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Sea of Stars

glistening half-moon, sea of stars halcyon sky, floating luminous… glittering, bright fireworks burst shattering serene silence ~ June 3, 2022 "Sky In July" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Syllables checked by HMS.com SECOND PLACE

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/18/2022 10:41:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/18/2022 10:12:00 AM

Congratulations on this win. Your "Sea Of Stars" is a beautiful write. I Love This One. Today, be blessed with your win as you are writing away................

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/18/2022 6:28:00 AM

Back with big congrats Mala! Linda

Valsa George

Date: 7/18/2022 2:01:00 AM

Once more to your splendidly portrayed poem ! Mala, Congratulations on your win....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2022 10:51:00 AM

very well done on the imagery, Mala. So glad to see you here with a high placement in my contest. Congrats.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/17/2022 11:16:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. I feel honoured.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/9/2022 6:27:00 AM

Beautiful picture you've painted Mala. All best in the contest! Linda

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/9/2022 6:50:00 AM

Thank you so much, Linda, for your visit and kind comment. Love ~ Mala

Bill Baker

Date: 7/8/2022 5:16:00 PM

Eloquently written, Mala. Another good entry for the contest. Bill

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/9/2022 6:48:00 AM

Dear Poet, thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poems. An incredibly kind gesture, Bill. Truly appreciate your inspiring words.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/5/2022 7:54:00 PM

You have a magic pen dear friend, God bless

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/5/2022 8:21:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Friend. I am fortunate to belong to a community of gifted poets.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/5/2022 6:01:00 PM

This certainly is a 'sky in July!' ... Sometimes the fireworks are manmade, preceding an outburst from the skies (lightning and thunder) -- as we had in Chicago last night. Cheers, gw

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/5/2022 8:20:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Gershon. I had the manmade fireworks of July in mind, but the natural ones shatter the silence too.

Valsa George

Date: 7/4/2022 10:17:00 PM

Sea of stars, halcyon sky, glistening half moon.... what more is needed to make the night celestial.....! Beautiful Tanka! All the Best in the contest Mala !

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/5/2022 8:14:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa. Inspired with your beautiful comment.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 7/3/2022 6:31:00 AM

Mala, this is a night sky in all it's glory! Well doen...good luck in the contest. :)Paulette

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/3/2022 6:34:00 AM

Thank you, Paulette. Your appreciation inspired me.

Karen Jones

Date: 7/3/2022 5:29:00 AM

Nice!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/3/2022 6:33:00 AM

Thanks, Karen.