Self Examination

If I knew I’d have but one last day upon this Earth
I’d look to the heavens and examine my life’s worth
Self examination would raise questions aplenty
And poor decisions I'd made, surely there would be many

In 24 hours, would there be time to set things right?
Could I ease my conscience and prepare to reach God’s light?
I’d start by recollecting each wrong that I had done
Each word I’d spoken in anger, every love I’d shunned

Apologies would come, letters from a dying heart
And tender calls to loved ones before I could depart
I’d visit my parents’ graves, lay wreaths at their headstones
Shed a few tears, recalling my happy childhood home

Then I’d visit my church, view Christ hanging on the cross
And offer repentance for opportunities lost
Before retiring, I would sing an uplifting hymn
By God’s “Amazing Grace,” let eternal life begin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 29, 2011 at 1:25 PM
You have written here very good last wishes.....liked it....
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 6:50 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Walayee Whitlock's contest "If I Only Had 1 Day To Live". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Carolyn. Hope you are well my friend. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 9:45 PM
Carolyn, as usual, a great writing. Congratulations on winning in Walayee's contest with this entry.
Freeman Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 9:23 AM
Beautiful job Carolyn good to see your most worthy poem in the top 10. Congratulations on your poem's honored ninth place. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 8:55 PM
I am sure you haven't waited for your last day to do all of these things Carolyn. Beautiful writing. Love, Joyce
Mannan Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 8:14 PM
Beautiful poetry.Many congratulations
Mehta Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 6:01 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of walayee, Carolyn
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August 16, 2010 at 3:57 PM
Carolyn, this is excellent girlfriend. Congratz
Fraser Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Many congratulations Carolyn on your win in Audrey's fine contest with this Gem >> James
Mitchell Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 2:33 AM
A wonderful winning poem! I especially love the closing line!:)
Mehta Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 8:11 PM
Congrats on your will, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 1:57 PM
Congratulations on you 3rd place in Audrey's contest Carolyn, love Wilma thank you for the congrats on my write ;)
Haick Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 11:46 AM
Hey Seafaress! Thanks for submitting your wonderful work for my first sponsored contest. And though it's kind of late, congratulations on your 3rd Place win. Goes to my favs. Peace, love, Audrey
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July 9, 2010 at 11:13 AM
Well said about self examination. It's a one day at a time process, my dear friend. Carolyn with each day's re-evaluation and examination comes successes, mistakes, joys, regrets, repentance, and renewal. Remembering covenants made to God and striving to be like Christ have great worth. Our daily effort and endurance brings a smile to Heavenly Father's face...and brings us into His grace, through Jesus Christ, now and forever. Thank God for FORGIVENESS...and the road to exaltation. LOVE, Dane
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July 7, 2010 at 6:56 AM
goodness, Carolyn....me and Mom go to Pop's headstone at Fort Snelling Nat'l Cemetery here in town every chance we can.. and visit my Grandparents's graves in LaCrosse Wisconsin ea. summer too....gosh...I am with you on each line in this beauty...hope your journalistic wizardry is lighting a fire under people in Fla.(and DC!) God Bless You, jimbo
Knop Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 2:26 AM
Impressive write, Carolyn! I think I would write a last poem and paint a last picture and of course seeing my family!...Thank you for your comment on Night Flight! Exupéry's plane was discovered some time ago in the Mediterranean but gave no clue to what had happened...Wish you a nice day...Love, Gert
Fraser Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 2:19 PM
It's certainly a day that we will all reach, a last day with my children, whom I have taught, they now teach. Good luck in the contest Carolyn >> James
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July 4, 2010 at 10:21 AM
I have no idea what I would do if told that I had 24 hours left...I know that family that are alive would be first on the list to spend my limited time with..You expressed it well the things that you feel would be important to you to do your last 24 hours..Sara
Amah Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 4:12 PM
... if you were the infant, I would add to it, ‘terrible’! a great flight of the pen ... this is a piece that the critic might be tempted to adjudge “a literary helicopter with the imagination as it natural propeller” ... keep fit! Canny
Amah Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 4:03 PM
... & clean-ups! & an eye at heavenly light ... this is a great theme for my beloved Metaphysical poets, the John Donnes, the Andrew Marvels ... my darling Carol ... for sure, you're rolling high ... keep fit! ... Canny
Anderson Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 8:40 AM
Hey Carolyn, thnx for leaving comments on my piece. Always appreciate your words of encouragement. Love, Jimmy
Neels Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 10:40 PM
Carolyn love your piece on self examination and the wish that we could wrong the rights we committed in life before departing, luv Wilma
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 10:15 PM
this is wonderful, Carolyn, you will surely place high with this tender write, LUv, Andrea
Hilliker Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 9:51 PM
Beautifully written, Carolyn! Self-examination is always a good thing. It leads to personal empowerment. Have a gr8 weekend.
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