome my baser instincts!
  Even if there's no one there to catch you transgressing?
Yes. Even if I'm by myself.
  Then you really are sorry.
And ashamed of myself, before God, for letting you down, honey. 
  Thank you. I accept your apology now whole-heartedly.
Let's go to synagogue now. Let us praise God and ask for His forgiveness, that we may atone for all of our sins...

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Date: 11/1/2022 11:10:00 PM
Belated congratulations for POTD with this splendid poetry. Harry
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Date: 10/12/2022 2:27:00 PM
Yes, in unity you go! Congratulations on POTD! Praise the Lord!
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Date: 10/9/2022 11:47:00 PM
Wonderful insight into humility, forgiveness, and atonement. Congrats for your POTD acknowledgement Gershon ~ jw
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Date: 10/7/2022 6:40:00 PM
We should say sorry when we’ve said something we shouldn’t have said so that it doesn’t fester in one’s head. Congratulations on poem of the day Gershon. All the best, Belle
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Date: 10/7/2022 5:03:00 AM
A heartfelt apology will wipe away all ill feeling and earn greater blessings from God ! A poem with a sweet message. Congratulations Gershon on your POTD
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/7/2022 2:48:00 PM
Thank you for your insightful comments, Valsa, and for noticing this POTD. Blessings, Gershon
Date: 10/7/2022 3:43:00 AM
Great take on Yom Kippur, Gershon. Mazel Tov...on POTD. ~CM
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/7/2022 2:56:00 PM
Thank you for noticing this one, CM. Happy weekend! :) gw
Date: 10/7/2022 2:25:00 AM
Belated congratulations Gershon, greetings from Italy. Tom
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Date: 10/7/2022 2:54:00 PM
Hey, Tom! Aloha from Itala... Oops, wrong country... or just the wrong greeting? lol. ~ Dazed and Confused
Date: 10/6/2022 8:29:00 PM
Gershon my friend. I am late to realize your Wonderful Poetry has received the Highest Award for a Poem Exceptionally written. Congratulations my Dear Friend for this Great Achievement. Your Poem Of The Day, was a great one to choose. It reflects your dedication to your faith and Honor to God. May he richly bless you for bringing attention to The Essence of Yom Kippur. Again BIG CONGRATULATIONS..Enjoy...
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Date: 10/6/2022 5:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD GW! Sweet as you, enjoy your day!
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Date: 10/6/2022 5:06:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Gershon! Excellent take on this day of atonement. G'mar chatima tova! Robert
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Date: 10/6/2022 4:46:00 PM
Congratulations, Gershon, on your well-deserved POTD. Brilliant and poignant! Blessings ~ Mala
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Date: 10/6/2022 4:00:00 PM
Such a sweet poem, Gershon, and lovely explanation of Yom Kippur. Congratulations on POTD! Now, go kiss your wife. :)
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Date: 10/6/2022 3:07:00 PM
Congratulations for this great POTD Gershon! Enjoy :)
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Date: 10/6/2022 12:23:00 PM
Wow...So poignant and real Gershon! A beautiful moment in time revealed. Congratulations on POTD ! Blessings, Susan :)
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Date: 10/6/2022 11:34:00 AM
Oh, this makes my day, Gershon to see you get the POTD..Tov! One of the best writers here! Not only that, but you are humble! AND…you are not a sometimes friend!! You are a steady one, to walk the road of like with! Your honesty is like a beacon in a murky world full of Lashon Hora! Love and High Respect, Pangie
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Date: 10/6/2022 11:48:00 AM
You are so nice to me, P... and what have I done to deserve it?! ... I say it's just your sunny personality shining through. Thank you, thank you, thank you. ~ Sunshine and Radiance, Gershon
Date: 10/6/2022 10:05:00 AM
This Day of Atonement seems to be ready-made for married couples. A very good choice for POTD, G...and I do not apologize for that.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2022 11:49:00 AM
You know, I never thought of it that way until recently, Jim. But True Repentance can establish and save or enhance marriages in so many ways. Where the rubber meets the road, as they say...
Date: 10/6/2022 9:13:00 AM
Aesop Wolf...sound instruction in a story. Well done indeed. POTD congrats!! :o)
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Date: 10/6/2022 11:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Arlo! ~ A. E. Sop
Date: 10/6/2022 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations, my friend, on your P.O.T.D. Enjoy it!
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Date: 10/6/2022 8:50:00 AM
Thank you, Milt. Much appreciated. Blessings and Bounty, Gershon
Date: 10/6/2022 8:07:00 AM
Back to say CONGRATULATIONS! on your POTD, Gershon. Well deserved my friend. Enjoy your special day! Bill
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Date: 10/6/2022 8:50:00 AM
Thanks for coming back to this one, Bill. You get 'Comeback of the Day' award! Huzzah! :) gw
Date: 10/6/2022 7:22:00 AM
Gershon, congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2022 7:33:00 AM
Appreciate YOUR recognition, Constance. Light and Joy, Gershon
Date: 10/6/2022 7:17:00 AM
WootWoot!! Congrats!!!
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Date: 10/6/2022 7:33:00 AM
OK, Becky. Hoot-hoot, I guess... Many thanks, my friend in fun. Laughter and Levity, Gershon
Date: 10/6/2022 5:57:00 AM
Open communication and true conviction with forgiveness. Awesome. Congratulations on your honor of POTD gw. laf
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Date: 10/6/2022 7:31:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words, Linda. Forgiveness and Equilibrium, Gershon
Date: 10/6/2022 5:56:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD, Gershon! Have a blessed day
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Date: 10/6/2022 7:31:00 AM
Jeff, thank you so much. Here's to you, my friend.
Date: 10/6/2022 4:24:00 AM
Gershon, congratulaitons on your POTD. Accepting our transgressions and asking God for his forgiveness sets us free. G'mar chatima tova! ("May you be inscribed in the Book of Life for good") :)Paulette
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2022 7:30:00 AM
Wow! First G'mar chatima tova I've ever gotten on the Soup. Thank you so much. May you and yours be granted the full bounty of the Season! Mo'dim L'Simcha! ~ Gershon
Date: 10/6/2022 4:16:00 AM
GW, a big congratulations on your POTD honors for this powerful message!! Forgiveness is key! Happy Thursday!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2022 7:29:00 AM
Thank you for YOUR recognition, Mike! Wishing you Sunshine and Lollipops (as Leslie Gore might have put it). ~ Gershon
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