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Singing Wood

He watched her beating out the clothes upon the river rock. He wanted to approach her but was unskilled in small talk. Laughing Waters was the prettiest maiden any young brave could know. His heart was so filled with her but he could not tell her so. He dreamed of bringing to her the most glorious of hides that she might make into a dress to become his promised bride. He wasn’t the most skilled hunter, nor the bravest of the brave, but his great love was the purest that a little maid could crave. He had the fine hands of an artist and the spirit of a poet. Unless he found his tongue to speak, there was no way she could know it. What was it he could offer that no other man could give? If she yielded to another’s guile he would not want to live. He looked at his long fingers and knew then what he must do to impress his fair young lady love and prove his love so true. He found a limb and hollowed it ‘til it was smooth as glass. He lifted it to his moist lips just as she chanced to pass. A note so pure came from his flute, the maiden stopped to hear. The loveliest sound she’d ever heard fell on her listening ear. She knew the flute was telling her the words he could not say. Singing Wood had found his voice at last. She is his bride today. Buy Joyce Johnson Constance's contest (Tell His Story) won no. 4 place

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Date: 3/22/2011 1:04:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Constance, Joyce
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Date: 3/22/2011 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving win in the contest, Joyce! Hope you're having lots of fun! Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:26:00 AM
Always a pleasure to see you at the top,Joyce. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored fourth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win Joyce in Constance's contest " Tell His Story". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2011 8:55:00 AM
So happy to see your poem ranking high, Joyce. Congratulations! Hope your brother is doing better. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/22/2011 8:29:00 AM
Wonderful story, Joyce. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 3/22/2011 8:09:00 AM
Many congrats - great poem : ) Jack
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Date: 3/22/2011 7:59:00 AM
What a beautiful story this is, Joyce. Just lovely imagination at work here! Congratulations,! love, Carrie
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Date: 3/22/2011 7:48:00 AM
Such a sweet romantic love story Joyce!! Thoroughly enjoyed reading this:) Congrats on your win, well deserved:) Thanks for your lovely comments and congrats for my 6th place finish ...very appreciated:) Carol
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Date: 3/22/2011 6:30:00 AM
What a sweet story..I didnt want it to end. congrats. BG
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Date: 3/21/2011 11:57:00 PM
A very worthy placement-win here Joyce, good to read this piece.
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Date: 3/21/2011 11:39:00 PM
my happy cheers to you for the special win :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:58:00 PM
Wow Joyce what a lovely love story. Heartiest congratulations for this win.
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:15:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your wonderful win for this magnificent story in Tell His Story my friend.. awesome words.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 3/13/2011 10:41:00 PM
OH, I do love an artistic man. But also the other type too. It would be nice to know a man the perfect blend of the two!! Anyway, this is a WONDERFUL story. Of all i've read, it's the most "story like" to me so far. And dang, what a great title name!
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Date: 3/12/2011 6:31:00 PM
Very good story to go with the picture, Joyce. Indians held music in reverance, almost like a poem of the shaman. I think the one in the picture would enjoy your interpretation. Charles
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Date: 3/12/2011 2:29:00 PM
Thank you so much for supporting my contest, Joyce, I like the your take on the inspiration image~~
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Date: 3/12/2011 11:50:00 AM
I was fully engrossed in the story behind this poem, Joyce. What a creative interpretation of the photo! Romantic and beautifully written entry. I'm so glad Singing Wood found a way to win his bride. Best wishes in Constance's contest. You really have an awesome writing style! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/12/2011 7:45:00 AM
Joyce, good luck in the contest..This reads like a winner to me..Very creative work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 3/12/2011 7:07:00 AM
Great poem. Well done on your wins : ) Jack
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