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SONG sweet lay lovely strain took me to calm bliss and eased my taut frayed nerves when drowned in agitation “music is a flight without wings” -------------------- April. 20.2023 Pyramids. 3. 7 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsor- Joseph May Syllables- 1,2,3, 5,6,7, 8

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Date: 4/30/2023 3:56:00 PM
I am seeing some really good ones and I especially enjoyed yours. Congrats
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Date: 4/30/2023 5:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and your brilliant and creative poem my dear friend Valsa! I love music and I extremely love your pyramid poem about it. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs...
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Date: 4/29/2023 4:38:00 PM
Truly music is a flight without wings! Congratulations!
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Date: 4/29/2023 11:51:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Valsa :) - hugs
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Date: 4/29/2023 10:04:00 AM
A soothing write Valsa. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/29/2023 9:07:00 AM
Calmed by a blissful song, Very nicely penned Valsa, Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/29/2023 10:21:00 PM
Thanks a lot Joseph for picking up my poem for a win.
Date: 4/20/2023 11:23:00 AM
- Beautiful song, Valsa ... excellent quote :) - All the best :) - hugs
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Date: 4/20/2023 9:57:00 AM
This is beautiful, Valsa! I love your quote about music. Best of luck!
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Date: 4/20/2023 9:51:00 AM
Lovely poem!
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Date: 4/20/2023 8:20:00 AM
How lovely Valsa! Debx
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Date: 4/20/2023 7:11:00 AM
Valsa, a lovely poem, I could hear the soothing rain, best of luck in the contest !
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Date: 4/20/2023 6:08:00 AM
A beautiful song, Valsa. Well done!
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Date: 4/20/2023 5:20:00 AM
Had to read several times. So very interesting, Valsa!
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Date: 4/20/2023 2:46:00 AM
Such a gentle poem, then downed in agitation... hmm Couldn't be nicer, Good luck Valsa
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Date: 4/19/2023 11:44:00 PM
Power of music - and words, pictures you paint. Shalom shalom Dear
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Date: 4/19/2023 11:41:00 PM
I love your quote, so true, Valsa, nice:)
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